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When I meet my friends we go swimming together. Later we stroll/walk through Chelsea/Schwabing and watch other people...

Nun kannst weiter machen.

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Hallo,

ein guter Anfang:

Wiederhole das Thema oder einen Teil davon und vermeide so eine Themenverfehlung.

Zeitangabe:

- In the nineteenth century,

- For many years now,

- Last summer,

Ortsangabe:

- In Britain,

- All over the world,

Person:

My friend Tony

Andere Aufsatzanfänge:

- Once upon a time (Märchenanfang)

- First of all,

- With reference to

- Perhaps you already know/perhaps you are already aware that

Nützliche Redewendungen:

- first of all

- firstly

- to begin with

- initially

- in any case

- certainly

- on no condition

- under no cirumstances

- therefore

- as a result of this

- as a consequence of

- in my opinion

- it is my conviction that

- as far as I am concerned

- to my mind

- I take the view that

- I look at it this way

- I take the opinion that

- I am in two minds about

- I doubt that

- I am uncertain about this

- I am doubtful whether

- it is all the same to me

- I do not mind whether

- it does not concern me

- it is none of my business

- I have no interest in

- on the contrary

- contrarily

- in opposition with

- in contrast to

- on the other hand

- in comparison with

- by way of comparison

- we must take into account that

- we must bear in mind that

- we must consider that

- I want to bring to your attention

- I would like to draw your attention to the fact

- Let me point out to you

- in any case

- whatever may happen

- at all events

- under no condition

- under no circumstances

- there is no way that

- under the condition that

- provided that

- it all depends (up)on

- however

- on the other hand

- furthermore

- additionally

- I have reached the conclusion

- I have come to the conclusion

- I have formed the opinion

- last of all

- finally

- eventually

- in conclusion

- lastly

- when all the arguments are considered

- comparing all the advantages and disatvantages

- comparing all the pros and cons

- I would like to put it in fewest possible words

- In a nutshell

Adverbien, die am Satzanfang stehen können, sind z.B.:

•Firstly

•Initially

•Certainly

•Therefore

•Contrarily

•However

•Furthermore

•Moreover

•Additionally

•Finally

•Eventually

•Lastly

•Fortunately

•Perhaps

•Luckily

•Briefly

•Honestly

•Personally

•Understandably

•Obviously

•Apparently

•Of course

•Yesterday

•Sometimes

Sätze verbindet man stilistisch 'elegant':

• mit Relativpronomen, also durch die Bildung von Relativsätzen

z.B.: which = welcher, -e, -es (für Dinge, Tiere); who = welcher, -e, -es (für Personen)

• durch Participle Constructions wie z.B.:

Most children living in slums are ill. Passing the church, we saw a wedding carriage. Given
an apple, the boy stopped crying. We read the recommended book. Having
taken the children to school, he went on to the office. Having lived
there for such a long time, they didn't want to move to another town.
Having read his letter, she was very happy.

• durch Konjunktionen (conjunctions) wie z.B.:

after = nach; although = obwohl; and = und; because = weil; both ....
and = sowohl als auch; but= aber; either .... or = entweder oder; even
though = obwohl; however = jedoch; if = wenn, falls; in order to = um
zu; neither .... nor = weder noch; nevertheless = dennoch, trotzdem; not
only .... but as well/but also = nicht nur, sondern auch; or = oder;
since = da ja, weil; so = deshalb; so that - so dass; that = welcher,
-e, -es (für Dinge, Tiere, Personen); that's why = deshalb; though =
obwohl; to = um zu; when = als; whereas = wohingegen; while = während;

Weitere finden sich unter den folgenden Links:

eslflow.com/transitionalconnectingandlinkingwords.html

english-at-home.com/grammar/linking-words/

:-) AstridDerPu

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Tipp:

Schreibe erst auf Deutsch, was Du mit deinen Freunden gewöhnlich unternimmst und übersetze es dann ins Englische. ;-)

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Hey es wäre hilfreich, wenn du Beispielsätze von dir hier einfügst und wir dann berichtigen/ergänzen/Tipps geben können ;)

Ich schreib meine Texte auch meist zuerst auf Deutsch und übersetze sie dann, könntest du ja auch probieren ;)

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Also erstmal wäre wichtig, was du mit deinen Freunden machst, dann könnte ich dir helfen und es übersetzen. 

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