Englisch Text korrigieren (basketball)
Ich hab ein Englischreferat über Basketball fertiggestellt und würde mich freuen, wenn jemand mit mehr Englischkenntnissen mal drüber schauen würde ;)
p.S nicht unbedingt auf Rechtschreibung achten ;)
Hello, today i want to talk about Basketball one of the most favorite Sports in the USA. My presentation is made up in 3 Parts.
The first one is „creation of Basketball“ The secound one is „rules and regulations“
And my last point is „Chicago Bulls“
In December 1891, Dr. James Naismith a physical education professor, sought a vigorous indoor game to keep his students occupied during the long New England winters. So he wrote the basic rules and nailed a peach basket onto a 10-foot elevated track. The bottom of the peach basket was removed, because you had to retrieve the ball manually after each point. The first ball was a normal Football, then in 1950 Tony Hinkle searched for a more visible Ball for the player and visitors so he made an orange ball. The sport Basketball was born
Now to the rules and regulations.
Games are played in four quarters of 12 minutes. Overtime periods are five minutes in lenght. Teams exchange baskets for the second half. Games generally take much longer to complete than the allotted game time, typically about two hours, because the clock is stopped while the play is not active. A limited number of time-outs are allowed, they are generally not longer then 100 seconds. Five players from each team may be on the court at one time.
Now to my last point, Michael Jordan
He joined 1984 the NBA team Chicago Bulls. He quickly emerged as a league star. After a Slam dunk contest he get his nichname „Air Jodan“ because he performed a slam dunk from the free throw line. 1991 he won his first NBA championchip with the bulls. And fallowed that achievement with titles in 1992 and 1993.
Michael Jordan joined the NBA team Chicago Bulls in 1984. He quickly emerged as a league star. After a Slam dunk contest he got his nickname „Air Jordan“ because he performed a slam dunk from the free throw line. He won his first NBA championship with the bulls in 1991. He continued his achievement with titles in 1992 and 93.
i would like to talk about ... hört sich besser an. he wrote down the basic rueles ... so he created an orange ball ...generelly they are not longer ... he got his nickname ...
also ich bin jetzt auch nicht soo der burner in englisch aber ich denke einige sachen hören sich so besser an ... kannst ja gucken. hoffe ich konnte dir helfen ;)
Ich sitze gerade vor dem laptop und fand diesen text echt super! ich muss nämlich auch eine presentation über basketball machen... wär es in ordnung wenn ich den text nehmen könnte? :D ich fnd ihn nämlich perfekt :DD