Englisch Vorteile und Nachteile vom berphmt sein!
Hey,
also ich habe hier Vor- und Nachteile über das berühmt sein geschrieben auf Englisch. Ich möchte nur das ihr schaut ob es mit der Grammatik und dem Satzbau so passt. Rechtschreibfehler müsst ihm mir nicht sagen :) Danke schon mal im Voraus.
On the one hand it is beautiful to be famous because you have much money and you can afford you everything. Secondly you're in the Center Point and everyone likes you except some. But on the other hand you don't have privacy, they know everything about you. You have to life in fear because there always people who are jealous on you. You don't can go out of the house and go somewhere without that someone recognize you. The magazines perhaps write something about you such as "Oh my good the plastic surgery went wrong" and you have to read it and can't say anything because they are allowed to write something like that. And finaly in most cases famous people access to drugs because they can't withstand the pressure anymore.
Andreeeea
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On the one hand it is beautiful to be famous because you have much money and you can afford everything. Secondly you're in the Center Point and everyone likes you except some. But on the other hand you don't have privacy, they know everything about you. You have to live in fear because there are always people who are jealous of you. You can't go out of the house and go anywhere without that someone recognize you. The magazines perhaps write something about you such as "Oh my good the plastic surgery went wrong" and you have to read it and can't say anything because they are allowed to write something like that. And finaly in most cases famous people will start to do drugs because they can't withstand the pressure anymore.
So, ich hoffe ich habe alle Fehler erwischt :)
Hey Danke. Aber bei dem letzten Satz habe ich eine Frag weil mir das irgendwie was nicht passt. Ich hätte da nämlich dann hingeschrieben And finaly in most cases famous People will start to take drugs
grammatikalisch ist "do drugs" richtig, so komisch es auch klingt
an sich gut, aber ich würde im ersten Satz nicht beautiful schreiben, das ist merkwürdig, besser wäre nice, great etc. Und es heißt "someone recognizes you", wobei der Satz an sich besser klingen würde mit "You can't go anywhere without someone recognizing you". Anstatt "such as" würde ich "like" nehmen, und es ist god, nicht good. Und Finally mit doppel-L, und ja, "take drugs" :)