Kann jemand meinen englisch Text durchgehen - 8. Klasse?
Hey. Muss den Text morgen abgeben, wäre nett wenn jemand noch mal kontrollieren könnte :/ Grades from Students to teachers Should students be allowed to give their teachers grades? It's just fair when students give their teachers grades, because teachers give students grades, too. When teachers get grades from the students, they could see how the students think about them. A disadvantage is, that the students do not know enough about teachers' work. Also some students would evaluate teachers they dont like intentionally bad, because they arent able to be objective. But I'm still thinking that students should be allowed to give their teachers grades. The teachers could improve and the students would be happier. Sooo das wars.. Habt ihr vllt noch Ergänzungen? Weitere (gegen)argumente? Sind bis jetzt leider nur 100 / 150 Wörtern .. Danke :))
Also ich denke der Text ist ganz gut auch wenn ich nicht weiß was die Aufgabe war. Doch du hast am Anfang zweimal when geschrieben doch ich denke da müsste if stehen:)
Grades from Students to teachers Should students be allowed to give their teachers grades? It's just fair when students give their teachers grades, because teachers give students grades, too. When teachers get grades from the students, they could see how the students think about them.
Der Teil ist gut, nur da kommt das Wort "grades" zu oft vor. Ich würd das bisschen umschreiben :)
Grades from Students to teachers
Should students be allowed to give their teachers grades?
It's just fair when students give their teachers grades kein Komma because teachers give students grades, too. When teachers get grades from the students, they could see how the students think about them.
(Dieser Abschnitt enthält für meinen Geschmack zuviel give / get grades.)
A disadvantage is kein Komma that the students do not know enough about teachers' work. Also (kein Satzanfang) some students would evaluate teachers they dont like intentionally bad kein Komma because they arent able to be objective.
But I'm still thinking that students should be allowed to give their teachers grades. The teachers could improve and the students would be happier. (Diese beiden Sätze solltest du miteinander verbinden.)
- Kurzformen (don't, aren't) sollten in der Schriftsprache - vor allem in formellen Schreiben - vermieden werden. Benutzt man sie trotzdem, ist darauf zu achten, dass man sie korrekt schreibt (kürzt).
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.
Ist der summary in ordnung
Peter Mortiboy is an apprentice technician in the luxury car firme and belong to it in the Rolls Royce Technical College. But the employer fired him because he has dangered the eyes of his co.wordkers because of his four-inch spikes, unusual dress includes 18 earrings, a studded dog collar, steel armletts and a stud through his nose. On the one side the boss done the right because it is his firme and when he wants that the employees should change his appearance they must do it or maybe they can go work where else. But on the other side is Peter maybe a very pretty boy, works good but he likes how he is looking like and the problem is that not every employer would take him for his work.
So all in all I think Persons who would not change their style for a work should not be sad but they should accept the bosses and change their work.
Englisch Passive Infintive richtig?
Use expect - would like - hope - want and the passive infinitive
Maya: "I hope somebody will invite me to the dance." Maya hopes to be invited to the dance.
Teacher: "You must bring all the food to school before 2pm." The teacher would like to be brought the food befor 2pm.
Jake and Kelly: "We're sure they'll give us first place in dancing competition." Jake and Kelly expects to be given the first place.
Taylor: "Will all the girls ignore me? I wouldn't like that! Taylor wouldn't like to be ignored by all the girls.
Victoria: "I know the teachers will stop any fights." Victoria expects to be stopped the fights.
Brittany: "I guess Scott will drive me home after the dance." Brittany hopes to be driven home by Scott.
Ist das alles richtig?
Kann jmd kontrolieren?
Some poeple say that the boot camps in the USA is a good idea.Do you think Boot camp would be a good idea in Germany?
Many poeple says that boot camps are very good because they helps troublemakers to learn discipline and when they learn discipline,the crime rate will be go down.Besides troublemakers would think more before acting like example grafitti.They also say that many troublemakers to reduce the number of example in schools because the lessons in the school will be more quiet and then can the students better learn.
However troublemakers would be damaged like example psychologically.Another argument against is the extra cost like example uniforms.They also say it doesn't change poeple because they're still the same when they come out example they are angry because of punishments.
After I looking at both sides, I think that boot camps shouldn't be introduced in Germany.The advantages are very good,but the disadvantages are terrible.
Könnte jemand von euch diesen kurzen englisch Text korrigieren?
Hi lerne seit 5 Wochen englisch und seit ca 8 Monaten deutsch, würde mich freuen wenn jemand den Text mal auf die Grammatik überprüfen könnte, damit ich weiß wo ich stehe. Da ich komplett privat englisch lerne und leider keinen habe der meine Texte korrigieren könnte, da die Personen die ich kenne leider kein Englisch können. :(
Das Thema was ich mir im Internet ausgesucht habe war, schreibe eine Compositon darüber ob es in der schule Geschlechtsneutrale Badezimmer geben sollte
In my opinion it would be a big mistake to have gender-neutral bathrooms. First of all, I think the students would have problems with the new toilets, for instance people with a big shame problem would don’t use the toilets, when in the toilet would be a person from the other gender. Secondly it is obvious that toilets like the idea would not really have a good image and other students from other schools would don’t have the idea to change to a school with toilets like this or something like this. Furthermore gender-neutral toiltes would be more than as a problem for students, the school would have to buy new stuff and the logical conclusion from all this would be the school must pay a lot of money.
Könnte jemand bitte meine Englisch Argumentation korrektur lesen?
In Britain, children and teenagers can be given an ASBO if they do anything that is an antisocial behavior. It’s a way of punishing them for their actions instead of going to prison or similar punishments. An ASBO consists of several punishments like being forbidden to go to different areas of a town or to meet specific people.
The problem with ASBO’s is that they can give the person depression because they are socially isolated. Consequently, this can lead to self harm or depression in the worst cases. Secondly, their actions aren’t primarily punished they are prevented so that the child/teen won’t do it anymore. Furthermore, the things that are reported aren’t necessarily illegal sometimes it’s just something that might be annoying to others, like tattoos. Having said that, this might just be a way of showing personality. Reportedly, it has happened that someone was just given an ASBO because he looked scary and was always wearing a hood. Another thing to add is that the pictures that are hung up around town can be really embarrassing and can lead to harassment by others. On the other hand, ASBOS also have advantages. Many teenagers have their problems with school, friends etc. This might lead to some illegal actions like drinking or smoking. In addition to that, there often is some kind of group pressure. ASBO’s are a way of showing them that their actions are wrong and that there is a solution to their problems. For instance, it’s a way of identifying that their actions have been wrong. Another key thing to remember is that ASBO’s can keep the children/teenagers from going to prison and that would be way worse.
All things considered, I think that ASBO’s can be good for the young people to change their antisocial behavior. That way, they can understand that their actions have been wrong and change them for good.