Könnte jemand meine Summary korriegieren ,auf Gramatik, Rechtschreinung und auf die Kritikpunkte einer Summary, also nur das, worauf man ohne den orginal Text achten kann zB Zeit ,keine eigene Meinung ..... Danke :)
The chapter "The Meeting" from the novel "Go Well, Stay Well"written by Toeckey Jones in 1979 deals with the topic of racism, contempt and skepticism towards the dark in the past.It's about a meeting between a white and a black girl.
At the beginning of the chapter a white girl, her name is Candy, twisted her ankle while she walks in the city. A dark-skinned girl named Becky helps her. Candy is afraid that Becky will steal something from her, so she presses the bag against her.But Becky doesn't want to steal anything from her. Than Becky makes a joke and both laugh. Candy stopps laughing because people were looking at her with interest.Even Becky helps Candy, Candy stays skeptical . She finds it easier if a white person would have helped her . After than Becky helps Candy to go to the park where Candy sit down and relax a little bit.The black woman Becky proves that she doesn't want to steal from candy but only takes care of her. Candy slips down the bag, Becky could steal it and ran away, but she didn't. They start to be friends. Subsequentlythe the girls want to sit somewhere together.But Becky can't go into coffee because it's only for white people.Candy's father picks her up. He hardly pays attention to Becky, although candy points it out to him.The father even misinterprets it and pays Becky for being so friendly to his daughter. Becky rejects.
All in all, the text is about the prejudices against dark people, how they react to them and focuses particularly on Candys and Becky story.