Charakterisierung im Englischen,Simple Present? Richtig?
Also ich habe zu einer kurzen Geschichte im Englisch Buch eine Charakterisierung verfasst. Ich würde von euch gerne ein Feedback haben: Morgan Vinten called Moon is a 13 years old boy.He is thin and short,has a pale Face and long black Hairs.His Hairs are long and black he has cut them to a Ponytail und colored them blue.He wears a silver ring on his right ear.He is dress like a Rocker and diffrent from the other,he doesnt like to look commercial.His Parents are both Docotors and they want that Moon Stury,but Moon dosnt like school and ignor his homeworks.He is a Drummer in a Band and he thinks he can later make money with his Music.His Favourit Band are the Beatles. Moon gets fast angry and he hate many things,one of the reason why he plays drumms is,that its a good feeling for him when he sometime hit on something.
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Hallo,
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How to write a characterization
A characterization is a description of all the features that make up a personality and its development. One can distinguish between two main methods:
• direct (explicit) characterization: the reader is told about a character’s personality directly by the author, by another character or by the character him/herself
• indirect (implicit) characterization: the reader is expected to draw conclusions about a character by studying his/her behaviour, opinions, choice of words and/or way of talking
Before you start working on your characterization find out how the character’s personality is revealed in the text. Possibilities:
• through the narrator’s description of his/her outward appearance
• through direct comments on his/her character
• by what he/she does, says or thinks
• by showing what other people think or say about him/her
Then collect the facts from the text and draw your conclusions about the person’s character! Look for…
• name, age, figure, clothes, height, sex
• language, nationality, general impression
• social background, family, kind of friends, profession
• what he/she does and says
• his/her behaviour (e.g. toward other characters) and actions
• thoughts, dreams, emotions, attitudes
• what other people say/think about him/her
Move from the outward features to the inward features/nature when writing your characterization. Do not forget to work with the text by using text reference and give examples for your findings, especially when you are working on the last four categories mentioned above.
Basically present tense is used in characterizations.
:-) AstridDerPu
PS: Unter folgendem Link findest du eine Vokabelliste mit character traits:
Morgan Vinten called Moon is a 13 years old boy.He is thin and short,has a pale Face and long black hair.His Hair is long and black. he has cut them to a Ponytail und colored them blue.He wears a silver ring on his right ear.He is dress like a Rocker and different from the others,he doesn't like to look commercial.His Parents are both Doctors and they want Moon to study,but Moon doesn't like school and ignors his homework.He is a Drummer in a Band and he thinks** he will be able to make money with his Music later.His Favourit Band are the Beatles. Moon gets **angry fast and he hates many things.one of the reason why he plays drumms is,that it's a good feeling for him when he sometimes hits on something.
grammatikalisch müsste das jetzt so richtig sein, aber ich weiß nicht ob man im englischen "he ignores his homework" sagen kann. ich hoffe ich konnte dir helfen.
ach, und bei "he is thin and short" willst du da sagen dass er dünn und klein ist? ich glaube man sagt statt short eher small.
hmmm es kommt mir bisschen abgehackt vor... aber eig ganz gut :) wofür ist es??
"he doesnt like to look commercial.His Parents are both Docotors and they want that Moon Stury."Ich meinte "Study"
Vielen Dank für deine Antwort. Was hälts du eigentlich von dem Aufbau des Textes? Hast du weitere kritik?