Referat "Uluru" (in Englisch) - ist dieser Text so ok?
Ich muss in Englisch ein Referat über Uluru halten, ist dieser Text so gut oder sind dort Rechtschreibfehler drinnen, habe ich was Wichtiges vergessen? Mein Lehrer hat gesagt das er dann noch Fragen stellt, habt ihr Ideen, was das für welche sein könnten? Danke danke danke!
Thats the Ayers Rock, a very nice, big and popular rock. He is in the Kata Tjut Nationalpark from Australian. He is 3km long and 348m high. He is 550 Million years old. He was created by the Amadeus Lake and the layers of rock. There was a english-australian explorer, who explor 1873 the rock. He give the name Ayers Rock, because the prime minster was Henry Ayers. Its a holy place for the Aborigines, they say Uluru. Since many thousands of years they thing, there was a people, who was born from the earth. The people got two children. When they died, they become a rock. The Aborigines dont like to see that people climbed the rock. Nobody is allowed to take little rocks, plants or sand. When it is sunrise or sunset he is red, when it rains he is black. In Uluru you can see cavepainting. So you can see Uluru you need 25 AUD to pay. Every year there visited a half million tourists Uluru.
Thats the Ayers Rock, a very nice, big and popular rock. He is Hier fehlt ein Verb. in the Kata Tjut Nationalpark from Australian. He is 3 km (= kilometres) long and 348 m (= metres) high. He is 550 Million years old. He was created by the Amadeus Lake and the layers of rock. There was a
english-australian explorer, who explor (Zeit) 1873 the rock (Word Order).
He give (Zeit) the name Ayers Rock (Ausdruck; kein Komma) because the prime minster (Welcher?) was Henry Ayers.
Its a holy place for the Aborigines, they say (Ausdruck) Uluru. Since (Wort) many thousands of years they thing
kein Komma there was a people (= ein Volk)
, who was born from the earth. The people got (Wort) two children. When they died, they become (Zeit) a rock. The Aborigines dont like to see that people climbed the rock. Nobody is allowed to take little rocks, plants or sand. When it is sunrise or sunset
he is red, when it rains he is black.
In Uluru you can see cavepainting. So you can see Uluru you need 25 AUD to pay (Word Order). Every year (---) visited (Zeit) a half million tourists Uluru. (Satzstellung)
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.
Also am Anfang hast du ziemlich viel "he" drin. Versuch mal lieber die Sätze anderster zu beginnen oder aus zwei einen zu machen. zb " Uluru is an big and popular rock which is also called Ayers Rock."
So hab das Referat gehalten(und vorher nochmal gründlich überarbeitet)! Wenn ich mir das jetzt so durch lese, ist es mir sehr peinlich überhaupt sowas geschrieben zu haben...Danke für eure Tips, vorallem AstridDerPu! Ach ja wenns interessiert mein Lehrer hat gesagt das es ihm gut gefalle hat und ich eine 2 drauf bekomme.
Hallo ich hatte als Hausaufgabe auf eine Summary über die Aborigines zu schreiben und wollte mal fragen ob die so korrekt wäre:
This is a summary about the history of the Aborigines in Australia. Before 1788 the Europeans arrive in Australia the Aborigines live very happy in family groups as hunters, fishermen and gathers. But the Europeans brought new illnesses and shot many Aborigines because they wanted the land where the Aborigines live for their farms. Thats only two reasons for the death of many Aborigines. After 1788 they must live in special areas and half cast children were given to white people to grow up on the ´white´ way. Today Aborigines often discriminated and the Australian Gonverment trying to make the life for Aborigines better.
Wäre echt toll wenn ihr mir sagen könntet ob das so korrekt ist, da ich mir sehr unsicher bin.
