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New York New York is the largest city in the USA. It’s on the East Atlantic coast, half way between Washington DS and Boston. Over 8.2 million people live there. New York comprises five districts: The Bronx, Brooklyn, Manhattan, Queens and Staten Island. New York is also called „The Big Apple“. The major is Michael Bloomberg. In New York are many sights. For example: The Statue of Liberty and the Empire State Building. The Statue of Liberty isn’t only a landmark of the New York City, it’s much more. It’s a kind of symbol for America. The statue was designed by a famous French sculptor who was called Bartoldi. The Empire State Building was one of the first skyscraper in New York. The building is 381 meters high. It built in the year 1931. Today, 4.3 million people visit the Empire State Building every year. Other attractions are the Brooklyn Bridge, the Rockfeller centre in Manhattan and the Wall street. In New York are 200 museums, 150 theatres and more than 18 000 restaurants. New York is home to the headquarters of National Football League, Major League Baseball, the National Hockey League and Major League Soccer. The history of New York City: In 1626 New York was named New Amsterdam and 1664 New Amsterdam were renamed New York after King Charles 2 of England granted the lands to his brother. It has been the country’s largest city since 1790.
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ich korrigiere nun nur auf rechtschreibung und grammatik, den inhalt spare ich mir.
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New York is the largest city in the USA. It’s Hier fehlt ein Verb. on the East Atlantic coast, half way between Washington DS and Boston. Over 8.2 million people live there. New York comprises Hier fehlt eine Präposition. five districts: The Bronx, Brooklyn, Manhattan, Queens and Staten Island. New York is also called „The Big Apple“. The major is Michael Bloomberg. In New York Hier fehlt ein Wort. are many sights , for example the Statue of Liberty and the Empire State Building. The Statue of Liberty isn’t only a landmark of the New York City, it’s much more. It’s a kind of symbol for America. The statue was designed by a famous French sculptor who was called Bartoldi. The Empire State Building was one of the first skyscraper (Plural) in New York. The building is 381 meters high. It built (Grammar) in the year 1931. Today, 4.3 million people visit the Empire State Building every year. Other attractions are (---) Brooklyn Bridge, the Rockfeller centre in Manhattan and (---) Wall street. In New York Hier fehlt ein Wort. are 200 museums, 150 theatres and more than 18 000 restaurants. New York is home to the headquarters of Hier fehlt der Artikel. National Football League, Hier fehlt der Artikel. Major League Baseball, the National Hockey League and Hier fehlt der Artikel. Major League Soccer.
The history of New York City: In 1626 Komma New York was named New Amsterdam and Hier fehlt eine Präposition. 1664 Komma New Amsterdam were
*renamed HIer fehlt eine Präposition. New York after King Charles 2 of England granted (Zeit) the lands to his brother. It has been the country’s largest city since 1790.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,
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AstridDerPu
Ja, da sind einige Fehler drin.
Übrigens...wer soll der Bürgermeister von New York sein? Und wie hiess der Typ der die Freiheitsstatue entworfen hat?
Egal ?? Ich dürfte nur ca. 100 wörter haben, hab aber schon 250...
Nicht EINEN Fehler....
Nicht "major", sondern mayor.
Achten auf richtige Aussprache von Staten Island" - "Staten" NICHT wie "state" aussprechen!
There are many interesting sights in NY City.
Nicht "the NY City", sondern ohne "the".
a kind of a symbol of America (Besser: it's an American symbol)
Absatz nach "Bartoldi"
one of the first skyscapers..
It was completed in 1931.
Rockefeller Center (Im am. Englisch wird center geschrieben)
.. and Wall Street (ohne "the")
In NYC** there** are 200...
18,000
Absatz nach "Soccer"
Nach "1626" besser ein Komma
Satz ändern: In 1726 New York was still called New Amsterdam...
Hello this is very good. This is all true
Gar nicht. Das ist alles voller Rechtschreib-, Grammatik und inhaltliche Fehler.