Ich würde gerne eine englische Anfrage für ein Hotel machen.........

ch würde gerne eine englische Anfrage für ein Hotel machen.........könnte jemand bitte den Text verbessern und korrigieren?

Dear Team of Doghouse, We would like to stay in youre beautiful house for a night, from the 29th July to 1st August. This mail is the Inquiry on the availability. We would travel with 2 adults and to childs(15years,17years) and one well behaved Bernese Mountain Dog. We are from Germany and we had booked in schottland two holiday houses. But it keeps to much time to drive from Germany to Scottland in one move, so we need a Accommodation to stay for a intermission. Youre estate seemes perfekt for ourer dog, so we would be delighted if, you can send us information on the availability and in the best case to book a room.

The best wishes and Regards

6 Antworten

Baiana

03.07.2009, 16:15

"inquiry" klein

2 = two (nicht "to")

"behaving" statt "behaved" (er macht es ja immer noch und ständig ...)

"Scottland" (groß und Sc statt Sch)

"accomodation" klein

"Your" statt "Youre"

"our" statt "oure"

Komma vor if, nicht danach

"regards" klein

Ein paar Haker sind noch drin, aber es ist absolut verständlich!

Viel Spaß und einen schönen Urlaub! :-)

user8743

Nutzer, der sehr aktiv auf gutefrage ist

im Thema Englisch

04.07.2009, 09:37

Der Text passt schon. Würde man ihn ganz verbessern, würdest Du dann auch die Antwort verstehen (weil ja angenommen wird, Du sprichst astreines Englisch)?

Was inhaltliches:

Du schreibst, Du möchtest eine Nacht buchen, vom 29. Juli bis zum 1. August. Das sind aber drei Nächte... Willst Du nun nur eine oder drei Nächte buchen?

lenticularis

03.07.2009, 16:17

ist nicht perfekt, aber auf jeden fall verständlich und daher ok so ... 2 = two, nicht to .. und we have booked two houses in scotland

user212

03.07.2009, 16:16

Ja, man wird es verstehen. Nur würde ich den Text um die Erklaerung Schottland kürzen. Eine Nacht und fertig, warum geht das Hotel nichts an.

cookie185

03.07.2009, 16:14

childs = children

cookie185

03.07.2009, 16:15

your estate seems perfect to...

cookie185

03.07.2009, 16:15

your estate seems perfect to...

youre = your

cookie185

03.07.2009, 16:16

your estate seems perfect to...

youre = your

too much time

Ich und vier Freunde planen unsere Ferien in Amsterdam zu verbringen. Dabei würde ich euch bitten mir zu helfen meine Anfrage zu verbessern. Hier nun die "Muster"-Anfrage:

Dear Ms. (...)

We are writing to you regarding your offer on (webseite des Angebots).

We would like to request your Apartment from 21.7 to 27.7.15 . We are 5 students from Berlin, Germany, at the age of 18 and want to go on holiday in Amsterdam.

Would you please send me an indication of your rates per night.

Thanking you in advance.

Yours sincerely, (Mein Name).

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English Text verbesssern - reply on complaint?

Hallo!! Ich habe bald english schularbeit mit paar Textsorten und bei einer davon habe ich leider schwierigkeiten, kann mir jemand bitte dabei helfen und verbessern? ich wäre sehr dankbar!! Ps: Oben ist die Beschwerde, unten meine Antwort.

Dear Mrs Cambell,

We were concerned to learn your E-Mail of complaint that we sent you a malfunctioning laserprinter.

Fist of all, we were sorry to learn of the unsatisfactory service you experienced from our technicians. Your annoyance is quite understandable.

Generally to our company, until now we had not received any complaints from our customers, that is the only situation. I am pretty sure, that the wrong delivery might be also playing a role for this error.

Moreover, due to your compalint weh ave now taken steps to ensure that error so that this does not occur in the future.

We would accept your suggestions and we would like to provide you to exchange the printer, in any case you can choose the printer for yourself. If you do not accept it, we are ready to pay back the whole cost.

In conclusion, we are wholeheartdly grateful that you have purchased from us and we promise that such sloppy ambiguities from our side will not take place.

