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New York City

New York City is the largest town in the USA and has the nickname BIG APPLE. Over 8 million people live in New York and over a third was born outside the USA. New York has five boroughs: Manhattan, Brooklyn, Queens, the Bronx and Staten Island. The most important is Manhattan. Manhattan has lots of sights. One of these is Central Park. The Central Park are 5 km long and 800 m across. The Central Park was 1867 open. The Central Park has every Year 25 Million visitor. Popular sports in Central Park are jogging, biking, inline skating, football, baseball and walks. You can there picnic and relax, too. One other sights is Empire State building. It is the highest building in New York City and one of the highest in the world. The Empire state building is 381 meter high and whit the TV tower 449 m. It has 102 floors. New York City has lots of sight, too. The statue of liberty is one of them. It open 1886 and is 93 high. The Statue of Liberty is a symbol of freedom. Another sight is the Brooklyn Bridge. The Bridge is 1,8 km long and 26 m across. It is one of the oldest Bridge in New York. Manhattan and Brooklyn are joined with the Brooklyn Bridge. Everyday 100.000 cars drive over the Bridge. The Brooklyn Bridge was planned by the German American John August Roebling. A sight too is Chinatown. In Chinatown live 200.000 people. The most can little speak and read English. It is a City in New York where only Chinese live. There tourists like to buy souvenirs because it doesn’t cost much.

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California: “Golden state” is a state located on the West Coast of the United States. It is by far the most populous U.S. state and the third most extensive (after Alaska and Texas).The area is 423.970 km² large and the population surrounds 38.100.000 people. It is home to eight of the nation's most populated cities (Los Angeles, San Diego, San Jose, San Francisco, Fresno, Sacramento, Long Beach and Oakland). The capital city is Sacramento. In California, there are 58 countries. California's diverse geography ranges from the Pacific Coast in the west, to the Sierra Nevada mountains in the east—from the Redwood–Douglas-fir forests of the northwest, to the Mojave Desert areas in the southeast. California contains both the highest and lowest points in the United States (Mount Whitney and Death Valley), and has the third-longest coastline of all states (after Alaska and Florida). There are also many nature-parks and beaches. In California there are the spoken languages English and Spanish.

Flag The Bear Flag is the official flag of the state of California. The history of the flag began during the 1846 Bear Flag Revolt and was also known as the Bear Flag. The flag is official since 1911. In the middle of the flag, there is a bear and in the left, there is a star. It’s a sign for freedom.

History The first European explorers who came to the coast as far north as the Russian River was the Portuguese Juan Rodríguez Cabrillo, in 1542, he was sailing for the Spanish Empire. 37 years later the English explorer Francis Drake also explored and concurred a portion of the California coast in 1579. But for the Indians, who lived there before, was the concurred of Cabrillo not good, because most of them died because of the pox.

• 1535 – Hernando Cortez was on a expedition to La Paz and found a small colony there. It fails after a couple of years and the settlers return to the mainland. 1542 - The Portuguese-born sailor, Juan Rodriguez Cabrillo, became the first European to explore California, landing at San Diego on September 28. He went on to discover the Catalina Islands, the sites of San Pedro and Santa Monica and the Santa Barbara Channel Islands. • 1579 - Sir Francis Drake landed north of San Francisco Bay and pronounced the territory as an English territory.

Gold rush

In January 1848, James Wilson Marshall discovered gold while constructing a saw mill along the American River northeast of present-day Sacramento. The discovery was reported in the San Francisco newspapers in March. Some people published this discovery. So everybody wants’ to be rich and try to search gold. But not very much people were lucky in finding gold.