Bitte Englisch Referat überprüfen
Hello, today I want to tell you something about the Civil War and the racial discrimination in the USA. There are a few things you have to know to understand how the Civil war could break off. The USA was divided into a northern and a southern part. The northern group of states was high industrialized. The people earned their money in the industry, the bank system was good and they were linked in international trade. The south states were a poor region with a lot of agriculture. The people earned their money with cotton, rice, sugar and corn plantation. In this area, slavery was all-round and it was normal for the population. Another point was, that there were about 21 Million habitants in the north and just 9 million in the south, so the political participation was very difficult for the south states, because they were to less people. In 1860 President Lincoln was elected president without winning a single southern state. Because their political influence was no longer important, the southern states separated from the northern states and voted their own parliament. Because the industrialized north really needed the agricultural products from the south, they declared the war. The northern states said, they attack the south, because they want to free the slaves, but the real reason was, that they want to get their power over the southern states back. This Civil war was cold the first modern war. The army fought with distant because they had impressive rapid-fire weapons. They fought with artillery instead of cavalry. About 600.000 soldiers died in this war. After 4 years won the north against the south and the new government gave former slaves the same rights that white citizens had. This happened for about 50years but there are still acts of racial discrimination in the USA. The biggest reason for this discrimination is the high unemployment rate of the black citizens in the USA. This unemployment make the Blacks to accept low paid jobs which makes this people to the sub layer against. There are a lot of aliens who hadn’t any job. Because they are poor, frustrated and full of pain and aggressive feelings, they commit stealing ore beat people on the street. This makes a lot of white, better educated, people feel scary of this people and this leads to the racial discrimination that you can see in the USA today.
Wer und was könnte das sein?
Ich bekomme andauernd sms von einem unbekannten mit der nummer +50. also mit ist bei nummern nur +49 bekannt. er/sie schickt mir sowas wie 'he king made of the algum trees terraces to the house of the LORD.and to the king's palace, and harps and psalteries for singers: and there were none such see' oder 'When thou prayest, thou shalt not be as hypocrites are: for they love to pray standing in in the synagogues and in the corners of the streets. that they may be' was könnte das sein? und wer?
Kann jemand über meinen Englischtext einmal rüberschauen?
Kann mal jemand über diesen En glischtext drübergucken und ein paar verbesserungsvorschläge dazuschreiben? Wäre echt nett! Achtung: Es ist eine Zusammenfassung!
Wo ich mir besonders unsicher bin - ist fett!
First of all the text presents a few facts about an average Briton. Among other things Tim Wardle occupy himself with the question, if Mr. or Mrs. Average exists in real world. And, if they exist, the author would like to know everything about him and his social environment(soziales umfeld).
First Mr. Wardle collects statistics to find out what is average and what is unaverage. A really important fact which he finds out while his data-recall facility is that the average person hast two children (statistical data: 1.8). He starts to search but for the present he does not find anyone who matches the criteria. But then Tim Wardle finds Army wife. He thinks that she is Mrs. Average but later he finds out that there are things she does which are hardly average. So the author visited the company CACI, because this company knows where which people live and if you give any information they will be able to tell you where the searched people live. Mr. Wardle gives information about an average person and so the company tells him where the average persons live - scilicet in Essex.
For this reason he drives to Essex and continue his quest right there, but again he does not find the Mr. or Mrs. Average. He now is about to give up. But suddenly there is a gleam of hope: National newspapers print Wardles(oder: Wardle´s) questions and in the following days many people contact the author and assure him that they are the average Briton. One of these is Peter Williamson who lives in the outskirts of Swindon where Tim Wardle drove(wohin T.W. (nun) fährt). When he arrives he tried to explain his aim. The married office worker and father of two children is exactly what the author had been looking for all the time.
In the end of the article he recognizes that being average is not bad and boring but a recipe for contentment.
Aborigines referat englisch hilfe
Ich hatte eine frage über die aborigines ich muss dadrüber ein englisch referat halten und das am freitag wir ( wir sind zu 2 ) vortragen und wir haben nicht viel.
das ist unser bissheriger text : The Aborigines are the orginal inhabits of Australia. About 40.000 years ago the Aborigines imigrated from south-east Asia to the new contienent Australia. They spoken about 250 to 300 diffrent languages with 600 diffrent dialects. The native australians lived in aboriginal clans with 50 memebers. Each clan had a place on their land where their spirits returend when they died so they protect these places. The aboriginal mens were custodians (tierhüter), tool maker and hunters.The women took care of the children and fixed their food. _________________________________________________ Wir machen über ihre gefühle, probleme und wie sie leben (früher unnd ein bisschen von heute)
habt ihr irgendwelche tipps oder seiten am besten schnell ,über welche themen sollen wir noch machen in dem bereich wie sie leben z.B religion oder die dreamtime doch leider hab ich davon keine ahnung und währen waffen auch ein guter bereich.?
bittte möglichst schnell helfen lg.