Brauche Hilfe bei Englisch Bildbeschreibung wer kanns?

Bild 1 und 2 - (englisch, Foto, Hausaufgaben)

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Hier korrigiere ich einmal den Text

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Photo a is a coloured picture.
In the backround is a garbage dump.
In the middle i can see a sofa.
At the top is a boy and he is wearing a pullover
In the foreground is a girl. She's wearing a pullover .
Between the girl and the boy is a child. It's wearing a orange cardigan.

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In picture b i can see three men and one woman.
The man on the left is wearing a yellow T-Shirt and he is playing table football.
The man on the right is wearing a black tshirt and a sunglasses,
The women is wearing a black tshirt ,blue trousers and  black sunglasses

Die Ausführung der Texte kommt gleich. Fehler habe ich fett markiert. Manches habe ich auch weggelöscht, da dies keine Sinn ergab

Lieb Grüße

Niklas

Ich Danke dir Vielmals 😬☺️

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@LaaPrinzessin

Text Nr. 1

1.
Photo a is a coloured picture.
In the backround is a garbage dump. The three boys are standing next to a trash container .
In the middle i can see a sofa.
At the top is a boy and he is wearing a pullover. The two boys in the backround seem unhappy and a little bit sad, but the little boy in the front smiles..
In the foreground is a girl. She's wearing a pullover .
Between the girl and the boy is a child. It's wearing a orange cardigan.

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@Niklas200215

Text Nr. 2

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In picture b i can see three men and one woman.
The man on the left is wearing a yellow T-Shirt and he is playing table football.
The man on the right is wearing a black tshirt and a sunglasses,
The woman is wearing a black tshirt ,blue trousers and  black sunglasses. At the back she is wearing a black backpack. The peoples seem happy and they are laughing.

Ich hoffe ich konnte dir helfen :)

Liebe Grüße

Niklas

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Ein (zumindest englisches) Wort im Plural kann keine Artikel besitzen, die es nur für den Singular gibt.

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@Niklas200215

a sunglasses... a verlangt den Singular, und wenn es den nicht gibt, dann kann man es nicht verwenden

Aber du hast trotzdem den Text gut verbessert :-)

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@CrazyAdvisor

Ah ok danke für den Hinweis. Das habe ich übersehen :) Trotzdem danke für das Kompliment :)

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The photos A and B are coloured pictures.
In the first picture at the right side there are three children standing behind each other according to their height.
Next to them in the background there is a garbage dump.
Within that garbage dump, there you can find knocked over wooden sticks. It seems to be a bulky waste. There is also a demolished and knocked over sofa.

In picture B there are three men and a woman playing with a football table.
One man, who seems to be younger than the other ones, is wearing a yellow shirt and the other ones are wearing darker shirts.
I bet, they laugh due to a funny goal someone of them has shot.
Those people are standing in a house with bright windows in the background.

Die zwei Männer und die Frau spielen nicht Tischfußball

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In oder On the Picture in Englisch?

Hey Leute,

ich würde gerne wissen ob es heißt : In the Picture I can see

Oder: On the Picture I can see

LG, HansGansIV

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Englisch Personenbeschreibung Korrektur lesen bitte Hilfe?

Bitte helft mir ich habe niemanden der mir den Text korrigieren kann :/ und morgen schreibe ich eine Arbeit ... also: This is a movie poster of Romeo and Juliet. That movie poster was drawn. The illustration shows Romeo and Juliet and they kiss. In this illustration you can see that they are in love and really happily. The painting is special of the love behimd this picture. The picture reminds me on teenagers who have freshly fallen in love and it is a very realistic picture because one can identify with the persons. In the background and also at the top is like a yellow bright ball surrounded by a red orange colour. In the yellow ball is a burning red heart with roses from inside and a red flame at the top ot the heart. The heart in the yellow is surrounded at the left and right side of black white furious men with guns in their hands turned on the heart in the middle.

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Was bedeutet der Begriff "thermische Jahreszeit"?

Hey Leute, ich muss für meine Erdkunde-Hausaufgaben den Begriff "thermische Jahreszeit erklären. Ich hab aber leider kein Plan, was des bedeuten soll. Bitte helft mir!

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Englisch: as you can see on the picture...

Ich möchte auf Englisch schreiben: wie Du auf dem Bild sehen kannst.... sagt man: as you can see on the picture oder benutzt man " in the picture" oder " at the picture" ?

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Summary + Characterisation, korrektur, dringend?

Summery's: The shortstory ‚Patricia’ written by Fraser Sutherland deals with two friends, where the boy has a crush on the girl, but never told it, until a spring dance in their school comes. He forces himself to ask her, to go with her to the dance and does it, but she declines his question and at the end, both go not to the dance and go different ways too.

oder ..

The shortstory ‘Patricia’ written by Fraser Sutherland deals with two friends, where the boy has a crush on the girl, but never told it. In their school there goes a spring dance and the boy forces himself to ask her, to go with her to the dance, does it, but she just diclines his question and at the end, both of them, go not to the dance and go different ways too

was wirkt besser und richtiger, zumindest einigermaßen?

Characterisation The following text is a characterisation of the boy, one of the two main characters in the story ‘Patricia’.

The boy is a student around 16 or 17 years, how it could be assumed, because he is close to his final exams (l. 55) and his voice breaks and so ‘He [is] changing’(fg.l. 19). Furthermore the character seems to be very sporty and active, just look at the scene, where he stands in front of the mirror and ‘[looks] at himself’ and his muscles (fg.l.5) - what means, that he must be ambious too, because he worked hard, to get them. The boy could be characterized as really attentive, how the behavior shows it, related to Patricia (fg. l.7-19). ‘He [spend] an hour talking with her’ and ‘[think] a lot about asking her to go [with him]’, but he have not the guts to say directly, that he wants to go with her to the spring dance, what makes him not self-confident.

To sum it up, the boy is ambious as related to Particia, but calm, without selfconfidence, but (Mir fällt nicht ein, wie es genau zusammenfassen könnte :x)

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Soll für Chemie Protolysengleichungen mit Säuren aufstellen , wie gehe ich vor?

Hab keine Ahnung wie ich das machen soll

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