Mein englisch Text überprüfen?
Ich sollte eine summery schreiben und ich wollte fragen , ob jemand schauen könnte , ob mein Text die Kriterien der Zeit(present tense, present perfect, future tense)erfüllt und die Rechtschreibung überprüfen könnte. Wäre super dankbar:)
The book excerp The Meeting from the novel Go Well, Stay Well is written by Toeckey Jones in 1979 deals with the topic of racism, contempt and skepticism towards the dark in the past it is told about a girl who is injured. Her dark-skinned girl helps her. At first she is suspicious of the girl and only because of her skin color.
Candy was a white girl one day went for a walk, twisted her ankle. A black girl helped her, Candy thought she wanted to steal from her and would rather have a white person help her. When they laughed together they were looked at strangely. They then went to the park where the dark-skinned helped her to sit on the grass. when the dark-skinned woman had the chance to steal from her while Candy dropped the bag she didn't, she worried about Candy( her ankle). Candy started to like her and they "befriends". They wanted to go and drink something together, but the dark-skinned woman was not allowed to go into any coffee bar because she was black. They talked. Candy called her father to pick her up. The father picked up Candy, didn't really pay attention to the dark-skinned girl and then he wanted to pay her for being so nice to his daughter. The dark-skinned woman refused the money.
1 Antwort
Guten Abend,
Erstens, auf Interpunktur achten!
Zweitens, da ist kein Ende, also der Schlussteil des Textes.
Drittens, Candy ist englisch für Süßigkeit, also kannst du die gerne aufessen.
Das darf man bei einer Summery doch nicht
Und was meinst du mit es gibt kein Ende