social media written discussion?
Hallo ich habe eine Frage ich muss ein Written discussion über social media schreiben ich weiß nicht ob mein text gut ist mit gramatik usw..kann mir jemand es bitte verbessern oder wenn jemand ein besseren text hat mir den schreibt weil es muss 150 wörtern sein.Danke im Voraus
Nowadays social networks are used by people all over the world. They use them to stay in contact with their friends or family, get information about what’s happening in other parts of the world.First off all, social media are the best option for humans to express new possibilities for their future. They can find new attractions and places in the world. Social networks are often used to find out the answer to questions, when not knowing the answer. On the other side there are also negative points, for example that there are students that social media can influence in teams of studying ..To sum up social media isn’t a big problem for humanes/ teenagers, if there are rules, which have to be followed and controlled by humans and / or machines.On top I think that social media should even be more popular, so that parents also know about it, so that they can teach their children about the problems.
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Hallo.
First off all, social media is the best option for humans to express new possibilities for their future.
Social networks are often used to find answers to questions when we don't know them.
On the other side there are also negative points, for example that there are students that social media can influence in teams of studying
Was genau möchtest du mit diesem Satz denn sagen?
for example, there are students who are distracted from learning by social media.
also das soziale netzwerke schülern vom lernen ablenken kann.