Englisch Text?

Moin,

Ich habe einen Text verfasst und wollte wissen, ob ich die richtige Zeitfromen verwendet habe.

Es handelt sich um eine Hotel Rezension.

Folgender Texf auf Englisch

Dear Hotel Management,

I was with my family in your Hotel „Five Stars“ for two weeks. I am very difficult and strong about reviews to Hotels. So i got good auf few experience about your Hotel from the Check in to Check out. If we came into the Hotel, we were very surprised, because it looks like a Palace, it looks big, beautiful, modern and luxury. After that, we went to the reception because our two panorama Apartments. At first, we saw how friendly the people who advisory us was. Then we got our rooms, which was very clean and big with lot of equipments, like a Smart TV, WLAN, a Phone for the reception, a very comfortable bed and a big bathroom, with a modern Shower, Toilett and sink with different body lotions. After that we got a tour from the Hotel. They also have a Bowling Center, Billard lounge, a Swimming Pool, Massage and a Sauna towel, the infrastructure was very modern from the different sides from the Hotel.

3 Antworten

Tybalt99999

11.11.2021, 21:12

Die Zeitformen sind dein geringstes Problem.

An dem Text stimmt nichts. Tut mir leid es so hart zu sagen, aber so ist es nun mal. Der Text liest sich über weite Stellen so als wenn du deutsche Grammatikregeln und englische Vokabeln kombiniert hättest, dazu kommen dann noch ein paar völlig unverständliche Sätze.

Der Text wäre wahrscheinlich besser wenn du ihn auf Deutsch geschrieben und dann durch Google Translator gejagt hättest.

Apfelmund11070

11.11.2021, 21:08

I have been in your Hotel „Five Stars“ for two weeks with my family.

I am very strict about reviews of Hotels.

So i got good auf few experience about your Hotel from the Check in to Check out. (Versteh nicht was du ausdrücken willst)

As we came into the Hotel, we were very surprised, because it looked like a Palace.

It looks big, beautiful, modern and luxury.

After that, we went to the reception to check in for two panorama Apartments we booked.

The receptionists were very friendly.

Then we got our rooms,which where very clean and big with lot of equipments, like a Smart TV, WLAN, a Phone for the reception, a very comfortable bed and a big bathroom, with a modern Shower, Toilett and sink with different body lotions.

After that we got a tour from the Hotel.

They also have a Bowling Center, Billard lounge, a Swimming Pool, Massage and a Sauna towel, the infrastructure was very modern (Meinst du mit infrastructure die architektur ? Und was möchtest du mit diesem Satz ausdrücken: infrastructure was very modern from the different sides from the Hotel ?)

Sorry falls noch fehler vorhanden sind.