Kind Regards,

Hans

Best Printer Manager

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Bitte korrigieren! A letter of applikation

Hallo! Könnt ihr bitte meinen Text korrigieren! Ich habe nämlich Englisch-Schularbeit! Danke schon Im Vorinein

Dear Mr. Hunting! I saw your advisement in the net and I would like to ably for the job. I am a 16-year old Austrian girl and I would love to spend some time in Italy before the school starts in September. I’ve plenty of experience with Kiddies and so to be an opere girl is my dream job. The only thing I would like to ask is if you think you could pay the flight to Italy for me because I haven’t any money. Thank you for your attention and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Marta Money

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bitte hilfe bei bewerbung auf englisch!

ich schreibe bald ne englischarbeit über praktikum, bewerbung schrieben usw.. hab mal ne bewerbung geschrieben, wäre echt nett wenn ihr mir sagen könntet ob ich was falsch geamcht habe..danke schonmal :)))

Application for a work experience placement in summer 2012

Dear Mr ....

I am writing to apply for a work experience placement with your firm next summer. I read your advertisement in the newspaper last week.

Currently I attend the 9th grade of a Gymnasium and when i leave school i plan to study social pedagogy. As you will see from the enclosed CV, i already hab a placement for a work experiece in a kindergarden last summer, so i have some knowlede of educating and helping at problems yet. Besides my side job is babysitting, which goes in this direction, too. This placement would give me the opportunity to extend my knowledge of working with kids. Should you require further information about my qualifications i wouls be pleased to quote references.

I hope very much that you are able to offer me a placement. I would be very motivated to help you and i would do my best to help you. Thank you for reading this application. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely .....

Encl. CV

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describe a cartoon?

Hey Leute, meine Aufgabestellung lautet: describe the picture and discuss the truth about this stereotype in a text of min. 100 words on your own.

Habe ich es richtig beschrieben? Habt ihr Änderungs-Verbesserungvorschläge?

On this cartoon we can see two situations: on the first one we see a man drowning and another man walking his dog on the path walk. The drowning man is asking for help but the man with the dog doesn't even bother to look at him. On the second one we have the same situation, but, this time, the man with the dog actually helps the other man. The difference is that this time, the drowning man is polite when he asks for help and that made all the difference. Instead of just shouting for help, he said: "Excuse me, Sir. I'm terribly sorry to bother you, but I wonder if you would mind helping me a moment, as long as it's no trouble, of course.". This cartoon portrays the British's politenes. Of course that in real life no one would be so polite when drowning; we would just shout "help" like the man in the first situation. But, we have to face it: British are more polite than everybody else. I'm not saying that the ones who aren't British are inferior or less educated, but it's true that they often forget words like "please" and "thank you". On this cartoon being polite makes the difference between life and death. It may be a little extreme, but who knows if it may or may not come true. So, if you happen to have a son, a daughter, a student who misbehaves and has lack of politeness, or if you just want them to be even more polite or educated than what you taught them to br, send them to England. Undoubtedly, they would thank you. At least, I know I would.

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Englisch Hausaufgabe Written Discussion Verbesserungsvorschläge?

Ich muss als Hausaufgabe eine Written Discussion schreiben. Könnte jemand über meine drüberschauen und sie Verbessern oder mir tipps geben wie ich sie besser machen kann ?

Aufgabenstellung: The Government plans to ration the usage of cars per person per year. Discuss this programme and suggest wyays to cope with car-related pollution.

There are some arguments for and against rationing the usage of cars per person per year.

First, people would have to use busses or trains more ofthen in small cities that would cause full busses and trains, because they do not have enough busses everywhere. People have to find a bus or train that comes to the rigth time to the rigth place.

Second. In Germany, we have to pay for our car taxes every year or we aren't allowed to use it. If we can only use it a bit, it would get much too expensive for that.

Another argument against is, that people who have to earn money by driving cars, will get problems. For example how could a taxi driver earn enough money for food, if he is not allowed to drive a car as ofthen as he wants to?

A good argument for rationing the usage of cars is, it would reduce the bad pollution from the cars, because they aren't used every day.

Another good argument for rationing the usage of cars is, we would have less traffic. That means that the people who are driving at that day can drive faster and there are no traffic jams anymore.

The last argument for is, the rushhour would not cause traffic jams when more people go by bus or train, so everyone comes punktual for work and can sleep longer, because they are faster.

On the one hand busses and trains might be full, but you can also ride your bike, so you will get no problems.

As conclusion I would say, the arguments for rationing the usage of cars are better than the arguments against, but there have to be special laws for people who earn their money by driving, like taxi drivers.

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Poetry Slam Meinung?

