Englischer Report - Grammatik

Sport- Report Hallo, ich wollte mal fragen ob man das als Report sehen kann oder da eher noch was ausbessern sollte...wenn ja, was? Und ob alles in der Grammatik richtig ist?!

The match from Friday... FCC-Jena beat Erfurt 3-1 in the final match of the year. The match was in Jena /Thüringen, on the 3. March. Jena plays better, because Erfurt was slow and 'sleeping'. But Jena was really good, they were fast and they plays good passes. The most players of Erfurt were bad today. That was the reason, why Erfurt lost. The final score at the end was very good for Jena, because they wan.

LG Lilliru :D

Answer 1

[AstridDerPu]

Hallo,

hier meine Korrekturen:

The match on Friday... FCC-Jena beat Erfurt 3-1 in the final match of the season. The match was in Jena/Thüringen, on 3rd March (gelesen: on the third of March). Jena played better (kein Komma) because Erfurt was slow and 'sleeping'. But Jena was really good, they were fast and they played good passes. Most Erfurt players were bad today. That was the reason (kein Komma) why Erfurt lost. In the end, the final score was very good for Jena(kein Komma) because they won.

:-) AstridDerPu

Comments

[Lilliru]

vielen, vielen dank

[AstridDerPu]

@Lilliru

Schön, dass dir meine Antwort gefallen hat. Hoffentlich hat's geholfen.

Danke für das Sternchen!

:-) AstridDerPu

Answer 2

[ly1998]

ganz gut; Zeile 3: > and they plays good passes< muss played heißen; Zeile 5: > they wan < muss won heißen sonst ok. lg ly