Stellungnahme Rassismus?

Leute, ich muss eine Stellungnahme (Comment) auf englisch schreiben. Die Einleitung habe ich schon und meine Argumente dafür (ich muss auch die pro Seite machen, also kommt jz nicht mit ,,WAS wie für Rassismus??” xD) und dagegen auch. Jz bin ich beim Hauptteil, aber ich habe echt keine Ahnung wie ich das jz beginnen soll. Einfach die Argumente aufzählen oder wie?? Ich weiß, dass ich vom schwächsten hin zum stärksten Argument muss. Aber ich kann doch nicht einfach so “the first aspect against racism is XY” sagen😂

Meine Argumente:

Pro: • taking care of your own people
       • nationalism
       • unity & peace in the state
       • preservation of culture and language
       • more jobs for local people
       • prevention of the mixture of different
         ethnic people
       • xenophobia

Contra: • violation of human dignity
             • oppression of a minority
             • wars
             • enmity
             • slavery
             • civil wars
             • slavery
             • uprisings
             • segregated communities -> ghettos
             • inhumanity

2 Antworten

mendrup

01.12.2018, 22:18

Slavery kommt 2x. Und ja, Du kannst unter der Überschrift zu Teil 2 direkt einsteigen. These - Antithese - Synthese, wie im Deutschen. Lass Dich nicht verleiten, eigene Meinungen in Teil 1 und 2 einzubringen, das machst Du unter 3.

xxlovelygurlxx

Fragesteller

01.12.2018, 22:51

Hä ich bin verwirrt.. Das ist so schwer.. Welches Argument wäre denn deiner Meinung nach das schwächste? Uff..

mendrup

01.12.2018, 22:55

@xxlovelygurlxx

Das, was heute und in Zukunft am wenigsten Menschen betrifft. So gesehen vielleicht slavery als historischen Einstieg.

KssdbyFire

01.12.2018, 22:21

Wie wärs, wenn du schreibst "im folgenden werde ich argumente gegen und für rassismus nennen und erörtern" oder "nun wird zu verschiedene argumente für und gegen Rassismus stellung genommen"

Also "in the following part..." oder eben "there are many arguments againsg and for racism.."

xxlovelygurlxx

Fragesteller

01.12.2018, 22:50

Hatte ich davor schon. Dann hat ‘ne Freundin gemeint, dass es so besser sei xD

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Ist dieser Comment gut (sollte die Monarchie in der UK abgeschafft werden)?

The monarchy system is a hot topic in the UK, is it useful for the country or is it just for the show. Opinions often differ here, because there are many arguments pro and against this system. But what is the right answer.

On the one hand the Royal Family which is given by this system personifies the state and British nation, which represent it more human. Due to this more human presentive the people will be more connected to the government because many of the civilians got a member of the Royal Family as an idol which is also fine in view of the fact they exemplify British values like good manners, good style and honesty. Furthermore, by keeping this system, we also keep a part of history alive owing to the fact that the monarchy is no longer a widely used system.

On the other hand, there are many arguments against a monarchy system: It’s a life long burden for anyone who gets born into this, which is also against the spirit of democracy because their role is not earned but inherited. Additionally, they don’t have any power and are mainly there for the public eye, but this gets worse by the fact that if a member of the Royal Family does something wrong, the whole state will be ashamed and it will damage the national image of Britain. On top of that, you know the big palaces, the expensive cars and their wealth? This comes partly from slavery, oppression and discrimination.

All in all, you can say that the monarchy system has many reasons to be abolished but also many benefits. From my perspective it should be abolished, because it’s simply a show and doesn’t do anything for the country in a financial or lucrative way, furthermore we know that other countries like Germany has also a working system which doesn’t waste money for an unqualified family.

