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Könnte jemand bitte über meinen Text über Martin Luther King Jr. drüber schauen? Vor allem, was die Grammatik und die Informationen angeht. Wäre sehr lieb, danke! Martin Luther King Jr. was born in Atlanta, so in Georgia on 15th of January in 1929. He was an important person in the past since he was the leader of the African American civil rights movement and peace movement. He fought for the rights of both African Americans and white Americans after the civil war. Furthermore, he said that he had a dream and this speech has influenced the government of the U.S. because he wanted to reach the goal that every human should have the same rights. He organized a march on Washington to protest against the rights of blacks. He even won a nobel prize in 1964 as he did it that both African American and white Americans have had the same rights. Sadly, he was shot in the Lorraine hotel in Memphis on 4th of April in 1964 which is part of a American civil rights museum now. The Martin Luther King day is celebrated every third Monday in January now.

Englisch Argument gut?

Wie findet ihr meine Argumentation. Ich freue mich über eine Bewertung. Aufgabe: Never mary someone your parents didn't approve of. Do you agree? Living a life with full of love is maybe one of the most important things in life. Especially then, when you find your biggest love, the person with whom you want to spend the rest of your life. But in many cultures this doesn't work like that. For example in India, the parents get to decide who their child will marry. By that the question arises, if parents should approve a marriage. Firstly, a marriage doesn't just happen. If two people want to engage, they think about it. That's also the reason that some couples break up with each other. They realize that love doesn't mean mean the same for them, e.g. they think differently about love. Just like parents do. They come from a different timeline. Oftenly they're 20 to 30 years older than their child which leads to the matter of fact that their mindset is completely different, than their childs. By asking the parents for approve, you will not get a correct answer because you're the only one who knows, what's the best for you and who fits you the most. Secondly, as time goes on we get older. By that we have to take responsibility for our choices. In order to do that, we have to choose between things and decide. Marriage is such a choice. If somebody can't decide, wether he/she wants to marry its partner or not, then he has to rethink his/her love life, but asking the parents (or others) is immature because you do not take responsibility. If can't decide, then I'm not ready for marriage. To sum up, asking the parents for approval is wrong. It's only you who can make the right decision, who can decide, what's important for him/her and what's not and if she/he is really the right one.