NYC - dream Holiday - Referat-Verbesserungen
Hey ich muss in Englisch ein Kurzreferat(ca.1-2)halten über mein Traumurlaub doch leider fällt mir nicht so vieles ein,könnt ihr mir Verbesserungen oder Tipps geben.Wäre euch sehr dankbar:) Today I would tell you about my dream Holiday. My dream Holiday would bei in the USA in New York because New York is a nice and big city. You can do there many things like doing sightseeing or going shopping. In New York aren´t a Beach but it´s not bad. When I would be in New York, I would do a sightseeing tour to look at the Statue of Liberty,the Empire state Building,the Times Square and the Wall Street.. When I ´m finished with sightseeing I would go to the 5th Avenue and go shopping,because there are many opportunity. After the shopping I would go eating to one of the many restaurants.
Today I would tell you about my dream Holiday. My dream Holiday (s.o.) would bei in the USA in New York (Reihenfolge) (Ausdruck) because New York (Wiederholung) is a nice and big city. You can do there many things like doing sightseeing or going shopping. In New York aren´t a Beach but it´s not bad.
When I would be in New York, I would do a sightseeing tour to look at the Statue of Liberty,the Empire state Building, (---) Times Square and (---) Wall Street..
When I ´m finished with sightseeing I would go to (---) 5th Avenue and go shopping kein Komma because there are many opportunity. After the shopping I would go eating to one of the many restaurants.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
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welcher dieser kurzreferate über ist am besten?
hier die kurzreferate:
- Washington D.C. is the capital of the United States of America. There is also the government from the USA. The USA consist of 50 states and Washington the Distict of Columbia. Washington D.C. has got an exceptional position and so you can say it belongs to a state.It´s about 180 km” and has got about 575.000 inhabitans. The city is named Washington because the first president was George Washington. The river Potomac, Virginia and Maryland border Washington. There you can find about five universities, this are the famous ones: Georgetown University, established 1975, die George Washington University, established 1821 und die Howard University, established 1867. You also can find many museums, churchs, libarys, theatres and many famous monuments like the “White House”. All presidents of the USA lived in this house. The Capitol is the place for the congresses. This building should be the highest in Washinton D.C. Because of this there are no sky- scrapers. But there are two building which are higher than the Capitol. This is the Washinton Monument ( a monument for their first president) and the tower of the old Post Office. But these buildings where built before they said that the Capitol must to be the highest.
- Sights of New York New York has many sights, 500 galerys, about 150 museums, more than 100 theaters, many department stores and more than 17000 restaurantes. The most sights are at Manhattan for example the Fifth Avenue. It is one of the famousest streets of the world. The Figth Avenue is a symbole for the rich New York. There are a lot ofsights for example the Empire State Building, St. Patrick´s Cathedral, York Public Library and so on. Also there are many famouse shops for fashion and cosmetic for exemple Lacost, Armani, Versace and so on.The Empire State Building is on of the famousest sights in New York. It is 433 meters high and is on of the highest buildings in the world. It has 102 sticks. You can come with on of 70 elevators or by foot 1800 steps to the observation platform (aussichtsplatform). Every year came about 3 milion tourists to these buildin. When you appear you can see 100 kilometers far. The Brookly Bridge is the link from Manhattan to Brooklyn. Hundrets of athletes are going every day over it, but also walkers (spaziegänge) cars, busses and motorbiks. It is 1091 meters long. John Roebling had´the idea to build that brige. 1869 they begun to build it and end 1882. The highest building in New York were the world Trade Centers. The Noeth Tower was 417 meter high and the south tower was 415 meters high. But at the 11.September.2004 they were destroyed by a terrorist attack (terroranschlag). Two plains flew betweeen the 78. and zhe 84. stick in the towers then they fell down. 2.819 people died. Now there is the Ground Zero. The Statue of Liberty is 46,5 meters high. Frederic Auguste Bartholdi outlined (entwurf) it. It stands in Bedloe´s Island.
under dritte kommt gleich
Kann mir jemand beim korrigieren dieses englischen Aufsatzes über New York City helfen?