(Bitte schreibt mir Verbesserungsvorschläge)

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Wie bildet man participle constructions?

kann jemand mir mal die ersten 2-3 Sätze ins participle umsetzen? Bloß damit ich weiß wie man den restlichen Text löst.
im besten Falle vllt auch kurz erklären? Wenn nicht auch okay

Komme da leider gerade nicht weiter

danke im Voraus

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Racism

Wie findet ihr den Text? Was ist gut/schlecht? Welche Note würdet ihr setzen? Welche Grammatikfehler sind häufig?

Still 250 years racism

A women left the lift when you enter, a man whit his child change his place when you come, and you are advised to go to a cheaper restaurant when you enter a luxurious restaurant. That are examples of daily racism in the United States of America. But is not this racism situation come better after the first black president of United Stated was elected? It is a well-known fact, that the racism is a problem in USA. It began with the slavery. But the slavery is really not the explanation for the start of racism. The racism is a result of the politic in this time. There the white governments saw that the white people are more worth. So they changed the relationship between the white workers who has worked with the slaves and the black people. From this day the white people were the owner of the slaves. This period of racism was finished after the civil war in the 19 century. Than the period of the racial segregation began. In that time the black people were not slaves anymore but they were only humans of the second (ore bellower) class. During this time it gave a lot of arbitrary murder through the FBI and other government security organizations. That might explain the bad relationship between black people and the police. Nowadays it still gives murder to black people for example the murder in Ferguson, the murder to the 17-years old Tyson or the murder to an kiosk owner in New York. In all these instances the murderer are police mans, all victims are innocent and all murderer are not made guilty. Furthermore in statistics the black peoples are poorer, more unemployed and it gives thrice black people in prison than white people despite just 25 percent of the Americans are black.

Although this facts it gave a development. But it will be a long way, and it seems to me that it will last as long as the slavery and the racial segregation. Maybe in someday the dream of Martin Luther King will be reality: “It will give a world, where little black boys and girls and little white boys and girls can held hands.

Danke

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Comment Writing Klausur?

Das Großthema ist Rassismus und solche Dinge.

Das ist die These:

Should symbols of white supremacy be in public spaces?

(auf Deutsch.: Sollten Symbole der weißen Vorherrschaft in der Öffentlichkeit sein?)

Welche 3 Argumente würden dafür sprechen und welche 3 dagegen?

Ein Argument hätte ich, wenn es stimmt: Es sind Erinnerungen/Monumente aus der Vergangenheit und man sie deshalb nicht entfernen sollte. Was wäre hierfür aber ein Beipiel?

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Englischer Text über Irland , ist er gut? Seht ihr noch Fehler? :

Ireland,is an island surround of the Atlantic Ocean. Its capital is Dublin.Ireland is divided into two parts , the bigger one, the Republic of Ireland and the other one Norhern Ireland which belongs to the United Kingdom. Ireland also will be called "the Esmerald Isle" by tourists because there are so many green spaces. People love the idyllically hilly countryside which offers national parcs, lots of animals like sheep and beautiful beaches and lakes. Tourists can also discover the unique countryside by bike or on foot, but it's useful to take along an umbrella because it is often raining. People call Ireland either "Celtic Tiger" because its economy is booming. I believe, most inhabitants speak English than main language , I think ,irish will be only spoken by a minority. On top of that I think there are more catholics than protestants there. Above all Ireland is famous for its music and dances, typical instruments are the fiddle, the flute and the harp. A symbol, typical of the Island is the clover. In the end I still wanna add tourists can reach the Island by plane and by ship. Bitte niht löschen und Dane für Tips !!!

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Englisch Text korrigieren Irland?

Hey, kann wer diesen Text kontrollieren?

The Republic of Ireland is a member of the EU, but Northern Ireland is a part of the United Kingdom (UK).

The capital of the Republic of Ireland is Dublin. The capital of Northern Ireland is Belfast.

The Irish people are hospitable fun-loving and helpful.

The official languages are English and Irish. But only about 100,000 people speak Irish fluently.

