tipps zu meiner presentation über school of the air

Hay also ich muss ein kurz Referat über School of the Air auf english machen und wollte fragen ob mir hier jemand bei meinen text tipps geben kann was da noch rein könnte weil der ziemlich kurz ist wie ich finde und glaube grammatisch ist er auch ziemlich schlecht :/

    School of the Air

The school of the air is a correspondence school for the primary and secondary education
of children who live in remote places  and in the outback of Australia. In these areas the  population is to small for a school.
On 8th June 1951 the first school of the Air lesson were officially broadcast from the Royal 
Flying doctor Service in Adelaide.There are  16 Schools of the air in australia the first   School of the air was built in Alice Springs.The School of Air in Alice Springs got a Visitor   Center that is open for tourists every day. There you can watch the morning broadcast from   the lessons
From 1951 to 2003 the teacher speaks to the students over shortwaveradios after that  they  switched to internet technologies to deliver lessons that include live videos.There are
        School of the air programmes in all states except Tasmania. Each student spends one hour    per day receiving group or individual lessons from the teacher,the rest of the day they     working through the     assigned materials with a parent,older sibling or a home stay  tutor.   The students get their homework through e-mails before that they get  the homework  from the post office together with books and other school stuff.Once a year the teachers    and     the students meet at a school camp for a week. There the studenst get intensive     lessons. the    most important thing in this week is that finally everybody can meet his classmates and     teachers.Studies have shown that such education has the same effect than traditional    methods of schooling.

1 Antwort

AstridDerPu

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch

04.11.2012, 20:44

Auf die Schnelle:

The school of the air is a correspondence school for the primary and secondary education of children who live in remote places and in the outback of Australia. In these areas the population is to

small for a school.

On 8th June 1951 Komma the first school of the Air lesson were officially broadcast from the Royal Flying doctor Service in Adelaide.

There are 16 Schools of the air in australia.

the first School of the air was built in Alice Springs.The School of Air in Alice Springs got a Visitor Center that is open for tourists every day. There you can watch the morning broadcast from the lessons. - Stellung From 1951 to 2003 Komma the teacher speaks to the students over shortwaveradios.

after that Komma they switched to internet technologies to deliver lessons that include live videos.

There are School of the air programmes in all states except Tasmania. Each student spends one hour per day receiving group or individual lessons from the teacher, the rest of the day they working through the assigned materials with a parent,older sibling or a home stay tutor.

The students get their homework through e-mails before that they get the homework from the post office together with books and other school stuff.Once a year Komma the teachers and the students meet at a school camp for a week. There the studenst get intensive lessons. the most important thing in this week is that finally everybody can meet his classmates and teachers.Studies have shown that such education has the same effect than traditional methods of schooling.

Bitte denke an Punkte am Satzende.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

:-) AstridDerPu

jstyles123

Fragesteller

04.11.2012, 20:52

Dankeschön :D Wirklich sehr nett von dir :D

Könnt ihr bitte meinen Txt durchlesen und wenn ihr einen Fehler findet es mir sagen. Ich bedanke mich für eure Hilfe und bedanke mich im Voraus

Nowadays there are many discussions about school uniforms. In the following comment I will discuss advantages and disadvantages about school uniforms. The main argument is, that uniforms are good for the school because wearing them stops violence and helps to develope a sense of pride in the students. The contra argument is, that uniforms cost a lot of money and are not always suitable for the weather. These are not the only reasons that students have to worry about. They would need to buy additional clothing to wear after school and that would be really expensive. From my point of view the pro argument is really convincing, because the bullies can´t bully another student, because they wear the same uniforms. Moreover, I think that this is a point which is really important for all of us. Additionally, a powerful argument is that they don´t need to think about how to dress in the morning. It's my opinion that uniforms are helpful because the students respect each other.

