Come in Shila Inhaltsangabe in Englisch so ok?
Hey Ihr lieben....
The story "Come in, Sheila" is about an australian girl who listens to the radio where she has heard some information about a sheep killing dingo and that the first person who is able to find the dingo and the hole in the fence, that should protect sheeps from dingos, will earn 10$
Sheila instantly leaves her house, jumps in the jeep and tries to find what's wanted to earn the bounty. After a few minutes of driving around in her car she starts worrying about whether the old jeep was the right choice to drive through the desert. After noticing that one of the tyres run flat she realizes that it wasnt. Luckily her car ends up where the hole in the fence and the dingo family is but just in the next moment she hears a loud shot and one of the dingos hit the ground. Sheila stands up because the noice scared her and the next shot hit her and she goes down again. After a long time a rescue plane, which was called by Sheilas worried mom, lands near Sheila who waves her hand and the noice frightens away one of the dingos who just began sneaking towards Sheila.
Ist die Inhaltsangabe so ok oder sollte ich was verbessern?? Bitte Vorschläge!! Dankeee :))
Zum ersten Absatz: Australian (groß schreiben) - a sheep-killing dingo (mit Bindestrich, sonst würde es heißen, dass das Schaf den Dingo tötet!) - the fence (KEIN KOMMA!) that IS SUPPOSED TO (nicht: should!)protect sheep (nicht "sheeps") from dingos will earn $ 10 (Dollarzeichen VOR Zahl). - Später mehr.
Teil 3: one of the tyres HAS run flat - realizes that it was not - AT that moment - one of the dingOES (mit -oes) - HITS the ground - .. because the noiSE - the next shot HITS her - by Sheila's (mit Apostroph) worried MOTHER (mum heißt ja "Mama") - noiSe - dingOES - Die Inhaltsangabe is aber insgesamt OK!
Teil 2: ....jumps INTO the Jeep - ... what HAS TO BE DONE to win the REWARD.
Kann das wer für mich in Deutsch übersetzen? Text steht unten?
John and Sarah are both trying to get the hurt Dingo out of the hole but then they see the bear again running up to them. Sarah runs away and shouts to John. But she can't see him anymore. She thinks that John may be in danger and so she turns back and after a few feet she only sees John on the ground. His body is full of blood and he faints. Sarah picks her best friend up and takes him back to the car, lays him down on the bank in the back and she gets into the car.
She pushes the brake and turns the key but the old car only cranks and doesn't want to start. She stopps turning the key and pulls the hand brake. Sarah turns the key again, holding the gas to the floor. The Plymouth cranks, then suddenly wants to start but then its cranking again. Sarah pulls the seat to the gas, then she goes as wide as much to the front of the seat, she claims her left arm behind the steering wheel so that she can't fall back into the whole seat if she wants to pump gas,
then she turns the key again and she pumps gas very fast. But the old car needs more gas to start completely. Sarah pumps it harder and faster when the car seems to wanna start, but she can't pump fast enough. Suddenly John's awake and Sarah helps him out of the car to go to street for tramping in hope somebody picks them up.
Englisch: Summary - so in Ordnung?
Es ist mir ziemlich von Bedeutung, ob die Zusammenfassung aktzeptabel ist. Verbersserungsvorschläge oder Verbesserungen erwünscht. Es geht um das Buch "The house of dolls" von KLETT. Danke
- It was strange but nevertheless they had to enter the building to finish their community action program. As they entered through the open front door, they saw thousands of dolls. Marin was astonished, when she saw all the dolls. They looked so real. When they met Mrs. Unsdorf, they tried to explain her something about the CAP, before Marin wanted to know how she could do something like that and how it could look so real (the dolls). The only thing Mrs Unsdorf wanted help from the kids was to bring a special tea. In the next day they brought the tea and the shop the dealer said that Hanna Jenks was the last one who bought the tea, too. She was one of the missing kids. On the way home, Marin and Jack were afraid of a dark figure. They couldn’t explain what it was. When Marin and Jack came again to Mrs. Unsdorf to give her the special tea, they met the dark figure again. It explained everything about Mrs. Unsdorf. She was a dangerous and wicked person, who had tried to turn him into a doll. He could escape before she finished her work. Marin and Jack were afraid of Bobby, because he had no eyes. They ran to Mrs. Unsdorf´s house to be in safety. They thought they were in safety. But it was a trap, because Mrs. Unsdorf closed the front door. She threatened to turn them into dolls, because they knew her secret. They both began to escape. But every door was closed. Marin noticed a few moments later that Jack was stunned. Mrs Unsdorf wanted to put a needle to Jacks eye to turn him into a doll. Marin wanted to save jack. She tricked Mrs. Unsdorf out and put Mrs. Unsdorfs own needle in her eye. The wind has blown the candles over. They house began to burn. On the next day Marin was at home. Jack explained, that Mrs. Unsdorfs burnt to the ground. They just found a doll, which looked like Mrs. Unsdorf. It even had a walking stick. -
Liebe Grüße, das brauche ich für meine Englisch Arbeit
Englisch Charakterisierung Text
Hey Leute wollte mal fragen ob das so stimmt, also ob ich das so schreiben kann... verbesserungvorschläge immer gerne gehört :)
She is a very good looking person and she has always a smile on her lips and rosy cheeks. Her blue eyes are very beautyful and her long brown-blond hair too. The person i am talking about is my best friend.
