Englisch Summary, Text 2
Hey Community,
ich weiß nicht ob ich das überhaupt darf oder ob die Frage hier jetzt gelöscht wird, weil ich ein zweiten Text wiederholt als Frage stelle.
Ich hatte schon vorhin ein Text hier aufgestellt damit ich meine Fehler verbessern kann, was ich jetzt wiederholt mit den zweiten Text mache.
Ich hab hier versucht die Fehler zu verbessern, die ich bei dem anderen Text hatte, naja ich habs versucht sag ich mal.
Hier der Text:
The text " Girls fight for their rights" written by an unknown Autor and published in the year 1997, deals with a girl who fights for her rights, to get the respect from the boys and to accept her as a girl doing the sport wrestle.
Ashley Moore,18 years old, is a wrestle girl who fights against boys. At first she gets discriminated by people,because she is the only one girl who fights against boys. A boy from her schools biggest rival challenges her to fight against him.First she gets bullied and disrespected, but she dont listens to the jokes about her. After she wins the fight after a couple of minutes, the boys starts to respect her and the bullies and jokes about her stops. She got the equality for what she fights hard.
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The text "Girls fight for their rights" written by an unknown author and published in the year 1997, deals with a girl who fights for her rights to get respect and appreciated for her passion for wrestling.
Ashley Moore, 18 years old, is a wrestle girl who fights against boys. At first she gets excluded by some people, because she is the only girl who fights against boys. A boy from her school, her biggest rival, challanges her to fight against him. First she gets bullied and disrespected, but she doesn't listen to the jokes about her. Eventually she wins the fight after a couple of minutes. The boys start to respect her and the bullying against her stops. No one makes fun about her anymore.
She received the equality for her effort.
The text " Girls fight for their rights" written by an unknown Autor and published in (the year) 1997 kein Komma deals with a girl who fights for her rights kein Komma
to get the respect from the boys and to accept her as a girl doing the sport wrestle.
Ashley Moore,18 years old, is a wrestle girl who fights against boys. At first Komma she gets discriminated Hier fehlt eine Präposition by people kein Komma because she is the only (---) girl who fights against boys. A boy from her schools
biggest rival ??? challenges her to fight against him.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.
:-) AstridDerPu
First Komma she gets bullied and disrespected, but she dont listens to the jokes about her. After she wins the fight after a couple of minutes, the boys starts to respect her and the bullies and jokes about her stops. She got (---) equality for what she fights hard.
Hey alban1
dritte Person Plural hat im Präsens kein s am Schluss, demnach müsste es "the boys start" und "the jokes about her stop" heissen. Ich würde "the sport wrestle" einfach mit "wrestling" ersetzen. "she is the only girl" "she doesn't listen" "for which she fought hard" -> fights wäre Präsens, du schreibst aber vorne im Satz in der Vergangenheit!
only one girl wäre doppelt, sag nur the only girl her biggest rival she doesn't nicht don't She has received equality because she has fought hard. Hoffe es hilft.
Das müsste dann "to get respected" heissen, sonst find ich dein Vorschlag sehr gut!