Hallo :)
ich wollte fragen, ob ihr diesen Text gut findet und was man noch umstellen, verbessern oder ganz raus lassen könnte.
Der Text ist eine Schulaufgabe, also ich möchte mich nicht wirklich bewerben, aber es soll trotzdem so authentisch wie möglich sein.
Vielen Dank!! :)
Dear Mr XY,
I am reaching to out to you regarding the posting for the Employment Lawyer
position I saw today on the uk.vacancypaper.com website.
I have a great interest in this position and would
appreciate your consideration as a candidate for the role.
With many years of professional experience and a good Knowledge of English (B2 Level in the Common European Framework and I also hold the Pearson LCCI Business English Certificate level 1) I wanted to set myself a new challenge and would like to work on international legal cases in the UK.
I am a fully responsive individual who has the self-confidence needed to reassure clients and provide them with professional counsel at all stages of a legal discussion.
My experience aligns well with the qualifications you are seeking at Search Consultancy in particular my role as Employment Lawyer, and am certain would make a valuable addition to your organization.
With more than 5 years' experience as Lawyer, my professional experience is equivalent to that of a Qualified 5PQE Level, which corresponds to the highest requirement of the job advertisement.
I am adept in strategy planning, case management, and courtroom litigation.
I have the ability to manage multiple time sensitive matters in a demanding, fast-paced and fluid environment. Furthermore, I can handle a wide variety of legal, contractual and compliance issues in a wide range of sectors and have the capacity to adapt to quickly changing legal environments.
I must also mention that I come from a strong academic background and have a very good first degree in Law along with other relevant qualifications.
I invite you to review my attached resume which will show you that am a capable and professional individual who is able to perform to the highest standards in areas.
Finally, do not hesitate to contact me to arrange an interview at a time and place of your choosing.
I hope that you will consider my application and look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
XY