Sind zu viele Wiederholungen im Text vorhanden?

Hallo Leute,

irgendwie habe ich das Gefühl , dass das Wort ,,reader" zu oft wiederholt ist. Jedoch kann ich keine Alternative dafür finden. Was sagt ihr dazu?

In order to guide the reader’s understanding, emotional acceptance and involvement in the story John Green chooses a first- person limited narrator which also allows eventual comparison and application to the reader’s real world existence.

The reader follows the course of events through the eyes of the central character, Miles, who tells his story in the first person (e.g.). In this way the reader experiences the story with a great deal of immediacy and is constantly informed about the protagonist’s thoughts and feelings (e.g.). Not surprisingly, he is emotionally strongly involved and very likely to identify with the narrator who is an ideal identification figure for the reasons mentioned above. The perspective is clearly limited and the story is told in a x way (e.g.).

To sum up, the narrator is a character in the story who presents the events to some extent in a subjective way and from a limited point of view. As a result the readers feel as if they enter the mind of Miles.

2 Antworten

Vom Fragesteller als hilfreich ausgezeichnet

jort93

05.12.2021, 15:50

Ein bisschen vielleicht, aber ist noch okay.

Man könnte an einigen Stellen vielleicht das Passiv nutzen.

Also z.B. anstelle von "In this way the reader experiences the story with a great deal of immediacy and..."

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"In this way the the story is experienced with a great deal of immediacy and one is constantly informed about the protagonist’s thoughts and feelings..."