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Erörterung Schuluniform Englisch

Hallo ich präsentiere euch jetzt meine Erörterung, ich wollte euch fragen ob ihr es dann beurteilen könnt ob der Inhalt gut ist und ob ich viele Grammatikalische Fehler habe oder sprachliche Fehler und dann am ende mir eine Note nennt zwischen 1-6 wäre klasse von euch

Should schooluniform be introduced in every school?

In the following text I will list several arguments for and against schooluniform. The thesis to this topic is that schooluniform has lots of disadvantages.The first argument to this antithesis is that it is unhygiencally because you cant wash they not every day. An example you have not so many uniforms at home and you cant not wash them because they would not be dry for the next day. The second argument is that the free development of the pupils is limited. For example they would not be trust what they would dress because they think than it is emberrassing . The last argument to this antithesis is that schooluniform can also lead to competetion and conflicts between different schools. For example a pupil they visited a another school and went from pupils from different school past and they check it that he are from a different school because the schooluniform discern from another school uniformsand then can also lead to a competetion and conflicts.

Of the other hand they are a lot of advantages for schooluniforms. The first argument to this thesis is that they cant readable ther finacial situation. For example if there was none schooluniform than would can be readable ther financial situation because they would not be achieve bran name clothes. A antoher argument is that it would be saves time in the morning . An example the pupil didnt know what he would be dress and than can it to came that he came late to school . The last argument they are for me very strong is that nobody became bulling by clothes.. An example a poor pupil cant not achieve brand name clothes or his clothes are very old and have a lot of holes and therefore they cant be bullied for clothes.

After listing all the arguments for and against schooluniform think I not every school not to lead schooluniform in schools because for me it is important that you can deside what you will dress.The reason ist that then became th self confidence stronger.

Das ist meine Erörterung gerne Verbesserungsvorschläge z.B wenn ich was nicht gut formuliert habe mich verbessern damit ich das beim nächsten mal besser mache :)

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Kann jemand meinen englisch Text durchgehen - 8. Klasse?

Hey. Muss den Text morgen abgeben, wäre nett wenn jemand noch mal kontrollieren könnte :/ Grades from Students to teachers Should students be allowed to give their teachers grades? It's just fair when students give their teachers grades, because teachers give students grades, too. When teachers get grades from the students, they could see how the students think about them. A disadvantage is, that the students do not know enough about teachers' work. Also some students would evaluate teachers they dont like intentionally bad, because they arent able to be objective. But I'm still thinking that students should be allowed to give their teachers grades. The teachers could improve and the students would be happier. Sooo das wars.. Habt ihr vllt noch Ergänzungen? Weitere (gegen)argumente? Sind bis jetzt leider nur 100 / 150 Wörtern .. Danke :))

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Written discussion..einmal drüber schauen bitte:)

German schools are getting dirtier and nobody does anything. In America, students take this problem in thei hands, they do some volunteer work and clean public buildings and restore parks. In this written discussion I want to discuss the question "Should german students does some volunteer work at their schools and public buildings".

The first argument for this ide is that students go out of their rooms. They don't watch TV the complete day or play some computer games, they does something for the community.

The next pro argument is that students learn to take responsibility. If they clean a place, they don't want zhat somebody make him dirty. They take care of him.

Now, the first contra argument is that some students does their work sloppy and the other studetns and volunteer worker can't rely on them.

The next contra argument is that students don't want to do this because they earn no money so it is in their point of view waste of time.

The written discussion show that volunteer work on schools is okay. Students do something and leran import things. My conclusion is: We need it in Germany.

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Englische Hausaufgabe über probleme von Teenagern heutzutage verbessern?

Könnte mir jemand vielleicht ein Feedback zu diesem Text geben wäre echt nett. Achtet bitte einfach nicht auf die groß und klein Schreibung.

