Hallo, da ich so meine Probleme im Fach Englisch habe, bitte ich euch darum meinen Text zu verbessern..
Danke an jeden der sich dafür die Zeit nimmt.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
Hier der Text in Englisch.
Hello Jack,
I'm fine, how are you ?
Which talent would you like to try?
I look forward to your email and support you in your project, but there are many risks. I recently read an article about casting shows that was very interesting.The article was called "You're in a Soap Bubble" from the Frankfurter Allgemeine he was written in 2013 by Worte Morten.It was about casting shows with the participants.
More and more young people take part in the shows, they are then brutally told how bad they were. Many young people can not handle the very harsh and direct assessment. Everything will then be filmed and published.
The IZI and Lfm have made a joint study on long-term consequences on adolescent pysche. 59 former participants completed an online questionnaire. The answers show how the mental stress is felt.
Even participants who took a good seat in their show felt great pressure and have self-doubt.
The participants of the study were divided into several groups.
The study showed that one third of the respondents could use the casting show as a platform for their careers. One fifth found the experience positive. The third group was disappointed after a good start and a fourth group reported negative experiences with the show, they were used and misrepresented. All others were disappointed with the downfall with their person.
Also, in the article that the producers of the casting shows themselves know very well what they possibly do to the participants, and therefore they contractually protect against physical and psychological consequences. Pictures and sounds are manipulated and scenes are readjusted.
The audience is also hardly aware that the show is staged. According to Maya Götz, head of the IZI, around 80% of female and 60% of male adolescents believe in the style of the programs. "Casting shows are a targeted staging," said Maya Götz.
Jack, I hope that the text stimulates you to think a bit and you think again about your decision.
Nevertheless, I support you, should you participate in a castingshow.
Please tell me your decision.
In love your friend
