Grammar richtig?

This means that having school uniform protects students from bullying.

keine Ahnung ob das richtig ist

2 Antworten

Von Experte AstridDerPu bestätigt

sushimett

10.04.2024, 21:48

Wenn dann "uniforms", ansonsten passt es.

Pepejulieonsema

Fragesteller

10.04.2024, 22:23

es heißt ja he she it das s muss mit. Ist in dem Falle Students das it ?

sushimett

10.04.2024, 22:29

@Pepejulieonsema

Nein. "students" ist Plural von "student". Das Verb im simple present ist "protects".

Pepejulieonsema

Fragesteller

10.04.2024, 22:35

@sushimett

Aber wieso kommt eigentlich ein s nach protect

sushimett

10.04.2024, 22:37

@Pepejulieonsema

Ist hier nicht so einfach zu erkennen mit dem he/she/it, s muss mit. "having school uniforms" kann man durch "this" oder "it" ersetzen.

AstridDerPu

10.04.2024, 23:35

Außerdem fehlt dem Satz ein being, denn im Aktiv ergibt der Satz nicht wirklich Sinn; siehe meine Antwort.

AstridDerPu

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch-Deutsch, Grammatik, Englisch

10.04.2024, 23:33

Hallo,

This means that having school uniforms protects students from bullying.

Das 3.-Person-Singular s bezieht sich auf das having, das Tragen (von Schuluniformen).

... schützt Schüler vor Mobbing.

... protects students from being bullied. = ... schützt Schüler davor gemobbt zu werden. (= Passiv)

AstridDerPu

sushimett

10.04.2024, 23:46

Zwei Punkte:

Der Satz ergibt im Aktiv und im Passiv Sinn. Du kannst auch im Deutschen sagen: Das bedeutet, dass Schuluniformen zu haben (im Deutschen eher "zu nutzen/verwenden") Schüler vor Mobbing schützt. Oder Passiv: ...davor schützen gemobbt zu werden.
Wenn du das Passiv verwenden willst, dann hieße es nicht "from being bullying" sondern "from being bullied".

AstridDerPu

10.04.2024, 23:58

@sushimett

Sorry, du hast natürlich recht. Es war wohl doch schon zu spät. Ich werde meine Antwort entsprechend korrigieren. Vielen Dank, dass du mich auf meinen Fauxpas aufmerksam gemacht hast.

Hallo Leute, könnt ihr eventuell diesen Artikel lesen und wenn da Fehler sind, es zu korrigieren oder umzuschreiben? Wäre super nett von euch, meine Hausübung wird nämlich benotet und schreibt noch euren Feedback rein, ich danke euch :)

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Hallo, das war die Angabe (Nummer 11):

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Hi Artsy Tiger,

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kann mir wer helfen und evt. Korrektur machen. Und findet ihr der Text ist gut für 11. Klasse Gynasium (bitte ehrlich sein, wäre das eine 1 wert?) vorallem kommasetzung bin ich mir unsicher und fällt vllt jemand noch ein schlusssatz ein?

danke

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English Korektur?

Hallo könnt ihr mal schauen ob Fehler enthalten sind. Hat wer verbessungsideen?

welche Note würdet ihr geben (Gymnasium 11 Klasse)

In the following text, I give you an insight into myself and my free time activities:

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Würde dieser Text in english einem Peel paragraf entsprechen ( 10 Schulstufe )

Should young people take Relationship advice from adults?

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The world has changed in a lot of ways positively and negatively, teenagers now tend to start and end relationships over their phone, because its way easier.

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I think in some ways the older Generation can still give tips, like on dates and things that haven’t changed but sumarised I think youre better of talking to your teenage friends : ).

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Englisch: Welcher Satzbau ist richtig?

"In this essay I will argue that the use of modern media at school shoudn't be regulated." Oder "In this essay I will argue that the use of modern media shoudn't be regulated at school."

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Englisch?

"Did you ever catch yourself living in the past and losing focus on reality and presence? To some extent, it's totally normal to reflect upon great memories and experiences, but there are also some boundaries: If you are craving about the past rather than enjoying the here and now, this will lead to you always being unhappy with yourself and your surroundings. I am here to tell you that the past is there to remind you of all the great experiences you have had in your life, but you can't stick to them life-long . Even beautiful things have their ends, and you need to realize that. Just because your life goes on or some things have changed in your life, making that experience not relivable, it does not necessarily mean that your life will never be as great as it was. And remember: Maybe you are missing out on great people while crying over your best friend you lost and who was never good for you. All the changes you face are meant to occur. Despite all the shifts, there is someone who will always stay and never betray you: That's you and yourself! So don't stick to the past and other people if there are thousands of miles you need to discover before life really ends for you. Enjoy every minute and be grateful for having food, clean water, nice people, and a comfy place to live in!"

Wie kann ich den Text noch sprachlich verbessern?

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Könnte jemand über meinen Essay drüber schauen?

         Every school should demand school uniform

In some countries all over the world school children have to wear uniforms the color scheme and style varies from school to school. In other countries pupils can wear to school what ever clothes they choose. In those countries it could be difficult to introduce school uniforms, because they are not traditionally used to wearing one. In the following essay I want to discuss the advantages to introduce school uniforms world wide.

In my opinion school uniforms ind schools are positive but negative too because not every student have the same style and they cant decide which school uniforms they wanted to wear.

School uniforms are on the one side good because a lot of children are victims of bullying because some of theme haven’t enough money to buy expensive and nice clothes. In this case the school uniform is very practically and maybe a good problem-solving.

On the other side pupils cant find our style and have to wear clothes that they don’t wanted. School uniforms can be nice but not every day ,It quickly becomes boring .However, there are people around the world for which it is too expensive ,always to buy a school uniform. Children grow fast and because of that they have to buy an again and again. We must take into account that the school uniform is maybe expensive but the clothes that the kids need for school is not cheaper and they have to be buy again and again, too.

On the other hand if the pupils wear school uniforms there is not a difference between rich and poor.

I have come to the conclusion that school uniforms are not everywhere positive and children should be able to develop their own style. Cause the bully is not reduced by a school uniform.

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Hey,

I think we all know this statement. Until today, however, we have not seen a single flying car. This means that I would like to make it clear that all models and ideas that I will present to you today will not be found 100% in the future. All these are only thoughts or better said a dream of the people later such progress to be able to see.

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