A frequently Problem for Teenagern today is the self acceptance. More and more Teenagern have no self-confidence anymore or even suffer from self-hatred because they have the feeling to not be good enought. Due to all the stress of the parents, The school, The acceptance of groups, the expectation of oneself and all the Tasks of everyday it can be to get lost in it. Teenager have the same redponsibilities like the afults but cant be independent and don't have the rights to Decide about themselfs. Nowadays there are evermore Teenager that suffer from mental illness. They suffer from negative body image.And they want to find out who they are. Today Teenagern feel Lots of pressure from peers,Parents and Society to conform to conflicting expectation. The parents make a lot of pressure to have good Grades and they forbid a lot of things. The Society make fast jokes about people and if you take it seriously you will get a lot of self-doubt. So a lot of Teenager try to cop with their Problems and are ready to take risk for example drugs and they don't become the Help that they need.

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Comment correction?

Hallo, und zwar musste ich ein comment schreiben in der Schule, welchen wir morgen vorzeigen müssen und ich wollte fragen ob einer vlt nochmal kurz denn comment überfliegen kann ob alles so passt.

A Few days ago there was a discussion if mobil phones and other electronic devices should be allowed at school. The pros are that even in school children can be shown how to behave on the internet. Another good argument for using mobil phones at school is that it's possible to quickly find information and work with it. The last and for me best argument is that through digital media, topics are dealt with holistically. Different points of view are taken into account and a solution is sought with different formats. The cons are that teacher can't check what the students gonna do on the smartphones and if they really being used for lessons or assignment. Another bad thing would be that if the permanent use at school is allowed, the risk of mobile phone addiction increases enormously. The for me worse thing would be that if Students didn't own a smartphone they would have a big disadvantage. My personal view is that the mobile phones should be allowed but not all the time only when the teacher allowed it, because mobil phones can be a good addition to the school.

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Englisch Written Discussion Verbesserungsvorschläge

Boot Camps in Germany !!!

Some people mean that the boot camps in the USA a good idea , but should be boot camps introduced in germany ?

Many people and parents says that boot camps are very good , because boot camps helps troublemakers to learn discipline. And when they learn discipline the crime rate will be go down. Second, the lessons in the school will be more quiet and than the students can better learn and have than better marks. As well the children will be trained they physical fitness and they learn to live healthy. When they used to the circumstances in boot camps, they will live in that way , when leaving the camp.

However, other people and parents are against boot camps, because they think that the children soon forget about boot camp and get in trouble again. Another argument against is the cost ! If boot camps are built in germany, the state would have many costs. The last argument is that many people say that children didnt learn discipline but should have been broken. People say that the boot camps are to hard for children and that the teachers in the camps are too strict.

After looking at both sides I think that boot camps shouldnt be built in germany. The advantages are very good, but the disadvantages are predominant.

Verbesserungsvorschläge für diesen Text wären hilfreich :)

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Könnte jemand über meinen Essay drüber schauen?

         Every school should demand school uniform

In some countries all over the world school children have to wear uniforms the color scheme and style varies from school to school. In other countries pupils can wear to school what ever clothes they choose. In those countries it could be difficult to introduce school uniforms, because they are not traditionally used to wearing one. In the following essay I want to discuss the advantages to introduce school uniforms world wide.

In my opinion school uniforms ind schools are positive but negative too because not every student have the same style and they cant decide which school uniforms they wanted to wear.

School uniforms are on the one side good because a lot of children are victims of bullying because some of theme haven’t enough money to buy expensive and nice clothes. In this case the school uniform is very practically and maybe a good problem-solving.

On the other side pupils cant find our style and have to wear clothes that they don’t wanted. School uniforms can be nice but not every day ,It quickly becomes boring .However, there are people around the world for which it is too expensive ,always to buy a school uniform. Children grow fast and because of that they have to buy an again and again. We must take into account that the school uniform is maybe expensive but the clothes that the kids need for school is not cheaper and they have to be buy again and again, too.

On the other hand if the pupils wear school uniforms there is not a difference between rich and poor.

I have come to the conclusion that school uniforms are not everywhere positive and children should be able to develop their own style. Cause the bully is not reduced by a school uniform.

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Ist dieser Blog gut denn ich schreib nächste woche eine Englisch Schularbeit?