Sights --the first one is the 1.7-mile long Golden Gate Bridge where you can get a panoramic view of the bay and Alcatraz Island. It was build in 1937 and when it was build, it costs 35million dollars. It is the longest and highest suspension bridge in the world. ----the second things, are the famous national parks in California. For exam

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florida referat

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Sports and Recreation

Florida’s climate attracts millions of tourists every year. The famous sports are boating, jogging, water skiing, skin diving, and hunting. In Orlando there are Disney World and Epcot Centre. Sebring and Dayton Beach are famous for car races. Land

Florida is a large peninsula (Halbinsel) which lays between the Atlantic Ocean and the Gulf of Mexico. Florida is a country in the southbound of the USA. The nearby states are Georgia and Alabama. Florida is the 22nd largest state. Flordia’s coastline is 2175km long. In Florida there live 14 million peoples. The capital is Tallahassee. The largest towns in Florida are Miami, Jacksonville and Tampa.

Rivers and lakes Florida has only four big rivers, there are all in the northern part. The largest river is the Apalachicola. The second biggest river is the Suwannee. The two other large rivers are Saint Johns and the Escambia. There are many hundred lakes in the south there’s for example Okeechobee. The south of Florida is covered by swamps and marshes.

Plants The types of plants that grow in Florida often vary greatly. I think one of the most beautiful flowering trees is the royal Poinciana. Palms grow in the southern part of the state. Also orange trees.

Animals In Florida there are many animals. I'll tell you big and small animals but just a few. Big animals are the black bear, wild cat, gray fox, crocodile key deer
and Florida panther . Small animals are rabbit, opossum, and squirrel. Florida has 700 species of fish in the rivers, lakes, and coastal water. Very often are mullet, trout, bass, red snapper, pompano, catfish, Shrimp, lobster, crabs, and clams.

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  1. Washington D.C. is the capital of the United States of America. There is also the government from the USA. The USA consist of 50 states and Washington the Distict of Columbia. Washington D.C. has got an exceptional position and so you can say it belongs to a state.It´s about 180 km” and has got about 575.000 inhabitans. The city is named Washington because the first president was George Washington. The river Potomac, Virginia and Maryland border Washington. There you can find about five universities, this are the famous ones: Georgetown University, established 1975, die George Washington University, established 1821 und die Howard University, established 1867. You also can find many museums, churchs, libarys, theatres and many famous monuments like the “White House”. All presidents of the USA lived in this house. The Capitol is the place for the congresses. This building should be the highest in Washinton D.C. Because of this there are no sky- scrapers. But there are two building which are higher than the Capitol. This is the Washinton Monument ( a monument for their first president) and the tower of the old Post Office. But these buildings where built before they said that the Capitol must to be the highest.
  2. Sights of New York New York has many sights, 500 galerys, about 150 museums, more than 100 theaters, many department stores and more than 17000 restaurantes. The most sights are at Manhattan for example the Fifth Avenue. It is one of the famousest streets of the world. The Figth Avenue is a symbole for the rich New York. There are a lot ofsights for example the Empire State Building, St. Patrick´s Cathedral, York Public Library and so on. Also there are many famouse shops for fashion and cosmetic for exemple Lacost, Armani, Versace and so on.The Empire State Building is on of the famousest sights in New York. It is 433 meters high and is on of the highest buildings in the world. It has 102 sticks. You can come with on of 70 elevators or by foot 1800 steps to the observation platform (aussichtsplatform). Every year came about 3 milion tourists to these buildin. When you appear you can see 100 kilometers far. The Brookly Bridge is the link from Manhattan to Brooklyn. Hundrets of athletes are going every day over it, but also walkers (spaziegänge) cars, busses and motorbiks. It is 1091 meters long. John Roebling had´the idea to build that brige. 1869 they begun to build it and end 1882. The highest building in New York were the world Trade Centers. The Noeth Tower was 417 meter high and the south tower was 415 meters high. But at the 11.September.2004 they were destroyed by a terrorist attack (terroranschlag). Two plains flew betweeen the 78. and zhe 84. stick in the towers then they fell down. 2.819 people died. Now there is the Ground Zero. The Statue of Liberty is 46,5 meters high. Frederic Auguste Bartholdi outlined (entwurf) it. It stands in Bedloe´s Island.

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San Francisco 5minuten englischreferat okay so?

