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Wie schreibe ich Gedichte in einer Fremdsprache?

Um mir selbst eine Herausforderung zu stellen habe ich versucht, ein Gedicht auf Englisch zu schreiben. Irgendwie wirkt das ganze jedoch sehr Oberflächlich und viele der Reine sind auch eher flach und funktionieren nicht richtig, jedoch finde ich das, was das Gedicht thematisiert, eigentlich ganz in Ordnung. (Erfahrungen in toxischen Beziehungen am Anfang der Teenagerzeit, Gruppenzwang, wie Nicotin eine Einstiegsdroge ist und dich immer mehr in den Teufelskreis bringst usw.) Habt ihr Tipps, wie ich das besser hinbekomme? Oder ist das einfach nur Übungssache? Hier ist noch das Gedicht: Nicotine You are my nicotine The first drug I tried So calm and good for my soul yet addictive and toxic,maybe something in between Still, I was just fourteen You are nicotine to my soul I knew that touching you is bad Yet I refused to listen to my thought, loosing already control Loosing my senses because I breethed in to much, left in the corner and sad I don't know if it was too much nicotine or too much of you But now i'm lost Lost in the depths of my first trip, maybe you are cocaine too It's 4am in the morning and I want to make you mine You're like nicotine, I hate you but I can't stay away from you I left you multiple calls but to none of my messages you replied I miss you and I miss nicotine too I'll die slowly with you But I can't live without you too

Könnte vielleicht jemand korrigieren, ob das stimmt?

Hier als Text: "Americans went into this election eyes wide open about Donald J Trump [...]" Metaphor - The literal meaning is to have one's eyes wide open to see or witness everything. → The figurative meaning is that Trump supporters were aware of the fact that Trump is a convicted felon, a racist, and has been involved in other controversies, yet they still voted for him. "[...] will return to the most powerful job in the world" Hyperbole Meaning: → The President of the United States holds immense power and influences not only his own country but also the entire world with their decisions. "His critics may want to paint his resurrection as an aberration or a sign of electors who aren't paying attention" Allusion resurrection → Rising of Christ after crucifixion → Trumps reelection after his loss in 2020 Similie Meaning: - Critics believe there was significant confusion among voters or that they were not well-informed. "[...] take a gamble on a political unknown […..]" Allusion Explanation: - Trump was a successful developer and not a politician at that time, but people still voted for him despite his lack of experience. "I...J leaders now call "tariffs" the most beautiful word in the world" Hyperbole Explanation: → There are plenty of other words that sound better or have a deeper meaning, but the leaders think that "tariffs" is the most beautiful word in the world, which highlights its importance to them. "'...] inflation is political poison." Metaphor Literal: venomous or toxic acids / chemicals leading to death Figurative: Inflation is the increase in prices and the decline in the purchasing power of money, which can lead to unemployment and other problems within the country. "Trump is a showman (...J" Metaphor Literal: entertainer Figurative: Trump knows how to present himself to a large crowd and how to advertise accordingly.
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