A summary of the history of New Zealand?
Hallo, Ich möchte gerne fragen ob mein summary Text gut geworden ist? Ihr könnt mir gerne bzw. Ich bitte drum mir paar Tipps zu geben um sie zu verbessern oder auch wenn ihr möchtet mein Text ganz zu verbessern (Wäre sehr dankbar dafür) Ich mache solche Aufgabe das erste mal also bitte ich euch nicht so gemein zu sein.
Summary:
The Text „History of New Zealand“ Deals With important and intersesting informations and facts about the History of New Zealand.
The First Text is about the Arrival of Maori. The informations are about that the first inhabitants in New Zealand were Maori, and that New Zealand is Valley Aotearora. Next informations are about the First Explorer to reach New Zealand and that he travelled in his waka Hourua (big canoe) from his Polynesian homeland, Hawaiki. In the third part they write about where is Hawaiki? They Write that hawaiki cannot be found on map. In the next part the writer writes about what maori eat? It says that maori eat Fish, hunted native birds, vegetables and also native food like berries.
The writer writes in the next Text about that In 1840 the treaty of waitangi was signed by maori and British reprensentatives and that in 1872 the wars over land had ended, moreover he also write in the next topic about maori culture it says that most maori lived in rural communities , in the 1970s the maori language became more important and that the first Officially bilingual school opened in 1978. All in all is the history of New Zealand very fascinating.
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Hallo,
schon in den ersten beiden Zeilen sind viel zu viele Fehler.
The Text (RS = Rechtschreibung) „History of New Zealand“ Deals (RS) With (RS) important and intersesting (RS) informations (Grammatik) and facts about the History (RS) of New Zealand.
Hallo,
information (= Informationen) ist im Englischen ein nicht zählbares (uncountable) Substantiv und ein Sammelbegriff (genauso wie z.B. furniture, advice und andere abstrakte Substantive).
Diese Sammelbegriffe werden im Englischen als Einheit begriffen und immer mit Verben und Pronomen im Singular verwendet.
Um information (= Informationen) zählbar (countable) zu machen und diese Einheit (Informationen) in Einzelteile aufzubrechen, z.B. von einer Information zu sprechen, sagt man a piece of information (eine Information), a piece of furniture (ein Möbelstück), a piece of advice (einen Rat(schlag)).
(Quelle: Green Line New Bayern 3 + 4 Grammatisches Beiheft)
Bitte überarbeite deine Summary noch einmal sorgfältig.
AstridDerPu
The Text "History of New Zealand" deals ( klein ) with ( klein ) important and interesting ( Rechtschreibfehler ) information ( das hat kein Mehrzahl, information ist ein abstraktes Nomen ) and facts about the history ( klein ) of New Zealand.
The first text is about the Arrival of Maori. The information ( wiederholteter Fehler ) talks about that the first inhabitants in New Zealand were Maori, and that New Zealand was called Valley Aotearora. The next information is about the First Explorer to reach New Zealand and that he travelled in his waka Hourua (big canoe) from his Polynesian homeland, Hawaiki. In the third part they write about where is Hawaiki. They wrote that Hawaiki cannot be found on ( the ) map. In the next part(,) the writer writes about what Maoris eat. It says that the Maoris eat fish, hunted native birds, vegetables and native food like berries.
The writer writes in the next text about the signing of the Treaty of Waitangi by Maori and British representatives in 1840 and that in 1872 the wars over land had ended. Moreover ( füge ein Komma hinzu ), he also wrote ( schon Vergangenheit ) in the next topic about Maori culture. It says that most Maoris lived in rural communities. In the 1970s the Maori language became more important and that the first officially bilingual school opened in 1978. All in all, the history of New Zealand is very fascinating.
Mein Tipps :
Nur diese folgende Wörter sind auf Englisch mit einem großen Buchstaben geschrieben.
- Das Pronomen " I "
- Erste Wort des Satzes
- Namen von Ländern, Städten, Sprachen und bestimmte Orten
- Namen von Personen
Im Passiv sind die Sätze mit einem Form des Verbes " to be " und dem Partizip II.
Zum Beispiel. - I called the driver > The driver was called.
( Ich rief den Fahrer an. - Der Fahrer wurde angeruft. )
Mit abstrakten Nomen ( ie. Information, knowledge ) gibt es kein Mehrzahl.