San Francisco, officially the City and County of San Francisco, is the leading financial and cultural center of Northern California and the SF Bay Area. It is the most densely settled large city in the state of California and the second-most densely populated major city in the United States after New York City. with a population of 805,235 people, is San Francisco, after Los Angeles, San Diego and San Jose, the fourth most populous city in California.

SF is located on the West Coast of the United States at the north end of the San Francisco Peninsula and includes significant stretches of the Pacific Ocean and San Francisco Bay within its boundaries. Several islands—Alcatraz, Treasure Island and the adjacent Yerba Buena Island, and small portions of Alameda Island, Red Rock Island, and Angel Island—are part of the city. Also included are the uninhabited Farallon Islands, 27 miles (43 km) offshore in the Pacific Ocean. The mainland within the city limits roughly forms a "seven-by-seven-mile square," a common local colloquialism referring to the city's shape, though its total area, including water, is nearly 232 square miles (600 km2).

The city is famous for ist hills,too. There are exactly 42. Some neighborhoods are named after the hill on which they are situated, including Nob Hill, Potrero Hill, and Russian Hill.

SF (Spanish for "Saint Francis") was founded on June 29, 1776, from spanish colonist.

The climate is influenced by the situation at the Pacific primarily of the northern cold California current. Therefore San Francisco has exceptionally cool and rainless summers and mild and rainy winters. The hotest months are September and oktober.

After NY have SF the biggest Chinatown in the USA, but there are more men than women. There is a high earthquake risk. The worst earthquake was on April 18th, 1906, which killed 3000 People and destroyed 75% of california. Experts fear more earthquakes in the next 30 years, which are so bad as that on 1906

SF is known for it victorian houses,which are build in the middle of the 19. century.But cause o fthe earthquake 1906 the half houses were destroyed, so the price increased about the hundredfold. Near the catrals and museums there are many sightseeings, like the market street, where you can go shopping, or the transamerica pyramid.A 260 metre high scyscrapper with 48 floors.It was build from 1969 to 1972 under the architect william pereia. But the probably popularest sightseeing ist the world-famous golden gate bridge.The architect from the 2,8km long and 25m wide bridge is joseph b strauss. The bridge was completed on April 19th, 1937, and authorized for the traffic officially on May 28th the year.It is the connection between the Pacific Ozean and the San Francisco Bay. And it’s 67m high and 2739m long. In the past many people who have considered to commit suicide, jumped off the Golden Gate Bridge. Nowadays it’s secured with a higher fence.

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Kalifornien-Präsentation nicht lang genug.

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California

Hello! Today I have a small Presentation for you, about California. California also knowed as the golden State, because of the Gold Rush 1848 Is the third biggest state of the USA with 31 Millions inhabitans. He lies at the Pacific and on the border to Mexico. The Flag of California shows a red stripe, a grizzly Bear and a Star. The Bear represents the strenght of CA and the Star represents a nod to Texas. California is a land of contrast. The highest Mountain ( Mount Whitney 4, 418 metres) is only some Miles away from the lowest point on the Western hemisphere in Death Valley, (86 metres below sea level.) The highest mountain of the USA the Mt. Whitney, lies in California. Not far away from Mt. Whitney there are some salty lakes, for example the Mono lake. Nearly 25 percent of the surface of California are covered with desert. In one of the National Attractions for the tourists are beside the film town: Disneyland, San Francisco, the national parks and the endlessly long beaches. In one of the National Parks - the Sequoia Park grows one of the State Symbols: The highest tree , 86 metres tall.

The climate in California is ideal for the cultivation of grapes, oranges, lemons and avocado, cotton, barley, wheat, maize, rice, oat, and sugar beets but there is a little Problem because of the overexploitation the Water disapeers. However, there is also another side of the desert: Great landscapes of salt levels, sand dunes and mountains. To that comes the silence, the lonelyness and the endless distance which makes the desert so fascinating. In 1906 the first earthquake happend in San Fransisco. Most of the City was destroyed. The last big earthquake was in 1989 and its just a question of time that another one could happend. Therefore, alot of scientists are working on improved methods of detecting earthquakes early enough to evacuate the affected area.

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