Wie findet ihr mein poetry slam? :) Seid ruhig ehrlich, klingt es besonders oder eher langweilig und albern? Und habt ihr Tipps bin noch „Anfängerin“ aber liebe es meine Gefühle durch das schreiben auszudrücken und möchte auch gerne Autorin später nebenbei werden :)

I wonder who will be the one who has a face that you could never forget, that would stay in your head, where you just couldn't stop looking at her, could I ever match that? One thing I know, when we saw each other, we both never thought that we would ever meet again as if we had some kind of relationship with each other. After that one night when you saw me, I knew you would forget me, why should that encounter be special to you? Because I was just another face of thousands for you, don't you remember me? Was my face too boring for you, was I just some uninteresting little girl for you? I am not the girl you would want to spend your life with, with whom you would share all your pain, every problem and every burden you carry. Because you know when I look at you I don't want to look away, every time I look at you every second goes by too fast until I'm waiting with longing for our next meeting, would we ever look at each other in such a way that you can't look away either, because when I look at you I feel something I never wanted to feel but in some way I like this feeling because it gives me butterflies in my stomach. Would you ever want me as much as you wanted her? because when you were talking about her you sounded so in love, you know i found it sweet on the one hand as a friend to hear that this love of boys still exists but on the other hand it broke me to thousand pieces to hear how she got the love I would like to get from you, isn't that unfair? She gets the love from you that she didn't appreciate at all, while I would have been the happiest person to be in her place.

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Gastfamilien Brief, ich mache 22/23 ein Auslandsjahr in den USA und würde gerne wissen ob ich Fehler in meinem Brief habe oder irgendwas neu schreiben sollte?

Dear future host family. First of all, I would like to thank you for reading my letter and giving me the opportunity to live in the USA for ten months and being part of your Family.

Now I would like to introduce myself. My name is xxx, xxx for short, and I am xx years old (turning xx in February)

I am living in xxx with my Family which consists of my mum, my sister, my brother and our dog Cooper. I love animals but unfortunately, I am allergic to cats and can’t live with them.

My parents are divorced. My dad lives about 15 minutes away from me with the car, and I also have a big sister, but she is old enough to live on her own. I have a really good relationship to my family, and we all get along pretty well. We try to spend as much time as possibly together, at Holidays, the weekends or on a walk with our dog.

I found some new friends in my new school, and I really like them, they are all extremely different with their personality and looks but at the end they are the kindest people that I have met so far, and I am so grateful for having them. I am already sad thinking about leaving them here in my home country, but they know that it’s my dream to live in the USA for 10 months and they are also excited for me.

I am attending the ninth schoolyear (Highschool). The focus of the school is technology and architecture. I need to take the train to get to the school and also the bus. My grades are good and its easy for me to learn new things, but I am also really clumsy, and I talk a lot and fast, but when I meet someone for the first time, I am really shy but as soon as they get to know me, I talk more.

I am spending my free time at the lake or going on bike rides. I am not doing any sports, but I would love to try something new in the USA, like Track & Field or Cheerleading. Some of my hobbies are swimming, biking, traveling and reading. I love to read. I try to read as many books as I can but it’s difficult because of all the schoolwork. I also love to bake and cook.

My Family and I are often in Italy especially in the summer holidays, my aunt loves to go there and most of the time we are going with her, we are all really close and help each other if we need anything.

I am helping my mum to keep the House clean. I am doing chores like vacuuming, doing the dishes or taking out the trash. We don’t have a chores plan (e.g., who does this chore on this day...) but if my mum asks me to do anything I will do it for her.

My dream is to become an Interior designer and work abroad, and after my graduation I would like to travel the world or be an Au pair in the USA, Australia or Canada.

I am hoping that I can bring you my culture, language and my Country closer by cooking you my favorite dish and teaching you some words in my mother tongue.

The reason why I want to go to the USA is not just to improve my English but to get to know the culture and eating habits and just to see if it really is like in the Movies.

der Rest ist in den Kommentaren.

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Englisches Jobinterview - Bitte Kontrolle :) Hab ich das richtig gemacht?

Hallo Community, habe ich folgenden Dialog richtig übersetzt? Am liebsten wär es für mich, wenn ihr den folgenden Text kopiert und anschließend berichtigt. Ich freue mich für jede sinnvolle Antwort. An alle noch ein frohes Jahr und ein gutes, fröhliches 2018!

Applicant (A), Interviewer/employer (I)

A klopft an,

I: "Come in! “,

A: "Good morning! How are you? “,

I: "Good morning, I’m fine, thanks. How are you? “

A: “I’m fine, too, thank you.”

I: “Sit down, please! My name is . Tell me something about you, please.”

