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Ghandi was born on October 2nd 1869 in Porbandar, India (Ort vor Zeit). He was an Indian lawyer, resistance fighter, revolutionary and pacifist.

In May 1883, (---) 13-year old Mohandas was married to 14-year old Kasturba. In 1885, when Gandhi was 15, the couple's first child was born, but survived only a few days.

(Hier fehlt eine Präposition) 1888, less than a month shy of his 19th birthday, Gandhi traveled (= AE; BE = travelled) to London, to study law at University College London. Gandhi served in and lead an Ambulance Corps Unit in both the Boer War 1899-1892 and the Zulu War of 1906.

(Hier fehlt etwas.) Beginning of the 20th century (Komma) Gandhi has worked (Zeit; Wort) in South Africa against segregation. In 1910 he developed (Wort) in India to the political leaders of the independence movement (Word Order). Gandhi urged the human rights of women and he advocated the reconciliation between Hindus and Muslims.

In 1915, Gandhi returned from South Africa to live in India. He built his Harijan Ashram and lived from 1918 to1930 there (Word Order). He called for non-violent resistance. The Indians retreated so back from the public. They understood the way and made him to it. In 1930 (Komma) he called for a saltmarsh and calls for the control of the food abolish.

On August 15, 1947 (Komma) India attained independence. Since the country was divided into two states, the freedom fighter went on a hunger strike. Since (Wiederholung) no one wanted the death of him peace was concluded. Without Gandhi would the peace never had closed. The action broke hatred of him and many people were suddenly against him.

A madman who felt Gandhi guilty shot him on January 30, 1948. Gandhi died.

The world celebrating him as a model and national heroes.

Bin gespannt und danke im Vorraus.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

Die Fakten habe ich nicht überprüft.

AstridDerPu

Wer ist Ghandi?

less than a month shy of his 19th birthday ergibt keinen Sinn.

he developed in India to the political leaders of the independence movement ist auch sinnfrei. Meinst Du became a leading figure in the independence movement?

The Indians retreated so back from the public. They understood the way and made him to it. In 1930 he called for a saltmarsh and calls for the control of the food abolish.  Das klemmt vorne und hinten, und was soll abolish hier heißen?

death of him kann man unmöglich sagen. His death.

peace was concluded. Without Gandhi would the peace never had closed.  Hmm, conclude heißt „einen Schluß ziehen“ und close heißt „zusperren“. Beides paßt überhaupt nicht. Peace can be agreed on, and fighting can cease.

A madman who felt Gandhi guilty Woran soll Gandhī schuld gewesen sein? In jedem Fall paßt guilty nicht gut, responsible wäre besser.

Der letzte Satz hat kein finites Verb.

Meines Erachtens ist der Text schlüssig und mit einer guten Struktur :)

okay.. Dankeschön :) 

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Kann ich diese Zusammenfassung zum Buch The bottle Imp so lassen?

Hallo, ich weiß nicht, ob ich diese Zusammenfassung so stehen lassen kann! Es wäre nett, wenn ihr vielleicht mal schauen könntet, ob ich irgendwie Zeitfehler oder ähnliches drin habe .

