Morgen eine Englisch Arbeit!
Also ich schreibe morgen eine Englisch Arbeit und ein teil der Arbeit wird es sein, eine eigene Meinung über das Thema ''A year in a US High School'' zu schreiben, deswegen wollte ich fragen ob mein Text okay ist. Hier der Text (Eigene Meinung): I would not like to visit US - schools because they have a dress code. I think grade A - F in US - schools better than in our school system. In comparison I like the lockers in US - Schools more because the lockers are bigger and the students don't need to pay for their locker. The subjects are different as in German - Schools. Health is a subject in US - Schools. US - Schools have the same subjects everyday and they have the same timetable from Monday to Friday. I think that isn't good because I think that is boring. American and German Schools begin at different times and I think German schools start early. US - Schools don't have fall holidays and I think that isn't good. What do you think about US and German - schools?
Mal abgesehen davon dass die Noten in Amerika dieselben nur mit Buchstaben sind, ist dein Text sehr monoton und wiederholt sich oft. Bitte benutze Bindewörter wie "Also/Therefore/Furthermore/By the way/In addition to that". Das gibt deinem Text ein bisschen mehr Würze.
I would not like to visit US - schools because they have a dress code. I think grade A - F in US - schools are better than in our school system. (---) I like the lockers in US - Schools more because the lockers are bigger and the students don't (In der Schriftsprache sollten keine Kurzformen verwendet werden.) need to pay for their locker. The subjects are different as in German - Schools. Health is a subject in US - Schools. US - Schools have the same subjects everyday and they have the same timetable from Monday to Friday. I think that isn't good because I think (Wiederholung) that is boring. American and German Schools begin at different times and I think German schools start early. US - Schools don't (s.o.) have fall holidays and I think that isn't (s.o.) good. What do you think about US and German - schools?
- Ich würde folgendes bevorzugen: I would not like to visit a US school because there is a dress code at US schools.
- German schools, American schools: ohne Bindestrich und schools kleingeschrieben.
- Suche dir Alternativen für think, aber bitte nicht find.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.
Nicht alle High Schools haben einen Dress Code. Und wegen Lockers in die High School gehen zu wollen ist doch ein wenig trivial.
Ich würde eher schreiben, dass es Dich reizt, zu sehen, wie das School System funktioniert, wo es keine verschiedenen Schularten gibt,sondern Leistungskurse, keine Klassen, sondern Councelers, die den Unterrichtsplan für Dich ausarbeiten. Jede Unterrichtsstunde mit anderen Klassenkameraden, Homecoming Party, .... Das mit den Ferien ist gut, das mit dem Stundenplan auch...
Dir wird das Richtige einfallen.
Ganz viel Glück und bestes Gelingen.
Dein Englisch ist sehr gut.
englischer text so richtig? ( write a discussion )
heey :) ich schreibe morgen eine Englischarbeit und wir müssen eine Diskussion schreiben und da wollte ich fragen wie ihr die hier findet und ob ihr noch Ratschläge oder so hättet
I am going to write about the environmentalism. Lots of people think that they won't go green because they can't save the planet anyway. This adjustment is one of the biggest problems in the world today. So the question is can you save the planet or not? On the on hand you have less work and less problems, when you don't go green. If you don't think about the environment you have a carefree life, because you don't think about the aftereffects. On the other hand you fell better when you do something for the environment. You can help with little things, for example you can turn off the lights and appliances when you don't need or use it. You can do shorter showers too. Some work is funny too, example plant trees with friends. Help even more people so the change to save our planet is higher. After looking at both sides I think its better to go green because the most things to help are not complicated. Its not so difficult to help.
Danke schon mal !
Kann sich bitte jemand mein bewerbungsschreiben auf englisch anschauen?
Ich muss mich auf Englisch für einen Job im Ausland bewerben.
Würde mich sehr freuen wenn sich das jemand anschauen könnte, der sich gut auskennt, mir feedback und Verbesserung Vorschläge geben könnte.
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Dear ladies and gentlemen.
My name is xxx, born xxx, in xxx. After graduating form business school, i visited a vocational matura school and finished it in German and English.Worth mentioning is that I graduated top of my call in English. (Beim letzten Satz bin ich mir ziemlich unsicher, ich weiß nicht, ob ich es auslassen sollte oder wie ich es besser formuliere)
Because of my business school graduation i have collected a lot of experience in a wide range of skills, and the Know-how to apply them, whitch gives me an advantage in the business and working enviroment. Since working for few companies where i had many diverse contact with different people i have increasingly developed my people and talking skills.
I am applying for the job because I´m looking for experience and a way to work overseas.
I am the right one for the job because I have a very friendly personality and the people skills needed for the job. I always do my best to represent the company i work for in the best way possible.
Im sure the company xxx will only have positive experience with me.
I am looking forward to an interview.
Bitte habe bald Englisch Schularbeit und wollte fragen ob sich nicht jemand meinen Text ansehen könnte.