A: “My name is , I’m 24 years old and I come from Germany. I am interested to work in the Facility management. (ODER “I’m interested in being a caretaker.”)”

I: “Where did you go to school in Germany?

A: “My primary school was the . Grundschule (wegen Eigenname deutschen Namen benutzt, richtig so?) and later I took my Abitur at the .

I: “What’s that, an Abitur?”

A: “That’s like the British A-Levels.”

I: “Ah okay, I didn’t know this. Did you have any work experience yet?

A: “During a social work school project I helped to clean a school house and I worked as a caretaker in a hotel in Berlin for 2 years.”

I: “What are your qualities and skills?”

A: “I love tidiness and I like pupils. I always wanted a job at school but I didn’t want to be a caretaker. Also, I like fixing broken things and taking care for plants.”

I: “Thank you but that isn’t really what I wanted to hear. What are your qualities and skills? Why are you the ideal person for this job? Why should we employ you?”

A: “I’m perfect for this job because I’m well educated because of my A-Levels and I already have 2 years of work experience.

I: “Thank you very much! Do you have any questions, too?”

A: “Yes, I have ´. Which remit would I have to undertake exactly? (Welchen Aufgabenbereich würde ich genau übernehmen?)

I: “You’ll have to take care about the school garden and you’ll have to clean the floors. A typical task for facility manager is to rake up the leaves. In winter, a facility manager takes over the winter service.”

A: “Okay, I have another question. How would a working day look like?” (ALTERNATIVE: How would you describe a typical day and week in this position?)

I: “At 8 o’clock you’ll open the school for pupils and teachers. At 9 o’clock the lessons start. Until then, all classrooms should be open. From 9 to 13 o'clock they would do all pending (anstehende) tasks. From 1 to 2 pm you have lunch break. At 4 pm you would put chairs on the tables. At 5 pm you would complete the classrooms again.”

A: “Thanks for the detailed answer! I’m just curious, when was the school built?”

I: “In 1922 a very famous Scientist named Peggy Edmund opened this Science school. This year we have anniversary for 95 years. Do you have any other questions?”

A: “No; I didn’t, thanks.”

I: “Name, nice meeting you. Thank you for coming. I'll contact you in about 2 weeks.”

A: “Thank you for the job interview invitation and I look forward to the answer in 2 weeks. Good Bye!”

I: “Good Bye, See you!”

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Ich brauche dringend Hilfe bei einer Englischen Aufgabe?

1. Assignment:

• Fill in the gaps in the following blog with weather vocabulary.

• You have the first letter of the word you are looking for to help you:

We flew to Tasmania on December 23^rd to have a summer Christmas! In Aberdeen it was r[. . .] (1) cats and dogs and the forecast was no s[. . .] (2) for Christmas – just f[. . .] (3) and drizzle. When we landed in Holbart, I could feel the hot s[. . .] (4) as soon as we left the plane! We had a h[. . .] (5) for the whole two weeks – two weeks of fantastic sunshine and not a c[. . .] (6) in the sky! We had r[. . .] (7) temperatures for Tasmania, but because we were always near the sea, we had a lovely cool b[. . .] (8). When it was too hot, we went for walks in the c[. . .] (9) forests and swam in the crystal-clear water. We had to use a lot of suntan lotion to make sure we didn’t get s[. . .] (10). I will never forget the brilliant blue s[. . .] (11) and the empty beaches … the best Christmas present for my family and me!

2. Assignment:

• What will you do if the following things happen on your holiday?

• Write sentences using the conditional 1.

• Example: If there is a hurricane, I’ll stay in the accommodation.

1. flood

2. heatwave

3. hail

4. hot and humid

5. feel under the weather

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Lyrik: Worum geht es in diesem Gedicht?

Hallo,

ich lese gerne Gedichte in meiner Freizeit, doch manchmal verstehe ich nicht wirklich, was der Autor aussagen möchte.

Was würdet ihr sagen, ist die Aussagen von diesen Gedicht?

To see a World in a Grain of Sand
And a Heaven in a Wild Flower,
Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand 
And Eternity in an hour.

A Robin Redbreast in a Cage
Puts all Heaven in a Rage.
A dove house fill’d with doves and pigeons
Shudders Hell thro’ all its regions.
A Dog starv’d at his Master’s Gate
Predicts the ruin of the State.
A Horse misus’d upon the Road
Calls to Heaven for Human blood.
Each outcry of the hunted Hare
A fiber from the Brain does tear.