Most of the Irish people in the Republic are Catholics. The national Saint of Ireland is St. Patrick.

For many centuries the Irish people fought against the British. Many Irish people were killed in the fights.

In the middle of Dublin, you can find a great park called the “Phoenix Park”. The “Trinity college” is a great university in Dublin.

Their country is clean and green, with beautiful lakes and rivers. Ireland is a beautiful country.

Best wishes,

Name

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Ist meine Lösung für die Englisch Aufgabe auch richtig?

Ich sollte den Satz

They showed Luis round the movie studios.

und

They gave the people on the t our lots of information

in das personal passive umwandeln.

In den Lösungen steht:

Luis was shown round the movies / The people on the tour were given lots of information

und ich habe folgendes geschrieben:

The movie studios are showedround to Luis / Lots of information are given to the people on the tour

Sind meine Antworten ebenfalls korrekt oder falsch?

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Royal Flying Doctors Service----

           Royal Flying Doctors Service

The Royal Flying Doctors Service or short RFDS is a health care service for people in Australia who live in the outback. It is a not- for- profit organisation which provides health care to people who are unable to access a hospital or general practice because of the vast distances of the Outback. They come by plane and help the people or in many cases they also provide telephone or radio medical advice to them. RFDS is working 24 hours the whole year. The Royal Flying Doctor Service supports virtually all low populated areas of Australia. It can arrive each person of Australia within two hours. It has 53 planes at 21 bases across the country. Almost thousand people work there, a professional team. They using the latest in aviation, medical and communications technology, it has four operational sections, South Eastern, Central, Western and Queensland. Each section has a number of bases. Royal Flying Doctors Service helps people for over 80 years. The first flight was 1928. They supported by the Commonwealth, State and Territory Governments. The donations will be used in several ways to help the thousands of people who live, work and travel in Australia. People who are not affirmed must pay for treatment themselves. People who are affirmed don’t have to pay for treatment themselves.

ist das so richtig geschrieben? vielen dank im voraus!!!

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Diagramm beschreiben?

Würdet ihr was an meinem Text verbessern?

Aufgabe: Describe the diagram on page 53.

Das Diagramm + Hilfen:

Meine Beschreibung: The following chart is a line graph and was published by the "California Department of Finance, U.S. Census Burreau". The line graph is about the population of California and shows in percent the future population/cultural shift in the years 2010 to 2060 with the four groups: Latino, White, Asian and Black.

Most people are white, 40 percent in 2010, but the number of whites drops steadily. 33 percent in 2030 and 29.7 percent in 2060. The next largest group, with slightly fewer people, are Latinos, 38 percent in 2010, but the number of Latinos goes up steadily. 44 percent in 2030 and 48 percent in 2060. A minority of the population is Asian in 2010 at 12 percent, but the number will doesnt change at around 13.4 percent until 2060. The biggest minority of the population is Black in 2010 at 3 percent, but the number will doesnt change at around 4,3 percent until 2060.

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Cartoon analysis?

MESSAGE:

The painter of the cartoon is making clear that the people in the picture are immigrants from different countrys, which you can notice by their looks and they are all learning english in a classroom which you can also see by the poster on the upper left corner. The author of the cartoon makes also clear that there are many people from different country‘s where english is spoken in their own way of talking. There are so many accents, slang words which can make it difficult to understand a person from another country. The uncomfortable athmosphere and the confused looks of the people in the picture symoblizes that they all can‘t understand each other. The boy who is holding a poster is a example for the different accents of english. He is from Glasgow and his english is incomprehensible for the teacher and that‘s the reason why he is assigned to the course.

kann man hier noch was wichtiges dazu schreiben?

und könnt ihr mich bitte verbessern?

danke schön!

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Englisch Text durchschauen?

Hallo! Ich glaube mal dass ich bei meinem Text einige Fehler sind aber ich komm leider nicht so richtig auf die Fehler vor allem bei der Einleitung… kann mir jemand behilflich sein?

