Korekturlesen für mein Englisches Referat über New Delhi :)?!
ich hab ein Referat auf Englisch verfasst und muss die nächsten Tage halten. Kann mir einer Korrekturlesen damit ich mich nicht blamiere? Ich bin nicht der beste in englisch :/. Ach und ich muss nichts abgeben also Satzzeichen sind irrelevant :D.
Und damit die Admins nichts sagen können, brauche ich einen Rat was ich gegen die häufigsten Fehler tun kann, damit ich meine Realschulprüfung auch erfolgreich absolvieren kann :D.
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New Delhi - Presentation
Hi everybody. Today I’m here to talk to you about New Delhi. My presentation is divided into 3 parts. Ill start with some general information’s about the city. Then I’ll look at the history and finally I’ll talk about a few important sights. I will be glad to answer any questions that you may have at the end. I’d just like to give you some background information’s now. The capital city “New-Delhi” is located in the north of India and a very young City, founded in 1911. With about 17 Million Peoples, Delhi counts to the second biggest Cities in India after Mumbai. It’s very hot in Delhi. The average temperature is around 25 degrees but in the summer it goes up to 45 degrees. The combination of temperature and the emissions caused by the mass of the people is very badly. There is often smog alert in the summer months. New Delhi is 50% bigger than Berlin and at one square kilometre lives 6000 Peoples. In Berlin live only 4000 people per square kilometre. Delhi is divided into 2 parts. “Old”- and New Delhi. As it implies, New Delhi is newer than “old” Delhi. (I make this signs just because “Old” Delhi isn’t the real name. It only means Delhi and New Delhi) New Delhi was planned and built by the British. AND THIS leads me to my next point which is the history of Delhi. As you maybe know, India was, in the very beginning of the 20th Century, a colony of Great Britain. In the past, the King of Britain “Georg the 5th” and the Emperor of India decided the relocation of the capital from Calcutta to Delhi but there lacked the government district. So they built it and named it “New Delhi”. Today Delhi and New Delhi are so big, that they’re the same town. New Delhi is compered to Delhi very Geometric built, like New Your. So there aren’t so many traffic. In addition to the new government buildings, were sights build, which you have to see when you’ll be there. In New Delhi you can find a large number of excellent museums for history, art and crafts. There’re many historic buildings as well as the Jantar Mantar observatory.
(Show them the pictures on your Placate). If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask. Well that's it from me. Thank you all for listening; it was a pleasure to talk to you.
Danke fürs lesen und für alle Antworten :3!
Aaalso ich denke bei it was planed by nicht british sondern by Britain also nicht das Land sondern die Menschen also Briten nennt man so Und anstatt New York hast du new your geschrieben keine Ahnung ob das jetzt vom Handy aus war.. Und bei pls don't hesitate ich finde es klingt etwas zu förmlich du könntest auch zb sagen feel free to ask me something oder so . Kannst es auch so stehen lassen :)
Today I’m here to talk to you about New Delhi. My presentation is divided into 3 parts. Ill start with some general information’s (Plural s wird nie mit Apostroph abgetrennt; außerdem gibt es das Wort information nicht im Plural) about the city.
Then I’ll look at the history and finally I’ll talk about a few important sights. I will be glad to answer any questions that you may have at the end. (Diesen Satz solltest du umformulieren.)
I’d just like to give you some background information’s (s.o.) now. The capital city “New-Delhi” is located in the north of India and Hier fehlt etwas. a very young City, founded in 1911. With about 17 Million Peoples (= Völker; Menschen = people), Delhi counts to the second biggest Cities in India after Mumbai. It’s very hot in Delhi. The average temperature is around 25 degrees Komma but in the summer it goes up to 45 degrees. The combination of temperature and (---) emissions caused by the mass of (---**) people is very badly. There is often smog alert in the summer months. New Delhi is 50% bigger than Berlin and at one square kilometre lives 6000 Peoples (s.o.).
In Berlin Hier fehlt etwas. live only 4000 people per square kilometre. Delhi is divided into 2 parts. “Old”- and New Delhi. As it implies, New Delhi is newer than “old” Delhi. (I make
this signs just because “Old” Delhi isn’t the real name. It only means Delhi and New Delhi) New Delhi was planned and built by the British.
