Englisch hilfe Thema "all about me"
Guten Abend ! Also ich habe am Montag die Englisch mündlich Prüfungen. Meine Englisch Lehrerin hat meinen Text zuvor schon korrigiert und ihr gefiel das, da ich aber ca. 5 Minuten über das Thema "all about me" erzählen muss habe ich da noch einiges hinzugefügt.. Nun ist euer Rat gefragt ob es da unlogische Sätze u.ä gibst. Rechtschreibfehler können bleiben ich muss es halt nur mündlich auf der richtigen Art und Weise aussprechen können. Danke im voraus.
Good Morning !!
I want to tell you something about me. My name is Max Mustermann I´am 15 years old. I was born second October 1995 in Germany, Berlin. I have a brother his name is PETER, he is 17 years old, he goes to School. And I have a sister her name is CAROL she is 9 years old, she goes to school, too. My father is HEINRICH he is 43 years old, he works in FIRMENNAME. My mother is CLAUDIA she is 38 years old she works in FIRMENNAME.
I have many friends his names are: Michael, Ahmet, Tom, Marsel and Dennis their hobbys are playing football and going outside. But my best friend is Tom, becouse 2 years before he helped me on a diffikult situation. On my free time I going outside, going swimming, or I learn for school. I goes with Dennis once per week swimming. I watch often TV or learn for school. My favourite music star is SIDO he is a german rap star. And my favourite football star is Philipp Lahm he plays in Germany, Bayern München
I live in a big house. My room is normal, the color of my room is white. I have in my room a TV, PC; chair, table, bed, many games, a furniture and a flag of germany.
I go by bus to school. Every day of my school started 8pm and ends always at 2pm. On friday ends my school at 1.30 am. In my class are 19 childrens 8 girls and 11 boys. On the breakfast I playing football. My favourite subjekt is german and math.
Hey ich weiss nicht ob du das noch lesen wirst weil dein Kommentar schon 6 Jahre alt ist, aber ich bin derzeit in der 8. Klasse und muss auch innerhalb von 5-8 min. Ein kleines Referat vortragen.
Was ich damit aber eigentlich sagen möchte das ich deinen Text als kleine Hilfestellung nehme 😄😉
Liebe grüsse: Ein unbekannter User
I want to tell you something about myself. My name is Max Mustermann ).
Satzstellung: (Zeit) S-P/V-O (Subjekt-Prädikat/Verb-Objekt)-Ort-(Zeit)
I have a brother calledPETER. He is 17 years old and goes to school. I also have a sister. Her name is CAROL, she is 9 years old and she goes to school, too. My father is HEINRICH. He is 43 years old and works at/for FIRMENNAME. My mother is CLAUDIA. She is 38 years old and works at/for FIRMENNAME.
In my free time, I go out, go swimming, or learn for school. I go swimming with Dennis once a week. I often watch TV, or learn for school. (Wiederholung)
My favourite music star is SIDO, a German rap star and my favourite football star is Philipp Lahm, who plays for Bayern München, Germany**.
I live in a big house. My room is of average size and its walls are painted in white**.
In my room there are a TV, PC; chair, table, bed, many games, some furniture and a flag of Germany.
I go to school by bus.
School starts at 8 am and ends at 2 pm every day
On Fridays, school ends at 1.30 am.
On the breakfast I playing football. (Auf dem Frühstück spiele ich gerade Fußball ???)
My favourite subjects are German and Maths.
Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Viel Glück und Erfolg für die Prüfung.
I am ohne Apostrophe = ´
I was born on the 2nd of october 1995 in Berlin, Germany
I have a brother called Peter .. he goes to school (school wird nicht großgeschrieben!)
I have a sister, whose name is Carol, she is nine years old
I have many friends, their names are (plural!!!): ----, their hobbies are playing football and going out.
My best friend is Tom, because he once helped me out of a difficult situation!
In my spare time I usually go out, go to swimm or learn for school.
Once a week I go to swimm with Denis.
I like to watch TV. (Du hast schon gesagt, daß Du für die Schule lernst!)
My favourite music star is Sido, he is a german rap star (aufpassen auf die Satzzeichen!)
My favourite football star is..., he plays for Bayern Munich, Germany
I live in a big house. The size of my own room is average. The walls of my room are painted in white... was meinst Du mit furniture (furniture ist Möbel allgemein. Um ein Möbelstück zu sagen = a piece of furniture, furniture kann alles sein: Couch, Tisch, Stühle, Bett, usw..)
I take the bus in order to go to school. School starts every day at 08.00 a.m. and always finishes at 14.00 p.m.
School finishes at 13.30 p.m. on fridays.
In my class we are 19 children, 8 girls and 11 boys.
After breakfast I play football (dann meinst Du jeden Tag!)
My favourite topics are maths and German.
Englisch Referat über mich und meine Familie! VERBESSERUNG BITTE!
Ich muss ein Referat halten über mich und meiner Familie deswegen wollte ich mal fragen wie ihr das hier findet. Ich würde mich freuen wenn ihr mein Referat verbessert! :))
Hello, my name is Linda G... and I am 16 years old since the 10. April 1997. Now I tell them some things about my family.
I have 1 brother and 1 sister both are younger than me. The name from my brother is Labinot he’s 12 years old. He goes at the Dreifaltigkeits-Mittelschule Amberg. The name from my sister is Shkrute she’s 15, in other words, she enters puberty. She goes to the Luitpoldschule Amberg. My father and my brother have birthday on the same day. My father will be 50.
My mother is 48 years old she has married my father at the age of 25. she couldn't have any children about 7 years. My mother and my father was born in Kosovo. They first went after Kroatia and live there about 4 years because my father has worked there. They live in Kroatia with my oncle and his wife. After 4 years they went to Germany as asylum seekers. First they was in Cham, after then they went amberg. Then I was born.
My family and I live here in Amberg. We life in a beautiful house. At home we speak more Albanian than german. It's very important be able to master his mother tongue, because we visit our home country. We visit every year my related in Kosovo they live in the capital, Prishtina. And we visit Ulqin for 10 days. this is a beach city in Montonegro.
Now I tell them a little about myself and my best friend. In the future i would to work in a büro. I would like have a nice future. The important is that I have a good Job, and a nice family. But first i must have a good school graduation. My favourite hobby is shopping. I love it to buy new clothes. But I have so little money. I'm a stundent and have no money.
I have a best friend. Her name is Isabel she's 15. She has long fair hair. She looks like a Barbie. She is so beautiful. Sometimes she is a bit crazy, but it's very funny. We just laughter every day when we are at school. That's not ok, but we can't otherwise. She is awesome.