Kann jemand vil. sagen was ich verbessern könnte, bzw. was richtig was falsch ist
New York City
New York City is the largest town in the USA and has the nickname BIG APPLE. Over 8 million people live in New York and over a third was born outside the USA. New York has five boroughs: Manhattan, Brooklyn, Queens, the Bronx and Staten Island. The most important is Manhattan. Manhattan has lots of sights. One of these is Central Park. The Central Park are 5 km long and 800 m across. The Central Park was 1867 open. The Central Park has every Year 25 Million visitor. Popular sports in Central Park are jogging, biking, inline skating, football, baseball and walks. You can there picnic and relax, too. One other sights is Empire State building. It is the highest building in New York City and one of the highest in the world. The Empire state building is 381 meter high and whit the TV tower 449 m. It has 102 floors. New York City has lots of sight, too. The statue of liberty is one of them. It open 1886 and is 93 high. The Statue of Liberty is a symbol of freedom. Another sight is the Brooklyn Bridge. The Bridge is 1,8 km long and 26 m across. It is one of the oldest Bridge in New York. Manhattan and Brooklyn are joined with the Brooklyn Bridge. Everyday 100.000 cars drive over the Bridge. The Brooklyn Bridge was planned by the German American John August Roebling. A sight too is Chinatown. In Chinatown live 200.000 people. The most can little speak and read English. It is a City in New York where only Chinese live. There tourists like to buy souvenirs because it doesn’t cost much.
Kann mir jemanden diesen englischen Text berichtigen?
Hallo ich habe bald mündliche Prüfung in englisch und muss fünf Minuten etwas zu meinem Praktikum erzählen bis jetzt habe ich nur das hier :
I completed my Intership in the Kindergarten . I had to do start every morning at 8 o'clock and could go at 4 o'clock in the afternoon. On some days i was allowed to go earlier. I had to to everyday the same and after a short time it was very boring for me. I was sitting the whole day and played with the children. It was very loud in the group. Sometimes we went outside and played there. At the end of the day i had to clean the group and sweep the entrance hall. However now i know that i dont want to work in the kindergarten later. I'd like to have more variation in my job and new challenges and not everyday the same. At first i would like to continiue my education an then i would like to study
Was könnte ich noch dazu sagen , weil das sind keine fünf minuten die ich rede
hausaufgabe englisch zukunft planen
hallo könnt ihr bitte gucken ob es so in ordung ist ich sollte meine zuknft mi goimg to go planan. halo my name is clara schneider and i will tell you about my future plans
when in going to finish school im going to do abitur for 3 years. when i finish my abitur i plan to start medical study for 6 years. when im done with study,m going to have my own pracsis and my own hous . then im going to have my own family and im going to go to hawei for 5 month. after my holiday in hawei im going to buy my own car and then im going to go to new york and live thar whit my family.
Nochmal zu meinem Englisch referat!
Ich muss morgen ein englisch referat halten. Wollte euch mal fragen was ihr dazu so sagt. Ich hoffe jemand von euch hat die gedult den text zu lesen. Mein text ist:
New York is a state in the northeastern from th US. New York has an area of 141.299 square kilometers. With 19.306.183 million people is New York the third populous state in the US. From the 19.306.183 people 66.4% are white, 15.5 % are Afroamericans, 17.3% are Lateinamerikaner, 5.9% are Asians and 0.3% are Indians. The capital of New York is Albany. The largest City of New York is New York City. In New York City is the Statue of Liberty. This is the symbol of New York. The Statue of Liberty of New york is since 1886 in the service. Their official name is: ''Liberty Enligtening the World''. The inside of the 90-meters-high statue can be mounted, her head is hollow. Only since summer, 2009 visitors may have a look from the windows of the crown again. In Manhattan of New York is the Central Park. The Central Park is 4.07 km long and 800 meters wide. The Central Park is also called the green lung of New York.
Danke fürs lesen. Irgendwelche tipps oder verbesserungen?? Danke schonmal :D
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Klar, als würden die mich reich machen. Was sagt ihr dazu? Ich denke eher das die dann Geld damit machen.