Englisch Referat 9.Klasse: Stimmt das so?

3 Antworten

Hallo,

warum sollten wir einen Text korrigieren, der stellenweise per copy & past erstellt wurde - z. B. dieser Satz: Typically the term “fast food” refers to food, sold in a restaurant or store with preheated or precooked ingredients? Nicht nur wikipedia lässt hier grüßen.

Von mir hier nur so viel:

Überprüfe deine Zeichensetzung, Satzstellung und Rechtschreibung.

Ich empfehle für das Vokabular ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!

AstridDerPu

Danke, hier lässt aber nur Wikipedia grüßen :)

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Copy & past? I think, you mean copy & paste, because copy & past doesn't really make sense.

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"So I'll start with some general information ABOUT fast food..."
"Fast food is the reason THAT the USA nearly has got the most..."

Ich denke so müsste es stimmen, aber ich gebe KEINE Garantie!! :D
Ich finde den Vortrag inhaltlich sehr gut und interessant. Und ich habe jetzt lust auf Fast Food. Danke :D 

Danke für den Kommentar, werde ich so machen :)

Achja, und Entschuldigung wegen dem Daumen nach unten, meine Mum hat gestört und ich habe mich verklickt ... grrrr

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Ich würd so Anfangen:

Have you ever been to a McDonald`s?

Most people like to order a hamburger or a cheeseburger. We all know, that Burgers or other food made by McDonald`s called fast food...

*IS called Fast Food.

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Ne kann man auch ohne `is` schreiben

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Wo kommt "only" in diesem Satz hin? (Englisch, Satzbau)

Also: A person who makes an effort to eat only food that is..... Oder A person who makes an effort only to eat food that is .....

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Könnte jemand bitte meine Englisch Argumentation korrektur lesen?

Asbos

In Britain, children and teenagers can be given an ASBO if they do anything that is an antisocial behavior. It’s a way of punishing them for their actions instead of going to prison or similar punishments. An ASBO consists of several punishments like being forbidden to go to different areas of a town or to meet specific people.

The problem with ASBO’s is that they can give the person depression because they are socially isolated. Consequently, this can lead to self harm or depression in the worst cases. Secondly, their actions aren’t primarily punished they are prevented so that the child/teen won’t do it anymore. Furthermore, the things that are reported aren’t necessarily illegal sometimes it’s just something that might be annoying to others, like tattoos. Having said that, this might just be a way of showing personality. Reportedly, it has happened that someone was just given an ASBO because he looked scary and was always wearing a hood. Another thing to add is that the pictures that are hung up around town can be really embarrassing and can lead to harassment by others. On the other hand, ASBOS also have advantages. Many teenagers have their problems with school, friends etc. This might lead to some illegal actions like drinking or smoking. In addition to that, there often is some kind of group pressure. ASBO’s are a way of showing them that their actions are wrong and that there is a solution to their problems. For instance, it’s a way of identifying that their actions have been wrong. Another key thing to remember is that ASBO’s can keep the children/teenagers from going to prison and that would be way worse.

All things considered, I think that ASBO’s can be good for the young people to change their antisocial behavior. That way, they can understand that their actions have been wrong and change them for good.

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