AND (kein Satzanfang) THIS leads me to my next point Komma which is the history of Delhi. As you maybe know, India was, in the very beginning of the 20th Century, a colony of Great Britain. In the past, the King of Britain “Georg the 5th” and the Emperor of India decided the relocation of the capital from Calcutta to Delhi but there lacked the government district. So they built it and named it “New Delhi”.
Today Komma Delhi and New Delhi are so big kein Komma that they’re the same town. New Delhi is compered (RS) to Delhi very Geometric built
kein Komma like New Your. So there aren’t so many traffic. In addition to the new government buildings, were sights build (RS), (Word Order) which you have to see when you’ll (Zeit) be there.
In New Delhi Komma you can find a large number of excellent museums for history, art and crafts. There’re many historic buildings as well as the Jantar Mantar observatory.
(Show them (Wem?) the pictures on your Placate).
If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask. Well Komma that's it from me. Thank you (---) for listening; it was a pleasure to talk to you.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.
Tipps und Wendungen zu englischen Präsentationen findest du hier: ego4u.de/de/cram
Hallo, nächste Woche habe ich meine Eurocom Englisch Prüfung. Könnte jemand den Präsentationstext auf Zeiten und Satzbau korrigieren?
Now im am going to tell you something about Dublin . First i want to give you some facts about dublin, secoundly I will talk about some sights in dublin. My third point is about the culture.
Dublin is the capital and also the biggest city of Ireland. It is on the east coast of the island Ireland. The clima in dublin is very interesting i think. They have about 130 days of rain per year. So imagine nearly every 3rd day is a rainy day, and i think thats a bit to much. Dublin is a financial center, there are some european banks like commerzbank or Lbbw. The city is also famous for his guinnes factory, wich is a beer factory who is known all over the world. Just in Dublin are about 666 licenced Pubs so thats a lot, the oldest of them is the ,,brazen head“ its there since 1198. Dublin is the centre of the pharmaceutical industrie and also of the IT sector. There are a lot European headquaters like Google Microsoft Facebook.
A very known area of Dublin is Temple Bar. There are a lot of famous pubs and also a lot of live music.An interesting sight is the Trinity college, it was established by Elizabeth I in 1592 and you can still study there.
A famous place in dublin is the Phoenix park its the largest urban enclosed park in europe and is more than twice the size of New Yorks central park. A very interesting area of dublin for me is the dame street its a main street and you don`t have to walk far till you are at Temple bar
or The Kaplan language school were i selfe went this summer. In this street is the Trinity college and a lot of shops and nice places, but there is a lot of traffic and the people often run.
The sport culture of Dublin is special. They do sports, other countries even dont know, they excist. For excample Hurling, its defenetly one of the fastest and most difficult sport in the world. They play it on a field that can be up to 145 meter long and 90 meter wide. The stick is called hurley and looks similar to a hockey racket. They need to shoot the ball who looks like a baseball in a goal. The goal is a mix between a rugby and a normal soccer goal. The rules are to difficult to explain now.
The most popular sport in Ireland is Gaelic football. Its like football but you are allowed to walk through the whole field with the ball in the hand, but in front of the goal you have to kick the ball in.
Maybe you now the most famous feast day in Irland, the St. Patricks Day. It commemorates the Irish bishop Patrick, who lives probably in the 5th century. He is the foremost patron saint of Irland. The St Patrick day is celebrated on the 17th of march with public parades and festivals, its common to wear a green attire and shamrocks. The St Patricks day is also celebrated in many other countries around the world.
Englisch-Hausaufgabe..Kann ich dafür eine 1 bekommen?(Englischen Postkarte schreiben)
I'm staying with my family in a big hotel near Antalya(Egypt).We swim every day in the warm 'Red Sea' and it makes very fun!The weather there is very great,all day shine there sun and without your glasses you can not leave the hotel.Yesterday was a big party near our hotel,I and my two nex friends(Violetta and Elodie)were there and it was very crazy.We trink a lot of cold drinks and a big tasty chocolat Cake.My brother was in the time at his new Girlfriend Juliette,she is very nice and i like her very!I know that it's at home al lot of rain and i don't miss Germany!See you at home.Love,Meli
------<Das war mein Englischer Postkartenbrief,ich hoffe ich fandet keine Fehler,aber trozdem fände ich es nett,wenn ihr mir einige Verbesserungsvorschläge geben könnt oder mich auch auf Englisch Rechtschreibfehler hinweißen könnt!
