Aufsatz über mich-Englisch ;-)
Ich möchte gerne in england ein Internat besuchen. Virraussetztungen dafür ist aber ein selbstgeschriebener Aufsatz über mich - auf englisch! BITTE BERRICHTIGEN& ERGÄNZEN!!!!!!!!!!!! Mein Text: This Letter Should give you an insight in my life & personality: First I want to introduce myself: My name is....I live in a small town near....,called...with my parents & my sister...(4) & my brother...(12). My father works as.......my family is very important for me& we have a really good relationship. Other important persons in my life, are my friends. I spend all my free time with them. Except; i am doing other hobbies: I like to play tennis & sometimes the piano.therefore, i would be happy, if I could continue my hobbies in England. I often have heard,that in English schools, there are Orchestras and other musical and sporting activities.if that should not be so, it would not be that bad, because I have more positiv reasons to vistit an English school: I would like to learn English very well, I would like to make new contacts & think, I will gain very funny experience l. And, of coarse,because my annoying sisters!:-) at the moment I go to the......school. After the holidays, I will visit grade 9. But maybe, I will be in an Englisch school. In Grade 7 I chose French as my second language.
This Letter Should give you an insight in my life & personality: First I want to introduce myself: My name is....I live in a small town near....,called...with my parents & my sister...(4) & my brother...(12) - Word Order. My father works as a.......
my family is very important for me & we have a really good relationship. Other important persons in my life, are my friends. I spend all my free time with them.**
Except; i am doing other hobbies: I like to play tennis & sometimes the piano. therefore, i would be happy, if I could continue my hobbies in England. I often have heard, that in English schools, there are Orchestras and other musical and sporting activities. - Word Order
if that should not be so - Stil, it would not be that bad, because I have more positiv reasons to vistit an English school: - Stil I would like to learn English very well, I would like to make new contacts & think, I will gain very funny experience
l. And, of coarse, because my annoying sisters! :-)
at the moment, I go to the......school. After the holidays, I will visit grade 9. But maybe, I will be in an Englisch school. In Grade 7 I chose French as my second language.
- Groß- und Kleinschreibung
- Satzstellung (Word Order)
- für & solltest du and schreiben
Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Auch wenn ich Frank83 zustimme, möglichst authentisch und mit eigenen Worten zu schreiben, würde ich jedoch ein paar Fehler korrigieren wollen.
Bitte "I" immer groß schreiben.
Satzstellung: "With my parents an my sister/brother I live in... Präposition: My family is very important TO me! Im Satz: Other important persons..., kein Komma. Except weglassen. Besser einfach schreiben: My hobbies are playing tennis and ... Artikel THE weglassen bei: I go to ... school. Mit einem Namen, den du sicherlich einsetzen wolltest, kann man im Ausland nichts anfangen. Besser: At the moment I go to/visit a comprehension school (Gesamtschule) oder secondary modern (BE)/Junior High (AE) (Realschule) oder grammar school (Gym) in.... After the summer holidays (Aug/Sept?) I will be in grade 9. AT (nicht IN) an English school, however, I might have to attend class 7.
I often have heard - nicht gut. Besser: "I often was told..." (Im Englischen wird das Passiv wesentlich häufiger benutzt, als im D.)
Und nur "If not...", nicht "If that should not be so...". das ist "Deutsch".
Funny experiences? Mhm... Begründung: I would like to improve my English, find new friends and learn a lot about the country and its people.
As A (!) second foreign language I would like to take French. (MY language ist falsch.)
Hoffe, ich konnte dir helfen.
Du setzt viele Kommata. Da kannst du locker die Hälfte streichen. Und nach einem Punkt wird groß geschrieben. Sonst nicht (letter, should - außer I und Namen und sowas natürlich).
Tatsächlich finde ich es ganz gut, wenn du den Aufsatz alleine machst und ich finde es auch nicht schlimm, dass da kleine Fehler drin sind. Macht es authentisch. :) Dann glaubt man dir, dass du den Text geschrieben hast und nicht jemand anders. Of course ;)
Vielleicht könntest du mehr ausführen, warum du ein englisches Internat besuchen willst. Kultur, fremdes Land, Selbstständigkeit etc.
