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Hallo,

auf die Schnelle:

Boot camps are a type of military school for teenagers. Teenagers who commit crimes are sent to boot camps to learn discipline and straighten their lives up (ich würde straighten up their lives vorziehen). A boot camp looks like a prison and there is nothing personal in the rooms.

First ,some people say that teenagers really need to go to a boot camp kein Komma because they learn discipline there.

Second, you have to learn to follow the rules if you want to do well ???.

That´s why the teenagers did not have (= Vergangenheit) / do not have (= Gegenwart) to go to prison and so they have better chances to get a job (for their lives).

In in my opinion however, boot camps shouldn´t be introduced in Germany kein Komma because discipline doesn´t change a person. I think people have to learn how to think for themselves, not learn how to follow rules. natürlich muss man auch lernen Regeln zu befolgen. Das ganze Leben besteht aus Regeln.

That´s why I think boot camps don´t work.

Having considered both sides, I think teenagers will change their lives if they want to, but they won’t if they are forced to.

Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

:-) AstridDerPu

vielen dank ,das du dir zeit genommen hast dafür :) hat mir echt sehr weiter geholfen

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..A..Boot camp is a type of military school for teenagers. Teenagers who.. commit a crime...are... sent to boot camps ..in order..to learn disciplin..e.. and.. straighten..up.. their lifes. A boot camp look..s.. like a prison and there is nothing personal in the rooms. ..On the one hand.. ,some people say that..some.. teenagers really need to go to a boot camp, because they..have to.. learn discipline. ..On the other hand,they have to learn to obey.. the rule..s if you want to do..right... That´s why they..don't have.. to go to prison, and..in order to.. have better chances to get a job..later in.. their li..f..e... But in my opinion, boot camps shouldn´t be introduced in Germany, because mere discipline doesn´t change a person. I think people have to learn how to think for themselves, not learn how to follow rules. That´s why..I.. think boot camps ..won´t.. work. After looking at both sides..I.. think if..teenagers want to change their life they have to do so..of their own accord.., but not when they are forced to.

Ich habe den Text nur so weit verändert, dass dein Lehrer ihn als deine Arbeit durchgehen lässt.

  • Teenagers who commit a crime are sent to...
  • A boot camp looks like...
  • ...I think boot camps don´t work.
  • ...if a teenager wants to change his life, he will do it, but not when he is forced to.

ich weiß nicht, ob das alles ist, aber das ist mir spontan aufgefallen.

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