Morgen eine Englisch Arbeit!

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Mal abgesehen davon dass die Noten in Amerika dieselben nur mit Buchstaben sind, ist dein Text sehr monoton und wiederholt sich oft. Bitte benutze Bindewörter wie "Also/Therefore/Furthermore/By the way/In addition to that". Das gibt deinem Text ein bisschen mehr Würze.

I would not like to visit US - schools because they have a dress code. I think grade A - F in US - schools are better than in our school system. (---) I like the lockers in US - Schools more because the lockers are bigger and the students don't (In der Schriftsprache sollten keine Kurzformen verwendet werden.) need to pay for their locker. The subjects are different as in German - Schools. Health is a subject in US - Schools. US - Schools have the same subjects everyday and they have the same timetable from Monday to Friday. I think that isn't good because I think (Wiederholung) that is boring. American and German Schools begin at different times and I think German schools start early. US - Schools don't (s.o.) have fall holidays and I think that isn't (s.o.) good. What do you think about US and German - schools?

  • Ich würde folgendes bevorzugen: I would not like to visit a US school because there is a dress code at US schools.
  • German schools, American schools: ohne Bindestrich und schools kleingeschrieben.
  • Suche dir Alternativen für think, aber bitte nicht find.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

AstridDerPu

Nicht alle High Schools haben einen Dress Code. Und wegen Lockers in die High School gehen zu wollen ist doch ein wenig trivial.

Ich würde eher schreiben, dass es Dich reizt, zu sehen, wie das School System funktioniert, wo es keine verschiedenen Schularten gibt,sondern Leistungskurse, keine Klassen, sondern Councelers, die den Unterrichtsplan für Dich ausarbeiten. Jede Unterrichtsstunde mit anderen Klassenkameraden, Homecoming Party, .... Das mit den Ferien ist gut, das mit dem Stundenplan auch...

Dir wird das Richtige einfallen.

Ganz viel Glück und bestes Gelingen.

Dein Englisch ist sehr gut.

DH für diese Antwort - mein Däumeln gilt aber nicht für den letzten Satz.

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Kann sich bitte jemand mein bewerbungsschreiben auf englisch anschauen?

Ich muss mich auf Englisch für einen Job im Ausland bewerben.

Würde mich sehr freuen wenn sich das jemand anschauen könnte, der sich gut auskennt, mir feedback und Verbesserung Vorschläge geben könnte.

Job Beschreibungen

Professionelle und höfliche Bearbeitung von Kundenanfragen via E-Mail, Telefon und Live Chat

Application

Dear ladies and gentlemen.

My name is xxx, born xxx, in xxx. After graduating form business school, i visited a vocational matura school and finished it in German and English.Worth mentioning is that I graduated top of my call in English. (Beim letzten Satz bin ich mir ziemlich unsicher, ich weiß nicht, ob ich es auslassen sollte oder wie ich es besser formuliere)

Because of my business school graduation i have collected a lot of experience in a wide range of skills, and the Know-how to apply them, whitch gives me an advantage in the business and working enviroment. Since working for few companies where i had many diverse contact with different people i have increasingly developed my people and talking skills.

I am applying for the job because I´m looking for experience and a way to work overseas.

I am the right one for the job because I have a very friendly personality and the people skills needed for the job. I always do my best to represent the company i work for in the best way possible.

Im sure the company xxx will only have positive experience with me.

I am looking forward to an interview.

Best regards

xxx

 

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Kann jemand gut Englisch und diesen kurzen Text überlesen?

Hey, ich muss meiner Lehrerin einen Comment schreiben, per email. Hab da noch was dazu geschrieben. Wär nice wenn das jemand der gut englisch spricht das durchliest und mir sagt, ob es Fehler gibt/man was verbessern könnte und die Email angemessen für einen Lehrer ist.

Dear Mrs. , I was not sure if you wanted us to write the comment just about that text in the book (with a introduction and details about the text). So I just wrote my opinion down on that topic and included some of the arguments in the text.

Writing a comment – Young people in a multifaceted society

Many people think that our generation is anti-social, lazy and always on their phone. That might be true in some cases, but you can’t stereotype everyone just because of some people. Like every generation, there are lots of different kids and kind of people. There are extremes in every way. Teenagers steal, take drugs, don’t go to school and commit crimes, but also learn everyday more, get good grades, volunteer or work for charities, want to try new things and take part in demonstrations.

In every generation you can find similar people, but others describe and see us the way the mass acts. Most of us are insecure and don’t know how to deal with changes, their life in general and the expectations of their parents, families and friends. We are trying to grow up like every human before us, questioning our existence, purpose and matter of life.

The Internet, (social) media and the digitalisation in general make these questions particularly important. We have the opportunity to share our opinion with a great mass, but we also can influence them and in reverse, without us noticing it.

Such a conflict is new to humanity, there might be similarities to other problems in worlds history but we don’t know where to set limits or make rules for it. We are unsure about what is wrong and what is right, especially in this case, so many people don’t know what to think about a lot of important topics. Some try to make things legit, using the arguments (of different philosophies). They don’t think or even care about nature, animals or humans, their lives or rights. Since generations we are destroying the earth and taking all the resources, not caring about the people that will be born in the future and will have to deal with all the trouble and problems that we caused.

That sounds pretty pessimistic, but it’s the truth. In my opinion, the only main things improving with our generation and what we are changing right now are discrimination, sexism, racism and so on. Maybe we are far away from getting equality and the same (human) rights for everyone in the world, but at least we have the luck to be in the position to have a good(?) education and the access to a massive amount of information (Internet, library, school). (geht weiter in den Antworten)

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