NYC - dream Holiday - Referat-Verbesserungen

Hey ich muss in Englisch ein Kurzreferat(ca.1-2)halten über mein Traumurlaub doch leider fällt mir nicht so vieles ein,könnt ihr mir Verbesserungen oder Tipps geben.Wäre euch sehr dankbar:) Today I would tell you about my dream Holiday. My dream Holiday would bei in the USA in New York because New York is a nice and big city. You can do there many things like doing sightseeing or going shopping. In New York aren´t a Beach but it´s not bad. When I would be in New York, I would do a sightseeing tour to look at the Statue of Liberty,the Empire state Building,the Times Square and the Wall Street.. When I ´m finished with sightseeing I would go to the 5th Avenue and go shopping,because there are many opportunity. After the shopping I would go eating to one of the many restaurants.

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[AstridDerPu]

Today I would tell you about my dream Holiday. My dream Holiday (s.o.) would bei in the USA in New York (Reihenfolge) (Ausdruck) because New York (Wiederholung) is a nice and big city. You can do there many things like doing sightseeing or going shopping. In New York aren´t a Beach but it´s not bad.

When I would be in New York, I would do a sightseeing tour to look at the Statue of Liberty,the Empire state Building, (---) Times Square and (---) Wall Street..

When I ´m finished with sightseeing I would go to (---) 5th Avenue and go shopping kein Komma because there are many opportunity. After the shopping I would go eating to one of the many restaurants.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

AstridDerPu

Comments

[stylerin20]

Was ist da den genau falsch

[nightwish80]

@stylerin20

Und in new york gibt es Strand ;-) über new york kannst du sicher noch mehr erzählen.