Ist der text in Ordunung so wie ich ihn gemacht habe?
Des ist der englisch text über weiße Haie und ich weis nicht ob der so gut ist.
The great white shark
The great white sharks are the largest fish in the ocean, and sharks live in water temperature between 12°C and 24°C. They swim in the United states, south Africa, Japan, Australia and in the Mediterranean. Sharks live from 30-40 years and can be as long 6m and have a weigh up to 2000 kg. Females are generally larger than males. Adults are between 5m and 6m. White sharks are carnivorous and love to eat animals. They eat fish, tuna, smaller sharks, whales and dolphins. The teeth often break off when they hunt their prey. White sharks can hear and smell their prey from many kilometers away. They can even sink boats up to 10m long. Scientist made 2003 an experiment. They looked the way that a white shark swam. After 99 days it swam 11000 Kilometers. Scientist thought it must swam at least 5km/h. There are worldwide on average 3-7 unprovoked attacks by the white shark. 20% end in death. By most attacks used surfer and swimmer in dark clothing. Often near seal colony’s. Mostly it attacks from backside or underneath. Seldom is the person attack again or eaten.
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The great white sharks are the largest fish in the ocean.
Sharks need a water temperature between 12°C and 24°C. They swim in the waters of he United tates, South Africa, Japan, Australia and in the Mediterranean.
Sharks live up to 30-40 years and can be as long as 6m with a maximum weight of up to 2,000 kg. Females are generally larger than males. Adults measure between 5m and 6m. White sharks are carnivorous. They live from fish, tuna, smaller sharks, whales and dolphins. The teeth often break off when they hunt their prey. White sharks can hear and smell their prey from many kilometers away. They can even sink boats up to 10m long. In 2003, scientists undertook an experiment. They followed the way that a white shark swam. In 99 days it swam 11,000 Kilometers. Scientists presume it swam at least 5km/h. In average, there are worldwide 3-7 unprovoked attacks by white sharks. 20% end in death, mostly it attacks from backside or underneath. Seldom, the person is attacked again or eaten. Most attacks involved surfers and swimmers in dark clothing. Often near seal colonys.
Noch nicht ganz okay, schau selbst nochmal drüber..
Es gibt größere Fische als den weißen Hai.
Ist doch alles unter
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_white_shark
nachzulesen ;-)