Englisch Text Korrigieren Bitte um Hilfe!
Hallo, Könntet ihr Bitte mein Englisch Text Korrigieren ???
Trip to London
My First Day in London
In the last summer holidays my family and I went to London. We went there by plane. After 4 hours we arrived. The airfield was very big. We drive to de Corinthia Hotel It looks wondeful. We visited many sights. On the first day, we went to the Hyde Park to picnic and we made a boat travel on the Serpentine lake. Subsequent, we visited the Madame Tussauds. There are a lot of pictures of the Waxworks of Madonna, Shakira etc. After that we went to the Buckhing Palace.The Buckhing Palace is the Queen's official and main royal London home, I found it boring. Later We went promptly to the Big Ben because the Big Ben looks Fantastically. Than we were on the London Eye. You got a great view of London from up there, because it's 135 m tall.
The ticket costs 29,95 £ for adults and 19,95 £ for children.25 people can had a seat in one basket.One rotation takes thirty minutes. Where it got dark we went to the London Dungeon but there was a long queue and then we went to the Dinner by Heston Blumenthal and ate there Chicken oysters, salsify, marrow bone & horseradish cream It was very nice.
The Service was Great and There was a event with many people and a Big stage with a famous singer. I think the Singer is very Good. Later we went to the Tower of London, The Tower of London is in the city centre. The ticket costs 18 £ for adults and 9.50 £ for children. Inside the fortress, you can see the Crown Jewels, armours and the menagerie.Than we went with a cab to the Corinthia Hotel and I wait of the next day.
Freue mich auf Antworten
Könnt ihr meine grammatikalischen Fehler korrigieren?
Könnt ihr gucken, ob es richtig ist?
Yes, I will call you! You know what, today I went to an artist meeting, so I met new people and they are asian too! They are really friendly and I had so much fun there! We drew some comics and the people will hang our drawings in the library!
The Mexican food looks very good! It's a bad thing, because I want to do a diet in this week. and you look amazing in this picture! So beautiful!
It looks very cold there! In Germany it's warm and the flowers are blooming!
By the way the visa are finally finished! I will send you the files!
Englisch Referat über New York City
ich mach für mein quali ein Referat über New York könnt ihr euch mal den Text anschauen und ihn verbessern oder noch tipps geben.
Today I will tell you about New York City. New York City is the largest city in USA. It is on the East Atlantic coast and over 8.2 million people live there in New York City. New York City comprises five districts: The Bronx, Brooklyn, Manhattan, Queens and Staten Island. New York is also called the Big Apple. It was founded in 1624. The mayor is Michael Bloomberg. New York´s financial center is the Wall Street, in the street are banks and the world's largest stock exchange, the New York Stock Exchange. The sights of New York, the Statue of Liberty and Empire State Building. The two sights I want to introduce you now.
The Statue of Liberty is not only a landmark oft the New York City, it is much more. It is kind of a symbol for America. The statue reaches from head to to 93 meters. The statue was designed by a famous French sculptuor who was called Bartoldi.
The Empire State Building was one of the fist skyscraper in New York. The Buildng is 381 meters high. It built in the year 1931. Today, 4.3 million people visit the empire state building.
That was my presentation on New York City. Do you have any questions?
Wer kann mir diese Postkarte( Postcard from New York) korrigieren?!
Hallo! Ich habe morgen eine Englisch Schularbeit und da ich`ne Postkarte aus New York schreiben muss, muss mir diese Postkarte korrigieren!!!!! DANKEE
Dear Can, I am in New York for a week. The weather is here very cold. The first day, it was not so cold than now.At monday(the first day) I was in the Fifth Avenue to buy some clothes.It was lots of peoples there!At tuesday I was in the Central Park in the south from Fifth Avenue.I played there footbal with my new friends.On wednesday and thursday I was at home because it was raining.And today, it is friday, I fixed up with my father to go to the cinema! I am very happy! I wait to your answer! Your best friend...!