The rise on teen pregnancy is steadily growing. In the text below I want to summaris the pros and cons of abortion.
On the one hand, which absolutly speaks for abortion is the point that every woman should have a free choice what happens with her body because the embryo is a part of herself and if she is not ready for bringing up a child this would not make a sense because the mother and her child would not probably lead a good life.
But on the other hand if a woman decides to abort her embryo many people would say that is a crime because you take the life of somebody away and they think that nobody has the right to decide if somebody should live or not. For example a mother is not allowed to kill her baby. But where is the difference between the embryo and the baby?
All in all it is not easy to decide for or against abortion. But I am the opinion that the pros outweight the cons and that every woman should get the choice to decide the best for herself.
Danke im Voraus!
Kann jmd kontrolieren?
Some poeple say that the boot camps in the USA is a good idea.Do you think Boot camp would be a good idea in Germany?
Many poeple says that boot camps are very good because they helps troublemakers to learn discipline and when they learn discipline,the crime rate will be go down.Besides troublemakers would think more before acting like example grafitti.They also say that many troublemakers to reduce the number of example in schools because the lessons in the school will be more quiet and then can the students better learn.
However troublemakers would be damaged like example psychologically.Another argument against is the extra cost like example uniforms.They also say it doesn't change poeple because they're still the same when they come out example they are angry because of punishments.
After I looking at both sides, I think that boot camps shouldn't be introduced in Germany.The advantages are very good,but the disadvantages are terrible.
Was könnte ich in dem Aufsatz ,,My dream job" noch schreiben?
Hallo leute, ich habe einen Aufsatz auf englisch geschrieben der über mein Traumberuf handelt. Ich muss 15 Sätze haben aber ich habe nur 11 Sätze. Kann mir jemand helfen noch 4 Sätze dazu zuschreiben? Ich bin übrigens 14 und habe sicher irgendwo fehler in dem Text!
My dream job:
I'd like to become a primary school teacher. There are postitive and negative aspects in the job. The job is well paid and you have breaks during the lessons. The good thing about the job is that it is not dangerous at work. One thing else is that you have long summer holidays. You don't work on the weekend and you have fixed working hours, however, the job has also negative aspects. The bad thing about this job is that you have stress and that you have to have patient. In the class are sometimes disrespectful pupils and they don't listent to you. That's why it may be that there is noise in the class. At home you have to control the homework of the pupils and have stress because you have to work quickly. A big problem for me is to get up early. But if you want to become that job, you will get used to it.
Ich weiß da sind Fehler drinnen aber ich bin kein Profi! Kann mir also bitte jemand helfen noch 4 Sätze zu schreiben?
Danke an die Leute die das durchgelesen haben und mir antworten :)
Kann jemand gut Englisch und diesen kurzen Text überlesen?
Hey, ich muss meiner Lehrerin einen Comment schreiben, per email. Hab da noch was dazu geschrieben. Wär nice wenn das jemand der gut englisch spricht das durchliest und mir sagt, ob es Fehler gibt/man was verbessern könnte und die Email angemessen für einen Lehrer ist.
Dear Mrs. , I was not sure if you wanted us to write the comment just about that text in the book (with a introduction and details about the text). So I just wrote my opinion down on that topic and included some of the arguments in the text.
Writing a comment – Young people in a multifaceted society
Many people think that our generation is anti-social, lazy and always on their phone. That might be true in some cases, but you can’t stereotype everyone just because of some people. Like every generation, there are lots of different kids and kind of people. There are extremes in every way. Teenagers steal, take drugs, don’t go to school and commit crimes, but also learn everyday more, get good grades, volunteer or work for charities, want to try new things and take part in demonstrations.
In every generation you can find similar people, but others describe and see us the way the mass acts. Most of us are insecure and don’t know how to deal with changes, their life in general and the expectations of their parents, families and friends. We are trying to grow up like every human before us, questioning our existence, purpose and matter of life.
The Internet, (social) media and the digitalisation in general make these questions particularly important. We have the opportunity to share our opinion with a great mass, but we also can influence them and in reverse, without us noticing it.
Such a conflict is new to humanity, there might be similarities to other problems in worlds history but we don’t know where to set limits or make rules for it. We are unsure about what is wrong and what is right, especially in this case, so many people don’t know what to think about a lot of important topics. Some try to make things legit, using the arguments (of different philosophies). They don’t think or even care about nature, animals or humans, their lives or rights. Since generations we are destroying the earth and taking all the resources, not caring about the people that will be born in the future and will have to deal with all the trouble and problems that we caused.
That sounds pretty pessimistic, but it’s the truth. In my opinion, the only main things improving with our generation and what we are changing right now are discrimination, sexism, racism and so on. Maybe we are far away from getting equality and the same (human) rights for everyone in the world, but at least we have the luck to be in the position to have a good(?) education and the access to a massive amount of information (Internet, library, school). (geht weiter in den Antworten)