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Let me tell you a story bout my brodie,

He is 13,

So dont judge him iykyk

Verse 1:

He says to me he got voices in his head,

He is depressed,

He is really sad,

The voices in his head telling him to kill his dad,

I tell him that he needs help,

He says hes afraid,

And can do it by him self,

Hope K wont end it,

I said dont do it,

K was like ok,

He's just waiting till it ends,

Dunno if he got blood on his heads,

K aint even leave the room,

He js running in the doom,

Wanna bring him to the therapist,

I know that K needs an specialist,

Always telling it to him,

But he wont listen,

I aint even dissin,

Js tryna speak fax,

Get him on the right side,

But he wont take my hand,

So he is falling,

I hope I still can save him,

But I feel like its to late...

Hook 2x:

Running but cant hide,

Ik something aint right,

Tryna pull him on my side,

But you aint in sight,

He js wanna die,

He says he is better,

But Ion know if he telling lies,

Wanna help him,

But he dont even tries,

Im tired of these lies,

Tell me everything,

Or I cant help,

You heard It right let me in,

But the ice is thin,

So one wrong move and.....

Verse 2:

He says he got mixed personalities,

K is battlein,

His demons,

The enemies,

To make it K needa use all energies,

I feel like imma bring bro to the therapist,

He needs to talk to his dad but Ks dad aint listening,

So all the effort we bringing in,

Wont bring nothing,

Brodie says he got blackouts sometimes,

But K aint sheding no dimes,

He says he is going thru rought times,

Blud is telling so much lies,

That I aint even know whats real and whats fake,

K knows damn well it takes more that js one take,

But idk if hes ready for it,

So imma js sit here and rap about it,

I js want you to think about it,

I hope he dont allows the voices to take over,

Fck this hit I js want it to be over...

.

Hook 1xn

Running but cant hide,

Ik something aint right,

Tryna pull him on my side,

But you aint in sight,

He js wanna die,

He says he is better,

But Ion know if he telling lies,

Wanna help him,

But he dont even tries,

Im tired of these lies,

Tell me everything,

Or I cant help,

You heard It right let me in,

But the ice is thin,

So one wrong move and.....

Hes running from the thought,

But he cant run in his head,

So he said he will take it in his own hand.....

(Echte story)

Answer 1

[Lavendelmond]

Ich finde es gut und traurig

Answer 2

[360gradwinkel]

Wirkt auf mich nicht so tiefgreifend, da könnte man thematisch mehr machen

Woher ich das weiß: Hobby

Answer 3

[ewigsuzu]

Ähm ja Ich erzähle wie sich einer fühlt.

Ja kann man machen. Kreativ ähm naja.

War mir zu viel triggerkacke.

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