“Hollywood” is known for two names: Geographically for being the neighbourhood of the city of Los Angles, but also being the biggest American film industry. Among them, people imagine beautiful movie stars, wealth, luxury and of course lavish films. But how much effort and work goes into it and above all, is it even worth working there?

Basically, Hollywood tells the story of a group of young people who all share the same dream: to become an actor. But why do more and more people want to become Hollywood stars in their younger years? Nowadays in a movie career, the younger people start becoming an actor, then better chances can they get to be perceived, because many directors and producers know that at a young age, a “pretty face” will sell big time in movies. The biggest guilt is mostly in the film industry self.

Actually, how do people even get a part in a movie? It takes a lot of time, hard work and patience. Beginners would start with small rolls and then wait for large ones. The best way to act is to have your own way of acting and it should be different from others to get noticed. Acting is not difficult, if you get more and more practice. It also depends on the person, on the experience and on the level of the acting.

To conclude, a movie carrier includes advantages and disadvantages. For example, being famous as an actor you can get more money and be admired by fans. Though people only see glamorous parts of the fame, they don't see the ugly side of it: All of the lies, the depression, periods of loneliness and somehow, stars would want to b anonymous again.

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Kann jemand gut Englisch und diesen kurzen Text überlesen?

Hey, ich muss meiner Lehrerin einen Comment schreiben, per email. Hab da noch was dazu geschrieben. Wär nice wenn das jemand der gut englisch spricht das durchliest und mir sagt, ob es Fehler gibt/man was verbessern könnte und die Email angemessen für einen Lehrer ist.

Dear Mrs. , I was not sure if you wanted us to write the comment just about that text in the book (with a introduction and details about the text). So I just wrote my opinion down on that topic and included some of the arguments in the text.

Writing a comment – Young people in a multifaceted society

Many people think that our generation is anti-social, lazy and always on their phone. That might be true in some cases, but you can’t stereotype everyone just because of some people. Like every generation, there are lots of different kids and kind of people. There are extremes in every way. Teenagers steal, take drugs, don’t go to school and commit crimes, but also learn everyday more, get good grades, volunteer or work for charities, want to try new things and take part in demonstrations.

In every generation you can find similar people, but others describe and see us the way the mass acts. Most of us are insecure and don’t know how to deal with changes, their life in general and the expectations of their parents, families and friends. We are trying to grow up like every human before us, questioning our existence, purpose and matter of life.

The Internet, (social) media and the digitalisation in general make these questions particularly important. We have the opportunity to share our opinion with a great mass, but we also can influence them and in reverse, without us noticing it.

Such a conflict is new to humanity, there might be similarities to other problems in worlds history but we don’t know where to set limits or make rules for it. We are unsure about what is wrong and what is right, especially in this case, so many people don’t know what to think about a lot of important topics. Some try to make things legit, using the arguments (of different philosophies). They don’t think or even care about nature, animals or humans, their lives or rights. Since generations we are destroying the earth and taking all the resources, not caring about the people that will be born in the future and will have to deal with all the trouble and problems that we caused.

That sounds pretty pessimistic, but it’s the truth. In my opinion, the only main things improving with our generation and what we are changing right now are discrimination, sexism, racism and so on. Maybe we are far away from getting equality and the same (human) rights for everyone in the world, but at least we have the luck to be in the position to have a good(?) education and the access to a massive amount of information (Internet, library, school). (geht weiter in den Antworten)

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Englisch simple present passive?

Hallo ich brauche dringend Hilfe in Englisch.Es wäre nett wenn Menschen die sich damit auskennen antworten würden.Die Form steht schon oben.

Beispielsatz:1.In Scotland,the last day of the year is called Hogamany.

1.In Scotland,people call the last day of the year Hogamany.

2.At midnight,they ring bells ant sett of fireworks.

3.Then people hold hands and sing `Auld LangSyne`.

Danke für jede Antwort

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