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told your mom i’m doing fine,
she said “you always had that shine”
cut my bangs, dyed my soul red
left your texts forever unread
i laughed with friends ‘til half past two
not ‘cause i forgot about you—
just felt better without the weight
of saying “sorry i came too late”
[Pre-Chorus]i got a glow-up, got a grip
got receipts and glossy lips
your name? oh, i don’t say it—
except when i accidentally play it...
(leise, geflüstert)
“ugh... still on that playlist.”
[Chorus]i’m sorry—
for nothing really (kinda)
you were a storm, i made it sunny
i’m not bitter, just better
with a touch of maybe
you were the fall, i was the landing
it’s not love, just crash-standing
sry not sorry—
but still kinda.
[Verse 2]wore your hoodie as a joke
then cried in it (but no one spoke)
left your necklace on a train
felt like freedom, felt like pain
i talk big, i sing it loud
but whisper truths behind the crowd
said “i’m healed” with smoky eyes
but flinched when someone said your sign
[Pre-Chorus]i burnt our pics with glitter flames
made your memory into games
but the winner still feels small—
guess i didn’t win at all
(Hintergrundstimme, melancholisch)
“i’d still answer if you called.”
[Chorus]i’m sorry—
for who i used to be
the girl who cried too quietly
you broke me like a lyric
and now i sing too carefully
i’m shining, yeah, i’m fine and free
but i still shake at 3:03
sry not sorry—
but still kinda.
[Bridge – Beat drop, minimal Instrumental, fast Herzschlag-Tempo](gesprochen, fast wie Gedankenstrom)
i don’t miss you
i swear—
i don’t miss you
not the way you said i would
not the way i used to...
but maybe
maybe just a little
on mondays
on bridges
in silence
or in songs i write
just not tonight.
*(Hintergrund: „but still kinda… but still kinda…”)
[Outro – Happy, confident Sound, fast & hell, mehrstimmig gesungen]i got new boots, a better bed
new dreams, no space in my head
i laugh louder, fall less deep
and i finally get some sleep
(gleichzeitig, leise überlagert, verzerrt oder flüsternd)
“still think of you when the moon’s too bright”
“woke up missing your voice... again”
“maybe i’m not as fine as i said”
“but still kinda…”
(letzte Linie – alle Stimmen zusammen, wie ein bittersüßer Chor)
sry not sorry— but still kinda.
2 Antworten
Sehr geil, wirklich. Begleitest du dass Instrumentalisch? Vor allem den zweiten Vers und Pre-Chorus find ich supi
Kann ein paar Akkorde am Klavier spiele Gitarre und Geige heißt ne kleine Melodie kann ich schon zusammenbasteln Danke! <3
Ich finde den Text gut- es reimt sich und sagt etwas aus. Ich finde vor allem Verse 2 super; du solltest weiter daran arbeiten.