summaryKeawe an Hawaiian, decided to go to San Francisco. There he noticed one beautiful house and stopped at it .Then the owner of the home came to him. Keawe said to the owner that he would like to have so a house, too. And so the owner meant, that he could have a house for 50 dollars when he bought a bottle with an Imp which fulfilled all his wishes . So Keawe bought this bottle. The owner of this bottle musn´t be in possession of it when he dies or his sole will burn in hell . It must sell cheaper than the owner has paid before. Keawe went to his friend Lopaka, and told him all what had done and everything about the bottle. Then they went together back to Hawaii. Upon arriving home Keawe discovered that his uncle had died and that he had left him a beautiful land at Hookena and exactly enough money to build the home of his dreams. Then Lopaka bought the bottle because keawe didn´t want this bottle anymore. Keawe accepted the good fortune and began living a life of contentment with a house of his dreams . Until he saw a beautiful woman names, Kokua. They wanted to marry. Then the rich Hawaiian went home and saw, that he had Chinese evil. He realized, that he couldn´t marry Kokua in this condition, so he decided that he had to find the magic bottle and must buy it back. Only doing this he become healthy and could marry his love. When he was back in San Francisco a white man had this bottle. But Keawe realized , that the price had dropped dramatically. The owner had paid two cents. Keawe decided that he will marry Kokua and so he bought the bottle for one cent. He wished that he is healthy. Now the Chinese evil was healded, but he always thought at this, that he can´t sell the bottle cheaper an that he must go to hell when he die. Then Keawe married Kokua. He told Kokua all from the beginning and said that he can´t sell the bottle cheaper then one cent. Then Kokua said that they had to go to a country where a penny is not the lowest coin. They went to an Island of France and sold the bottle for four centimes there. Then Kokua bought the bottle from her man with the help of an old man. She told the old man the whole story and that she will buy it back from him after he had bought it. The man bought it for four centime and she bought it for three back. Keawe discovered this and convinces another man to buy it for two centime with the promise, that Keawe will buy it back from him for one centime. The man who shall bought it for Keawe is a greedy and wicked man and as he had the bottle he wouldn´t sell it to Keawe. The wicked man didn´t care that he went to hell, because with this bottle he could wish himself everything he wanted. Now Keawe and Kokua are free and nobody of them must go to hell when he dies.

danke im vorraus lg

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Kann mir jemand dieses summary von "A message from the Pig-man" korrigieren?

habe eine summary zum text a message from the pig-man von john wain geschrieben, wäre nett wenn ihr eure meinung dazu äußern würdet und ggf fehler verbessern könntet oder zumindest sagen, wo sie sind :)

The story „A Message from the Pig-man“, written by John Wain, is about a 6-year old boy named Eric, which has many questions he would like to ask but is afraid to do so.

Eric is the son of newly divorced parents. He has no siblings and his mum has a new boyfriend named Donald. He has difficulty with the new circumstances and does not understand why his father had to leave just because Donald moved in. He also does‘nt mind sharing his room in order for his dad to have the spare room. He is afraid of the pig-man and avoids him. He imagines the pig-man as a man who looks like a pig. One day, his mother asks him to catch the pig-man to bring him the scarps. First he was afraid, but when he sees the pig-man he realizes that the pig-man is a normal person and finally understands that the people call him pig-man, because he has some pigs that he looks after. Eric is no longer afraid of asking questions. When he comes home, he asks his mother why his father can‘t stay with them but his mother does‘nt answer him. Now he thinks that grown-ups are very silly and he hates them all.

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Kann mir wer diese englische Zusammenfassung korrigieren?

`The Absolutely True Diay of a part time Indian´ is the abridged adapted version from the novel by Sherman Alexie and is about an Indian Boy. who is going on a all-white-school In the first paragraph, Arnold is flirting with Penelope. She is telling him her dreams, but Arnold laughing at her. He is asking her, what she really want to do with her life. Then she´s telling him, her real dreams. She´s wanting to be a architect. Arnold doesn´t lauhging at her, because it´s his drem too.

In the second paragraph Arnold and Penelope are going with roger and his friends to a diner. He is ordering many things for Penelope and him. But he is sad, because he haven´t money. He is poor. As Arnold going to the toilett, he tells Roger that he has forget his wallet, but Arnold is lying. Roger is understanding and lending him the money. At the school Penelope telling him, that she´s knwoing that he has lending money from roger. She´s asking him, whether he is poor and he didn´t lying to her. Penelope telling it roger and he helping him in the future. Now Arnold knowing that he doesn´t need to lie.

Danke schonmal im vorraus,

Mylania

Ps: Die Aufgabe war ein Text zusammenzufassen und das in der Jetzt Form

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