HAB SUMMARY GESCHRIEBEN BRAUCH HILFE BEIM VERBESSERN
Hi Ich hab ein summary geschrieben das doofe ist es wird morgen eingesammelt ich bin echt schlecht in englisch wäre nett wenn den Text verbessern könnt danke :)
Summary: In the text "Meeting the stepmother " written by David Mitchell is about 2 children , Jason and julia who Becomes a stepmother named cynthia because his father had seperate with their mum.
After the seperation of jason's and julia's dad and their mother the father found a New girlfriend, their new stepmother. They don't know what to say because they don't like each other and never had Seen her before. At their Old House they meet together but when Jason meet his stepmother he was shocked and dissapointed by his father and what he didn't know is that cynthia had a Baby named milly . and Jason think when his father and his New stepmother Becomes a Baby what ist with ihm ? Would he has been he or a totally different Kid ?
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OMG - so viele Fehler...
Hier mal EINIGE Korrekturen:
The story "Meeting.." is about... two children... Julia, (KOMMA) who are confronted with a stepmother because their father separated from their mother/his wife.
After this separation thei father found... ....
Später dann:
Jason wonders what will become of him if his father and his stepmother should have a baby one day.
"become" heißt nicht "bekommen", sondern "werden". Weitere Fehler musst Du schon selber finden!
Ja wie soll ich die Fehler finden ? Das kann ich ja nicht wissen deshalb habe ich gefragt es ist echt wichtig das summary wird morgen eingesammelt..