Hat dieser Songtext Potenzial?

Hii bin 15 und probiere mich gerade im Songwriting..meine Lieblings-Artists sind Eminem und Billie Eilish weswegen dieser song auch eher in diesem style gehalten ist. Bin mir besonders bei diesem Song nicht so sicher weswegen ich auch auf kritische antworten hoffe ;)

(Verse 1) Shadows creeping up my spine Whispers echo in my mind Every breath feels cold and hollow Like I’m stuck in borrowed time Sometimes it feels like there's no way out

(Verse 2) Counting all the days I’ve wasted Tracing scars I can't erase Every thought’s a sinking anchor Pulling me to darker places

(Pre-Chorus) I scream, but no one hears A thousand voices drown my fears I reach for something real to hold But all I touch is ice and stone In my messy mind, nothing comes together

(Chorus) I feel numb in all this darkness Lost inside this endless silence Falling, fading into nowhere Is there light beyond this blindness? Or am I just a shadow sinking? Another voice that’s disappearing? If I scream a little louder, Will the echoes still remember?

(Rap Part 1) Running through the echoes of a past I can’t erase Chasing ghosts in empty spaces, trapped inside this cage Every memory’s a scar, every heartbeat feels so far And I wonder if the dawn is just another dying star

(Verse 3) Tired of pretending, tired of breathing Tired of the weight I keep on feeling I write the pain into my skin But even that won’t let me win

(Pre-Chorus 2) I scream, but it’s all in vain The silence knows me by my name I reach for something real to hold But the darkness takes control

(Chorus - Variation 1) I feel numb in all this darkness Lost inside this endless silence Falling, fading into nowhere Is there light beyond this blindness? Or am I just a shadow sinking? Another voice that’s disappearing? If I scream a little louder, Will the echoes still remember?

(Rap Part 2) One step closer to the edge, one step back into regret All these thoughts inside my head, are they real or just a threat? I try to fight, but I’m so tired Burning out, consumed by fire

(Bridge) But maybe in the distance There’s a flicker left to find Not a fire, not a sunrise But a glow that still survives

(Chorus - Variation 2) I feel numb but something’s changing Through the cracks, a glow is breaking Not salvation, not a promise But a voice that keeps me breathing Maybe I’m a shadow sinking But at least I’m still resisting If I scream a little louder Will the echoes still remember?

(Outro) Shadows whisper, but they’re fading Still, the cold is here to stay Yet I walk into the silence With a heart that won’t obey