Hey,
Ich habe einen Songtext geschrieben und ich wollte einfach mal fragen was ihr davon haltet.
(Gerapt)
I wake up (hold up) I get to the mirror my eyes black (huh), itâs crazy I look like a killer
But I talked to god he said Iâd look normal, donât know what to say, but it wonât be formal
When you look in my eye, ayo donât deny
Am I the only person to see this shit, I look like a madman, though Iâm not gonna quit
(Gesungen)
I have bad blood going through my veins
I follow a bad god, it makes me insane
I love all the things that makes me hurt
Don't know how to say I miss the word
Lost my hope and try to die
Believe me I not a good guy
(Gerapt)
Right (yeah) I can be aggressive so you think Iâm expressive
Maybe I just do not know Iâm not good with words, not a pro
But donât call me a fool itâs just a simple rule, donât make this mistake
Or Iâll smack your head till the jaw will break
Howâs that? (damn) Itâs kinda perplex I look in the crowd who is the next
Man, I got a name just use it, offences are things I cannot admit
Not with a deeper sense, but just stay there, donât cross this fence
You say I act like a fool (fool) or my style (what) is not that cool
Yeah some say Iâm a lazy rat but Iâm being myself I donât care about that
Just turn around and talk to the paw was that too mean? Have I gone too far?
(Gesungen)
I have bad blood going through my veins
I follow a bad god, it makes me insane
I love all the things that makes me hurt
Don't know how to say I miss the word
Lost my hope and try to die
Believe me I not a good guy
(Gerapt)
Just go the fuck out of my head I canât stand this can I go to bed
Can I escape this world? Can I change this world?
Thereâs this voice (hey) calling for me, please tell me (no) am I finally free?
Just look at me as a person, not as a judge! Hostile faces watching me, it gets too much
Thereâs this cage (god) surrounding me the doors locked can I get the key?
Someone said (hmm) life is so beautiful because it has a meaning
Maybe you can only find it if you face your feelings
Since I was six these emotions are hunting me down
Itâs like pointing a gun at my head and pushing me into the ground
You say lifeâs a journey sometime it will turn
Okay cool but âhow long to travel?â is still to learn
AuĂerdem bin ich etwas stuck..Ich mĂścht den Text auf ein Beat rappen/singen und ich weiĂ nicht wie und was ich betonen soll und was fĂźr einen Beat ich nehmen soll.
Danke! LG