Hallo ich habe im März meine Englisch-Prüfung, da muss ich etwas über meine Familie erzählen und wollte wissen ob der Text so passt?
Ladies and Gentelmen,
today I would like to welcome you all to my presentation. In my presentation, I will introduce my family to you. My name is Lisa Maier. I am 14 years old and I live in Ersbach. Ersbach is a small town in the south of Germany.
Originally I came from Gräfenhainichen, a city in the east of Germany. Because of work, my family moved here in 2005. At this time I was 2 years old.
At first we lived in Reichenbach, a small village near Ersbach. In this house my grandmother died last year. So we decided to move to Ersbach. Now I live together with my mother and grandfather in a semi-detached house.
Aside from the fact that my grandmother died I would like to tell you something about her. Her name was Karin and she was 72 years old. She was born in 1943 in Jüdenberg.
So we come to my grandfather. His name is Bruno. He is 76 years old and pensioner. He was born in Kasale in 1941. Today Kasale is located in Poland.
My mother's name is Annett. She is 46 years old and works as an Nursing assistant at the Kloster Sießen near Bad Saulgau. She grew up in the former GDR and originally she learned the job of the gardener. When we moved here, she decided to go back to school.
I also have 2 siblings. A big sister, her name is Carolin. She is 28 years old, housewife and married. She already has a little son. His name is Lisandro and he is 4 years old. Her husband is called Roman, 31 years old and a carpenter.
And a big brother. His name is Tim. He is 23 years old and lives in Fronreute. He is a machining mechanic. Few years ago he went to the secondary school in Bad Schussenried.
Finally, I would like to introduce you to our cat. She is called Putzi and is 4 years old.
As soon as I have my secondary school leaving certificate, I would like to make the next higher school-leaving qualification. With this graduation I will be able to start my training as a nurse.
Thank you for listening.
Klingt gut, aber eher wie ein Referat als wie etwas für eine mündliche Prüfung. Wenn ihr das in dem Style sagen sollt, ist alles gut, aber sonst würde ich den Anfang mit "ladies and gentlemen" und den Schluss mit "thank you" weglassen.
Nicht schlecht schon mal einen Applaus verdient.
Ich hätte noch einige Vorschläge..
"Because of work" würde ich : The reason of this movement was the work from my parents. scrhreiben
"At this time I was 2 years old." würde ich : There i was like 2 years old. schreiben
"she learned the job of the gardener" würde ich villeicht schreiben : She made an education about the gardening. oder so was
Ansonsten Sehr gut :D