He who shall train the Horse to War
Shall never pass the Polar Bar.
The Beggar’s Dog and Widow’s Cat,
Feed them and thou wilt grow fat.
The Gnat that sings his Summer song 
Poison gets from Slander’s tongue.
The poison of the Snake and Newt
Is the sweat of Envy’s Foot.

A truth that’s told with bad intent
Beats all the Lies you can invent.
It is right it should be so;
Man was made for Joy and Woe;
And when this we rightly know
Thro’ the World we safely go.

Every Night and every Morn
Some to Misery are Born.
Every Morn and every Night
Some are Born to sweet delight.
Some are Born to sweet delight,
Some are Born to Endless Night.

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Host family letter Schüleraustausch?

Hallo liebe Gutefrage Community,

Da ich nächsten August in ein Auslandsjahr in den Vereinigten Staaten starte muss ich in meinem Gastfamiliensuchprozess eine Nachricht an potentielle Gastfamilien schreiben. Da meine Eltern und sonstige bekannte jedoch keine Ehrfahrung mit solchen Themen haben und auch eher mäßiges Englisch sprechen bitte ich um Feedback und Verbesserungsvorschlage

Dear host family,

First of all I’d like to thank you for taking your time to get an impression of me and my life in Germany. So let me introduce myself to make sure that we are a perfect match as host family and exchange student.

My name is xxx and I’m a future exchange student from Germany. I’ve always been passionate about the chance to do an exchange year in the United States. It’s like a dream come true to get this opportunity. I want to make use of my 10 months in America to get to know the country and the people, widen my knowledge on the many amazing cultures North America is home to and also leave behind an impression of myself and the German culture.

I live in a village in the countryside of northern Germany together with my parents and my little brother who is three years younger than me. I have a great relationship with my family especially with my brother. We spend much time together and can talk about anything.

In my free time I like to work out in the gym. I’m a really sporty person so I usually train up to 5 times per week. Additionally I’m a passionate badminton player. That’s why I’m working as a badminton coach to be able to provide a place for children to experience the same fun I had growing up while learning badminton. Also I have some experience in computer programming and like to code my own small applications. Therefore I could very well imagine myself taking a career path in an IT related direction.

My friends would describe me as an open minded, friendly, spontaneous and funny person, in general friends are a really important part of my live. I absolutely love going out and spending time with my close friends. On weekdays we often visit the nearby city or go to the gym together. On the weekend we spend long and funny evenings together together to create unforgettable memories.

To sum it all up I think that as your exchange student I could offer you a great picture of the German way of living and that we could spend an awesome year together getting to know each others culture and also as a person. I’m exited to meet you and hoping to hear from you soon!

Best wishes from Germany,

xxx

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Tagebuch einer Klassenfahrt nach London

Ich muss in Englisch einen Tagebuch über unsere Londonfahrt schreiben und wollte mal fragen ob jemand den ersten Tag Korrektur liest. Danke.

Dear Diary, Today we started our trip from ....to London. It was a long journey, but the bus was fantastic. We met in front of our school at 4.45 am. Everybody of us was excited because the day of the departure had arrived. At 5.00 am we started our trip to London. We drove through Germany, the Netherlands, Belgium and France. First we thought, the drive would be very boring, but it wasn't. Our bus ride was very funny. We sung many songs together, listened to music and played games. In Calais we took the ferry to Dover. The passage was about 1 hour long. The size of the ferry and the view of deck fascinated me. At about 21.30 pm we arrived at Maidenhead. All host mums and dads waited there and the students in the bus were getting excited. Everybody thought which mom is my mom?orI want to have this dad. We got our pogs and waited. We waited and waited. .....and me got nervous. We got to know our mum, Mrs. .....and her child, and drove to her flat. The flat was nice. Small, but new fixtures. In the living room our mum introduced her son to us and told about her family. Their son, is five years old and her husband is at the moment in Germany to the army. She herself comes from Somalia and lives for 7 years in London. Also we told about our families and the bus ride. At 11 pm .... and me went to bed. Everybody had his own room. It was a hard day for us and we only wanted to sleep! Although I am very tired, I still can't sleep. I hope my second day in London will be very good. Good night!

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Ist das korrektes Englisch?


Dear xy,

Firstly I would like to thank you for your kind message.

The job offer sounds great. I would like to know more about the conditions.


When are you looking for a salesperson? I'm basically interested, but I was thinking of a part-time job of 20 hours a week. Would that also be in your interest?

Let me know.

Best regards, 
xy

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