Englisch Präsentation über Amy Winehouse!
Hallo Leute ! Ich werde demnächst in Englisch eine Präsentation über Amy Winehouse halten . Ich benutze dafür PowerPoint. Könnt ihr vielleicht mal kurz durchlesen ,ob das in Ordnung ist oder ,ob da irgendwelche Grammatikfehler sind?
structure
- little facts
- family 3.career
- health 5.cause of death
facts
- first name : Amy Jade
- last name : Winehouse
- zodiac sign : Virgo
- birth date : 14/09/1983
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death date : 23/07/2011
family
- grew up in London with her mother,father and brother
- part of her family are russians
- many of her uncles were professional jazz musicians
- her grandmother Cynthia, was a singer
- her parents separated when she was nine
- lived with her mom
- stayed with her father and his girlfriend on weekends
-
2007 to 2009, she was married to Blake Fielder-Civil
career
- she received singing lessons from her grandmother
- With twelve, she changed to a british school for young artist's
- With fiveteen,she had to change the school for the 5th time because of disruptive behavior
- With sixteen,she left the school and played in a jazz orchestra
- With eighteen,she completed her first contract with Iceland records
- 2003,her first album ''Frank'' came out
health
- she was a drug addict,because of her husband
- Alcohol problems
- mental problems
- self injury
- suffered from bulimia and anorexia
- End of 2008, she separated from Blake
- got clean
cause of death
- she was found dead in her apartment in London when she was twenty-seven
- Reason : alcohol poisoning with 4.16 per thousand in blood
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Englisch, Präsentation
structure
**little** facts
family 3.career
health 5.cause of death
facts
first name : Amy Jade
last name : Winehouse
zodiac**al** sign : Virgo
birth date : 14/09/1983
death date : 23/07/2011
family
grew up in London with her mother,father and brother
part of her family **are**
russians
many of her uncles were professional jazz musicians
her grandmother Cynthia **kein Komma** was a singer
her parents separated when she was nine
lived with her mom
stayed with her father and his girlfriend on weekends
**Hier fehlt eine Präposition.** 2007 to 2009, she was married to Blake Fielder-Civil
career
she **received** singing lessons from her grandmother
**With** twelve, she changed to a **b**ritish school for young artist**'s**
**With** f**iv**eteen, she had to change (**---**) school for the 5th time because of disruptive **behavior (= AE; BE = behaviour)**
**With** sixteen, she left (**---**) school and played in a jazz orchestra
**With** eighteen, she **completed** her first contract with Iceland records
Hier fehlt eine Präposition. 2003, her first album ''Frank'' came out
health
she was a drug addict **kein Komma** because of her husband
Alcohol problems
mental problems
self injury
suffered from bulimia and anorexia
**At the e**nd of 2008, she separated from Blake
**got clean**
cause of death
she was found dead in her apartment in London when she was twenty-seven
Reason : alcohol poisoning with 4.16 **per thousand** in blood
Das Eingesternte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.
AstridDerPu