Dear Boris,

thank you for reaching me.

I attend a tourism school in Austria. In general, the food in our school is OK. We have two possibilities to get lunch. To go to the cafeteria, where the food is cooked by some students and chefs. That is a great opportunity for eating lunch, because students can choose between two main dishes and for every lunch students get different types of salads. The second opportunity is to go to the school buffet and buy a sandwich or something sweet. This is why I think the food in the cafeteria is much better than on the buffet, because you can to get more healthy food for lunch which is very important. I hope to hear from you soon.

All the best,

Arbion Havolli

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Passt der Englische Text?

In the poem ‚,The Schoolboy‘‘ by William Blake, you get a clear message that the schoolboy doesn’t enjoy the school and its system at all, so the question that arises is ,,What could school do, to be more enjoyable for the schoolboy and students like me?‘‘

First of all many students have to wake up early in the morning, which isn’t a perfect start into the day. Furthermore they mostly can’t enjoy the morning even if they like to stand up early, because they must get finished quickly for school. To counteract this problem, it would be a good start to begin with school less early and to approach the day more calmly. So to remove the effect of a prison it’s important to produce a more peaceful environment for everyone, to make the classrooms more comfortable and even integrate some outdoors schoollessons in spring and summer, so that the pupils have more joy in learning and are able to concentrate more because of the fresh air and the nature. Last but not least we schoolboys anf schoolgirls should be allowed to have more own thoughts and to be able to control them and not just being forced to memorize things, which won’t be even important for our adulthood.

I also think that the last point which is beinh made here, is a fact which the author want to draw attention to, because it’s a mostly international problem that should has to change as we are not robots.

(Also mit dem letzten Teil bin ich eher unzufrieden weil so oft which drankommt)

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Englisch Artikel bitte korrigieren oder umschreiben?

Hallo Leute, könnt ihr eventuell diesen Artikel lesen und wenn da Fehler sind, es zu korrigieren oder umzuschreiben? Wäre super nett von euch, meine Hausübung wird nämlich benotet und schreibt noch euren Feedback rein, ich danke euch :)

Los Angeles has seen the evil

A recent school shooting in Los Angeles has brought the issue of school safety in the bad light. So, people became aware of these happening. On 30th April 2023, two 17-year-old students have armed their high school with two guns which left 11 people dead and 5 injured. This incident has left people worried about the safety of students and staff at schools.

Gun violence, especially in schools, is still a national crisis in the United States and migrants are still allowed to carry a gun because of the “national firearms agreement”. Due to the licenses of weapons, such acts are occurring more and more frequently. In order to protect students and school staff, most schools have security guards. There are also usually controls at the entrances. As a way to prevent non-schoolers from entering the school, they have their own school cards, which clearly show the identifies of the students. In addition, the police have increased their presence at schools.

Students, who have witnessed such incident, are usually traumatised and can hardly cope without psychological help. Many students and parents report terrible feelings and perceptions. “I was so scared when I heard gunshots. I ran and hid under a desk until the police came. Now I’m afraid to come back to school,” says a victim who survived this cruelty. Parents were calling desperately for their children, they even got more scared when they didn’t respond. These are just a few. As a result, the police has to deal with such incidents more and more often. “It is nothing scary anymore, we are already used to it”, claims a policeman. “We are already best prepared for such acts”, adds another officer. They have certain educations and trainings for these hardships.

Due to the school shooting on April 30th, this issue is more present than ever. Many students and parents are extremely frightened that they can also be victims. This clearly shows that much more could be done preventively.

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Hallo könnte wer mein englisch Referat kontrollieren?

What is factory farming ?. Factory Farming is a way of producing meat and other animal products quickly and cheaply. The animals are kept in small cages. They get special food, so they are growing faster. The main products of this industry are meat, milk and eggs for human consumption. Advantages: Cheaper prices With the use of factory farms, the prices of food became very cheap. The main reason for this is that the food can be processed very fast. Also, the food for the animals is very cheap, because they buy it in mass orders. Enough animal products for the market Factory farms use vitamins, minerals, and other substances that make animals grow faster and so they can produce much more food. Big farms also have modern tools which helps to produce meat, milk, eggs and other products very quickly and in an efficient way.