Korrekturlesen Motivationsschreiben für Auslandssemester
Dieses Schreiben ist von einer Kommilitonin, mit der Bitte, dass Jemand es ein- (oder auch zwei-) mal zur Korrektur liest. Großes Dankeschön im Voraus.
[HOMETOWN], 19 May 2014
University of [UNIVERSITY]
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to express my interest in applying for the MSc [COURSE] programme at University of [UNIVERSITY], scheduled to start in September 2014, as the Erasmus student. In the folllowing letter I will introduce myself and explain why I think that University of [UNIVERSITY] is the right university for me.
My name is [NAME]. I am 27 years old and I am currently studying Master’s Degree programme in [COURSE] at the University of [HOME UNIVERSITY] in [HOMETOWN], Germany. I was born in [FOREIGN COUNTRY] but my family moved to Germany as I was a teenager. Despite the difficulties of studiing in german at the beginning I graduated with a Bachelor‘sdegree in [COURSE] from the University of [HOME UNIVERSITY] in [HOMETOWN], Germany in 2013. I got very good marks in several important and relevant subjects such as Microbiology, Pharmacokinetics, Thermodynamics and Biochemistry amongst many others.
There are several reasons why I have decided to apply for the Erasmus programme. First of all, I am sure that abroad experience would strongly enrich my future studies and help me in my prospective career. Furthermore it would be a very efficient way to improve my English. I have been learning English for 20 years, but I must admit that I speak it only rarely. I would like to change it and taking part in this programme represents a great opportunity. I also know from my own personal experience of learning German, that the best way to learn a foreign language is to go to a foreign country. That‘s why I would like to study in [LAND]. Moreover I consider Erasmus programme is agreat opportunity to get familiar with culture, history and customs of this country.
University of [UNIVERSITY] appears to be the perfect complement to my education. The offered master program of [COURSE] provide particular courses that are not avalible in my University in Germany. These courses would enable me to develop the nesessary theoretical knowlege and practical skills that would give a significant plus to my career in the future. Another reason for my interest are the small classes at the University of [UNIVERSITY]. In my mind, the classes with high number of students at other universities are inpossiblefor effective studying.
I would be pleased to participate in the Erasmus progamme at the University of [UNIVERSITY]. You may be assured that I will prove to be an enthusiastic, hard-working and motivated student.
Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.
My future plans
Pls könnte sich jemand meinen Text auf Fehler ansehen?
I often think about my future. I am curious how would it look like. At the moment I go to grammar school and I am in the 6th form. So it is obvious that I would like to pass the school leaving examination that I am allowed to go to university. But I am not sure yet what I will study. I was thinking about marketing and management which is something that really interests me, because the idea of presenting and seeling a product sounds good to me. I don’t know where I will live in the future. I would like to have a flat in Vienna on my own. Now it is only a dream but maybe some day. I have also some plans about my family. I supposed that one day I will get married and have children. However, these are further plans. Now I am trying to concentrate on my education and career. But also the fun should not come to short. I was thinking about traveling. I have often dreamed of taking a trip round the world. I have already been to many places. For example I was in Turkey and Italy. I really would like to visit Switzerland, America and England. I haven’t been there yet.
Danke im Voraus!:)
Englisch cv schreiben?
Hiii! Wir müssen in Englisch ein "Personal statement" zu einem Schüleraustausch verfassen. Nun, dieses Statement habe ich so gut wie fertig, aber ich bin mir unsicher.
"I have always loved meeting new places and I am sure that spending my year on a school abroad will be a valuable experience. I am sure that I will improve my English language skills and I also would like to broaden my horizon by getting to know new people and cultures."
Kritik ist erwünscht!
England austausch Bewerbung gut so?
Hello! My name is *** and I am thirteen years old. Together with my parents and my two years older brother, I live in a house with a big garden. We have got one little dog called ***. My hometown is ***. In my free time I often play football. Meeting friends like *** *** and surfing in the internet are also one of my favorite leisure activities. My favorite subjects are all languages. I am not so happy with subjects concerning to numbers like Maths and Physics. My family and my friends say about me that I am reliable, polite and I have a good behavior. Although I have travelled through many countries, I have never been in England before. For me the exchange would not only mean having fun but the possibility to make acquaintance with a new country and interesting people. I I would be very glad to take part at the exchange with ***(my school)