Englisch: Formalen Text umschreiben?
In dem folgenden Text muss ich informelle Wörter und Ausdrücke markieren und diese dann Formell umschreiben.
My last year in High School is finally over and I want to apply for your volunteer program in Peru this Summer. I was reading stuff on your website about it and I think that program sounds awesome. I think it would be cool to work with kids in orphanages or in schools. I've actually already done that here in the US. My high school has a volunteer program that I was a part of. We helped kids in difficult situations with their homework and reading and we did fun activities together. I helped organise these things and and the kids liked me a lot. I'm also great at speaking Spanish already because I've been taking Spanish classes since I was 12 years old. Since I want to become a teacher in a Spanish-speaking community, going to Peru would be a good experience for me.
Es gibt noch einige, wo ich mir unsicher bin. Was würdet ihr noch markieren an meiner Stelle?
2 Antworten
Hallo,
- awesome
- actually
- done
- was a part of
- things
- a lot
- great
AstridDerPu
Awesome, things,
Ist Since wirklich informell?
Nein aber es wiederholt sich an der Stelle auch ziemlich oft. Ist das eher unpassend oder kann man das so lassen?
Dankeschön :-) Könnte ich statt was a part of sagen: .. I have been associated with?