wir schreiben ja morgen english arbeit und habe jetzt den text über mein zimmer gschrieben :D

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Hallo,

My room

I have my own room. My room is sometimes tidy and sometimes untidy. The colour of the walls is red. There are posters of stars hanging on the wall. Next to the door there is my TV. I can watch TV and I sometimes play wii. On my desk there is my computer and I also do my homework at the desk. When I look out of my window I can see our garden. My bedspread is white with red flowers, my furniture is black and my curtain is white. The colour of my wardrobe is red and white.

:-) AstridDerPu

dankeschööön astrid :DD

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welche Klassenstufe? In DEUTSCH lernt man übrigens nie einen satz mit AND/UND zu beginnen. Und du musst dich entscheiden ob BE oder AE.

Und was ist daran so schlimm, einen Satz auch mal mit "Und" oder "And" zu beginnen? Und: Du tust es übrigens selbst. Kommata täten Deinen Sätzen auch gut. Ich sage das übrigens nur, weil Du jemand anders für seine Fehler in DEUTSCH kritisierst.
Gruß, earnest

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@earnest

Dass bringt doch nichts gegenseitig beleidigend zu werden.... An rejes - lese doch mal nach der Schularbeit ein paar englische Bücher - da siehst du wie man schön Sätze beginnt und mit wieviel verschiedenen Worten man sich ausdrücken kann.. : )

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@earnest

eafnest ich schreibe hier auch im Internet das ist wohl ein himmelweiter Unterschied!

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I can watch tv or sometimes play wii. On my desk stands my computer where I often do my homework. When I look out of my window I can see our garden. My bedspread is white with red flowers, my furniture is black, my curtain is white and my wardrobe color is red and white.

Englisch Personenbeschreibung Korrektur lesen bitte Hilfe?

Bitte helft mir ich habe niemanden der mir den Text korrigieren kann :/ und morgen schreibe ich eine Arbeit ... also: This is a movie poster of Romeo and Juliet. That movie poster was drawn. The illustration shows Romeo and Juliet and they kiss. In this illustration you can see that they are in love and really happily. The painting is special of the love behimd this picture. The picture reminds me on teenagers who have freshly fallen in love and it is a very realistic picture because one can identify with the persons. In the background and also at the top is like a yellow bright ball surrounded by a red orange colour. In the yellow ball is a burning red heart with roses from inside and a red flame at the top ot the heart. The heart in the yellow is surrounded at the left and right side of black white furious men with guns in their hands turned on the heart in the middle.

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Ist meine englische Zimmerbeschreibung so in Ordnung?

Hallo (: Ich sollte mein Zimmer auf Englisch beschreiben, wie findet ihr die Beschreibung? Habt ihr verbesserungs-Vorschläge?

Hier der Text: *

When you open the door you can see a shelf with CD's on the right,next to the shelf is the bed, in front of the bed hangs the TV on the wall, under the TV is a desk with a computer and a chair. On my windowsill are flowers,The colour of my curtain is beige. In the right corner next to the window is a cupboard with school things in it, next to it is a little shelf with my parfume collection and jewelry.In the left corner of the room is another shelf with books in it.Near the shelf stands the couch, and next to the couch my warderobe. My furniture is white,my walls orange and the floor is dark laminated. *

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Was könnte ich in dem Aufsatz ,,My dream job" noch schreiben?

Hallo leute, ich habe einen Aufsatz auf englisch geschrieben der über mein Traumberuf handelt. Ich muss 15 Sätze haben aber ich habe nur 11 Sätze. Kann mir jemand helfen noch 4 Sätze dazu zuschreiben? Ich bin übrigens 14 und habe sicher irgendwo fehler in dem Text!

My dream job:

I'd like to become a primary school teacher. There are postitive and negative aspects in the job. The job is well paid and you have breaks during the lessons. The good thing about the job is that it is not dangerous at work. One thing else is that you have long summer holidays. You don't work on the weekend and you have fixed working hours, however, the job has also negative aspects. The bad thing about this job is that you have stress and that you have to have patient. In the class are sometimes disrespectful pupils and they don't listent to you. That's why it may be that there is noise in the class. At home you have to control the homework of the pupils and have stress because you have to work quickly. A big problem for me is to get up early. But if you want to become that job, you will get used to it.

Ich weiß da sind Fehler drinnen aber ich bin kein Profi! Kann mir also bitte jemand helfen noch 4 Sätze zu schreiben?

Danke an die Leute die das durchgelesen haben und mir antworten :)

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Written discussion

Hallo wir haben als hausaufgabe aufbekommen eine written discussion zu schreiben. Ich hab mal eine geschrieben könntet ihr den mal durchlesen und meine fehler korrigieren oder verbesserungen vorschlagen?

Thema:Mobile phones have become an important part of our lives.More than 90% of german teenagers have a mobile phone of their own.What are the advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones?

Mobile phones have become an important part of our lives. More than 90 % of German teenagers have a mobile phone. But is a mobile phone really important? Here are advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones.

My first argument against mobile phones is that the most teenagers use a mobile phone in the lesson. They play games and send emails or short messages to someone. So they are they are distracted from the lesson and get bad marks.

The next point is, that some people can’t stop using mobile phones. They get addicted.They lose their social contacts and spend all their time on their mobile phones.A good example is my friends brother, he haven’t got social contacts he is all the time write short messages or calls to friends.

The last point is that mobile phones are unhealthy. I have heard in many television reports that mobile phones can be cause of cancer.

On the other hand there are arguments for the using of mobile phones too.

Firstly you are very flexible. You can use it everywhere at any time.For example you are waiting for the next train and you are bored, you can use your mobile phone. You can listen to music,play games or go online when you have an Internet flat. More Important is that the mobile phone is helpful in case of emergency.If something happen on the way to school or somewhere else you can call to the emergency.

The most important is that you are always be in contact with your friends and your family. So your parents mustn’t care where you are. With one call they can know it.

After looking at both sides I’m in the opinion that mobile phones are important for the most people.

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