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The extract from the novel call me Madeleine written by Kate G Richard and published in 2021 is about the young climate activist madeleine from New Zealand. Madeline secretly skipped school to participate in a school strike. while watching news in the evening she sees herself in the TV. Madeleine hopes that the parents won’t recognise her .however her mom recognises her. A conflict arises between Madeline and her mother .Madeline defends her actions by saying that fighting for the planet is important. Madeleine‘s mother is upset that she skipped school. As a consequence, she grounds Madeline and warns her about possible trouble at school. In the end her mother tries to find a middle ground saying telling her to think about more effective ways to save the planet than just skipping school. to sum up the main themes of the text highlight the importance of school but also the commitment to save the planet.
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Hallo,
The extract from the novel call me Madeleine (Form) written by Kate G Richard (*1) and published in 2021 is about the young climate activist madeleine (RS = Rechtschreibung) from New Zealand. Madeline (RS) secretly skipped school to participate in a school strike. while (RS) watching (Hier fehlt der Artikel.) news in the evening (Komma) she sees herself in (Präposition) the TV. Madeleine hopes that the (Hier braucht es das Personal Pronoun.) parents won’t recognise her (Leerzeichen hinter dem Punkt, nicht davor.) .however (RS) her mom recognises her. (Umformulieren oder zu einem Satz verbinden, um die Wiederholung von "recognise" zu vermeiden.)
A conflict arises between Madeline (RS) and her mother (s. o.).Madeline defends her actions by saying that fighting for the planet is important. Madeleine‘s mother is upset that she (besser: her daughter) skipped school. As a consequence, she grounds Madeline (RS) and warns her about possible trouble at school. In the end (Komma) her (besser: Madeleine's) mother tries to find a middle ground (---) telling her (daughter) to think about more effective ways to save the planet than just skipping school. to (RS) sum up (Komma) the main themes of the text highlight the importance of school but also the commitment to save the (besser: our) planet.
*1 Call Me Madeleine, Kate S Richards
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!
:-) AstridDerPu
Gut! Fehler erkenne ich soweit keine und deine Summary ist ziemlich kurz gehalten wie es sein soll.