Disadvantages: Very bad living conditions In many factory farms the animals are kept in small cages, where they don’t have any space to walk around and do what they naturally do. The animals are usually kept indoor, so they don’t get any fresh air or sun. The cages are not cleaned as often as it is necessary, so the living conditions for the animals are very bad.

Bad for people’s health Factory farms are bad for people’s health in two ways. One of these is the pollution what they produce, which harm the health of the people who are living next to them. The other way is through the antibiotics that they give their animals to make them immune against illnesses. These can be transmitted to people from the meat and other animal products.

Small farming businesses haven’t a chance against factory farms Many factory farms are owned by corporations, who have the possibility to buy modern tools, equipment and larger spaces for the animals. They’re able to sell their products at a lower price. Smaller farms usually don’t have the resources to buy faster and bigger machines and therefore they can’t compete with their larger rivals.

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English Summary and short story: "The Fun They Had"

Any mistakes? Any Verbesserungsvorschläge? P.s. Ist der Text nicht zu lang für eine Summary? Der orginal Text hat ca. 1042 Wörter.

The short story ‘The fun they had‘, written by Isaac Asimov deals with a boy and a girl, Tommy and Margie, who find out something about school in the past. On the 17th of March 2155 Tommy, a thirteen-year-old boy, finds a ‘real book‘ which has been printed on paper. He is at the house of Margie, an eleven-year-old girl. They both take a look at it togehter. The book is really old and the pages are yellow and crinky. In the year 2155 this kind of books do not exist anymore. In this time words are moving on a television screen. These televisions can contain over a million of boks. That is the reason, why Tommy thinks that they are much better. He has found the old book in the attic of his house. While reading, Tommy says that it is about school. Margie hates school and cannot understand why someone would write about it. She was having problems with learning geography from her ‘mechanical teacher‘. It was black, large and had a screen on it. It teaches the students, gives them exercises and askes them questions, all in a special room in their own house. It can also calculate the marks in no time. Margie hates the slot where she has to insert her homework or test papers. Once the geopraphy sector of her mechanical teacher was geraded too quick, so that her marks got worse and worse. The County Inspector rebuilt it after one hour. He was really nice to Margie. She hopped that her mechanical teacher would be taken away for a longer time, like Tommy’s was, because it’s history sector blanked out completly. Tommy says that the book which he has found, is not about their type of school, it is about school centuires ago. They find out that students back then had a man as a teacher who taught the girls and boys, gave them homework and asked them questions. They had a special building, all the children went to. And they learned the same things, if they were the same age. First Margie does not understand how a person could be a teacher and how the students were thaught the same thing, because her mother says that the education must fit to each child's mind, but nevertheless in her opinion these schools are funny and she wants to read more about it. Then it is time for Margie and Tommy for their school. Margie goes into the schoolroom in her house where the mechanical teacher stands. It is already on, because the lessons are always at regular hours. She was thinking about the old school system and how much fun the children must had, learning and spending time togehter.

Danke!

Grüßle! ~ ♫

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HILFE! Englisch summary!

Hey , ich brauche unbedingt Hilfe ! ich schreibe morgen eine Klausur und würde mich freuen , wenn mir jemand diesen Text korrigieren könnte .

Danke im Voraus :-)

The text "Hermann Maifest" written by Julian Miller is about three students called Dylan ,Donna and Mike from the Hermann High School who enjoyed the Maifest in Hermann.Dylan must take care of Bobby . he think he lost him but founded him later. The three students Dylan , Donna and Mike and traveled around the Maifest . Later they would have an performance because they are in a school band. They traveled around the Maifest and later Dylan thought he lost Dylan but they found him on the truck next to Mikes father. Dylan was relieved he could tell his mother all that they and Bobby are having a good time.

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