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blackwoolf 10.november 2022, 7pm
Live with friend is better then without.
Do you have best friends? Friends are really important for your life. For example they can be there for you when you aren’t happy or when you are in trouble. But you should also do that for them. So, are you a quiet nice and helpful person? No? Then you should change your life, otherwise you won‘ t be have people who are there for you.
Your problem isn’t to be nice or helpful? Maybe you don’t know how to start a contact or conversation? Don‘ t worry, it was exactly the same for me. And today i have many best friends. I think important is that you live as you are and don’t change your character to fit in a friends group. Stay as you are! You also can start a conversation with new people to talk about the same hobbies or interests.
If you have found some friends you should be there for them. I think a friendship isn’t be a good friendship if one person isn’t there for the other. So if you have found your best friend be nice to them, don’t lie, be there for them and spend a lot of time with them.
So don’t stay alone anymore, go out and find your best buddies.
Perfekt, vielen Dank!