She ist the friendlyies person alive. Tanja is so sympathetic and when i need her she is her for me. She is so cool and my best friend since i was a little child. I often look at those people who call the person they met a few days befor their best friends. All i do is laught because i thinkt of this girl, who is just perfect for me and i know her for so many years. I am so happy to call her my best friend, because she listens to me when i am talking and i could tell her everything i am afraid of. My best friend is one of the most important people in my life. She teached me to be always myself because there are people out there, who loves me the way i am…
As a result, she is my other half and i am so lucky to know her.
Kann jemand meinen kurzen Englisch Text überfliegen und nach Fehlern suchen?
The main character of the short story „The swim team“ written by Miranda July in 2007, is named Maria, is 22 years old and lives alone in Belvedere, a small city, which is free from swimming pools. There is only a gas station and a market in Belvedere.
She would like to move, but she don’t have enough money (she don’t have a car or phone as well) and she don’t like to ask his parents, although she write every week to them. Her life is very boring (line 9-11), because she have nothing to do and no friends until she listens to a talk of three 80-years-old-persons, called Elizabeth, Kelda and Jack Jack, who can’t swim but they want to. So she suggests to teach them in swimming, because she learned in High School, and later she gives „swimming lessons“ to them twice a week in her living room with bowls of water and a kitchen floor. At the beginning of the story Maria is a little bit shy, she don’t like to speak with other people and starts tob e exited. (line 35-37) But at the end of the story Maria is a strong and purposeful coach, who dares to talk and to say what to do. (line 97-98) These swim lessons gives Maria something to do and she miss the lessons later.
hab mal grad ne Summary von einem Text aus meinem Buch geschrieben.
Um ehrlich zu sein, war ich nie der beste darin, ich bin jetzt eig. auch richtig am verzweifeln wieso mir einfach nichts einfällt um ne gute Summary zusammen zu fassen..
Vorab gesagt, der Text ist sicherlich nicht der Burner.... also bitte habt mitleid mit mir wenn es auch der größte schei** ist, ich bin auch schon am arbeiten, sodass es sich verbessert.
Aber whatever.. hier ist der Text...
The text "Maddy Johnson´s double life" written in the year 2000 in London, by an unknown Autor, deals with a girl who suffers from bulima and how she try to life with it. Maddy Johnson a attractive and young women, who is popular in her community has a double life. In the public she is a normal person but in the secret one she suffers from bulimia. If she see a restaurant she cant control herself, she dont want to go in but she have to do it. As she goes in the restaurant she buy something big to eat with a bad feeling, because she is ashamed if somebody see her eating. When she finish her eat she feels dirty and hates herself.She goes to the toilet to threw up her food. At the moment when she leaves the toilet a women speak to her if all is ok and if she want help from her. She gives the phone number to the girl and asks her to call when she need help.
Verbesserungsvorschläge (Englische Präsentation)?
Muss etwas vorstellen. Bitte nur auf Grammatik und Übersetzungen achten und evt. paar Verbesserungsvorschläge:)
Today I want to present the film "Honig im Kopf" of Til Schweiger. The film is about an old man called Amandus who has the Alzheimer-disease. Because of the disease his son called Niko wanted him to move in its house mear Hamburg. Nikos daughter called Tilda didn't know anything about Alzheimer and asked a doctor. The doctor explained it her and then she asked him how she could help Amandus. The doctor answers that it's good for him to see old known places. Amandus often was in Venedig together with his wife. So Tilda decided to drive with him to Venedig in the next morning. Her parents just know that they both are in Venedig because of a message. When they got the message they drove to Venedig as fast as they can and searched them everywhere. They found them in a hotel and drove back home. About 1 year later Amandus died. This was my prasentation. Do you have any questions?