Schreibe morgen Englisch Schularbeit, brauche Hilfe?

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also gut dann schau ich mal drüber ;)

-Today i will tell you SOMETHING about...

- as you know fiteen years ago ... (ohne das "for") (außerdem würde ich den satz anders beginnen und nicht mit "as you know", zum beispiel so: Fifteen years ago google was a ...)

- im dritten satz solltest du an den anfang ein "today" stellen -> "Today there are..." , dann solltes du an das "many social media" -> "web sites" anhänngen

- dann der 4. satz: machs lieber so -> "I think social media can be used to meet people and ..."

- schau der die satzanfänge der letzen 4 sätze an: Immer nur "I", schau ob du da noch was ändern kannst

Viel glück morgen

Today I will tell you (Hier fehlt etwas.) about (---) social media. As you know (Komma) (---) fifteen years ago Google was a small web search engine and Facebook didn’t exist. (Satzstellung)

There are so (Wort) many social media (Komma) for example Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, and so on. I think social media can get to know people and be friends with them (Das ergibt keinen Sinn.). I personally only (Position) use Instagram (kein Komma) because you can only (s. o.) post photos and videos in Instagram. It is used by 150 million people. If you are bored, I think that social media is well suited.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

AstridDerPu

Ich habe es etwas umgeschrieben da ich es persönlich so besser finden würde (Selbstverständlich bin ich kein Lehrer was bedeutet das einige Sachen trotzdem falsch sein können und ich Sachen "verbessert" habe die in ordnung waren):

Today I want to tell (oder I'm going to tell you) you something about the social media. As you know fifteen years ago Google was a small web search engine and Facebook didn’t exist. There are so many different social media for example Facebook, Instagram, Twitter. I think social media gives you an opportunity to get to know people and perhaps become friends with them. Personally I only use Instagram, because you can only post photos and videos on it. 150 million people use this app. I think that social media is well suited, If you are bored.


Hoffe ich konnte dir helfen.

Englisch Oberstufe: summary über "keeping In Touch"

Ist meine summary so korrekt und gut? The Article keeping in Touch written by James Smith and published in Year 2014, deals with the most important aspects of keeping in touch. Today You can't more think away of the technology and the Internet. We use it everyday for business and of course for talking together to keep in touch with your friends and families. So with your smartphone you can Talk with your Friends and naturally write text messagers like whatsapp whenever and whereever you are. This ist a great think and its to easy but also fast. Overall we can day that the Internet has gone portable. Anyway you can communicate with your friends via Social Networks Sites and can send or Share photos,messages and of course if you want Gombe closer you can do Phone falls like Face to Face. Finale with Smartphones,tablets and the Social Media Networking Sites you can alyways keep in Touch with your Friends.

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Englisch, Argumentation, Verbessern?

Hallo, ich schreibe morgen eine Arbeit und habe schon ein paar Argumentationen geschrieben. Heute hat meine Lehrerin einen Hinweis auf das Thema gegeben: Volunteer work. Ich habe dann einfach mal eine Argumentation dazu geschrieben. Wahrscheinlich kommt nicht nur Volunteer work dran, aber es wäre toll, wenn ich schon eine gute Grundlage habe. Ich weiß das ich bestimmt ein paar Grammatische Fehler habe.

Volunteer work is a important for the poor, disadvantaged groups or teenagers (youth centre) or generel the society, but also people don't like this kind of work, why? Is volunteer work useful? Mostly volunteer work deal with people, for example you ask for donation, like money, eat or clothes. Subsequently people don't like this question, because they think its annoying or maybe the organisation is not serious. In the past some organisations has use the money for his own and now people aren't sure, if the organisation approved or serious. Thats why you can feel depressed, because you do this at your free time and you are not paid for your work. On the one hand, people don't like your work, but on the other hand you can help the society, also when some people don't honor your work, but it gives also people, who think thats a good job and honourable. Furthermore you can feel good by your own and you can say, you help people who needs help and don't see away (nicht weg sehen?). Additionally you can gain experience for a job or the life. In a CV it looks very good. So also your character can be better, for example you know the real problems, like no food or money to live. Then you see, thats your problems are nothing in comparison with this problems. Finally in my opinion volunteer work is important and I do this also and when somebody say something bad about your work. Ignor this! There more people who like it and especially the people who need your work.

Ich würde mich auf eine Antwort freuen und ich weiß eure Mühe zu schätzen, wenn ihr es korrigiert und mir vielleicht ein paar Tipps geben könnt. Ich hoffe es antwortet noch jemand heute. Aber trotzdem danke!

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Kann mir jemand den deutschen songtext in deutsch übersetzten, bitte?

I never noticed how my heart could beat so loud When I think of you And I can't focus now, got my head up in the clouds When I think of you My heart's so lost in all the chaos It's got me crazy With the spell you cast, it all happened so fast Goodbye to loneliness And when I close my eyes, you play like a movie in my mind

You are the star of my daydreams Everything you are is my reverie Can you feel my heart when you're moving closer and closer and You are the star of my daydreams Everything you are is my reverie Can you feel my heart when you're moving closer and closer? Oh I think that we, that we were meant to be

Everything you do is so fresh and brand new That I can't help This crush on you, I wanna be the breakthrough Kind of love to you Sparks are flying like butterflies and I'm so high On the spell you cast, it all happened so fast Goodbye to loneliness And when I close my eyes, you play like a movie in my mind And I wanna rewind, over and over a thousand times

You are the star of my daydreams Everything you are is my reverie Can you feel my heart when you're moving closer and closer and You are the star of my daydreams Everything you are is my reverie Can you feel my heart when you're moving closer and closer? Oh I think that we, that we were meant to be

Oh I think that we, that we were meant to be Oh I think that we, that we were meant to be

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Written discussion

Hallo wir haben als hausaufgabe aufbekommen eine written discussion zu schreiben. Ich hab mal eine geschrieben könntet ihr den mal durchlesen und meine fehler korrigieren oder verbesserungen vorschlagen?

Thema:Mobile phones have become an important part of our lives.More than 90% of german teenagers have a mobile phone of their own.What are the advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones?

Mobile phones have become an important part of our lives. More than 90 % of German teenagers have a mobile phone. But is a mobile phone really important? Here are advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones.

My first argument against mobile phones is that the most teenagers use a mobile phone in the lesson. They play games and send emails or short messages to someone. So they are they are distracted from the lesson and get bad marks.

The next point is, that some people can’t stop using mobile phones. They get addicted.They lose their social contacts and spend all their time on their mobile phones.A good example is my friends brother, he haven’t got social contacts he is all the time write short messages or calls to friends.

The last point is that mobile phones are unhealthy. I have heard in many television reports that mobile phones can be cause of cancer.

On the other hand there are arguments for the using of mobile phones too.

Firstly you are very flexible. You can use it everywhere at any time.For example you are waiting for the next train and you are bored, you can use your mobile phone. You can listen to music,play games or go online when you have an Internet flat. More Important is that the mobile phone is helpful in case of emergency.If something happen on the way to school or somewhere else you can call to the emergency.

The most important is that you are always be in contact with your friends and your family. So your parents mustn’t care where you are. With one call they can know it.

After looking at both sides I’m in the opinion that mobile phones are important for the most people.

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