Come in Shila Inhaltsangabe in Englisch so ok?

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Zum ersten Absatz: Australian (groß schreiben) - a sheep-killing dingo (mit Bindestrich, sonst würde es heißen, dass das Schaf den Dingo tötet!) - the fence (KEIN KOMMA!) that IS SUPPOSED TO (nicht: should!)protect sheep (nicht "sheeps") from dingos will earn $ 10 (Dollarzeichen VOR Zahl). - Später mehr.

dingOES

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Teil 3: one of the tyres HAS run flat - realizes that it was not - AT that moment - one of the dingOES (mit -oes) - HITS the ground - .. because the noiSE - the next shot HITS her - by Sheila's (mit Apostroph) worried MOTHER (mum heißt ja "Mama") - noiSe - dingOES - Die Inhaltsangabe is aber insgesamt OK!

Ein Dank an ALLE, die hier geholfen haben, wäre doch wohl zu erwarten, meisnt Du nicht auch?

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@Bswss

Danleschööön, ist zwar ein bissien später aber ich war gestern kaum zu Hause!!

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Teil 2: ....jumps INTO the Jeep - ... what HAS TO BE DONE to win the REWARD.

Englisch: Summary - so in Ordnung?

Es ist mir ziemlich von Bedeutung, ob die Zusammenfassung aktzeptabel ist. Verbersserungsvorschläge oder Verbesserungen erwünscht. Es geht um das Buch "The house of dolls" von KLETT. Danke

  • It was strange but nevertheless they had to enter the building to finish their community action program. As they entered through the open front door, they saw thousands of dolls. Marin was astonished, when she saw all the dolls. They looked so real. When they met Mrs. Unsdorf, they tried to explain her something about the CAP, before Marin wanted to know how she could do something like that and how it could look so real (the dolls). The only thing Mrs Unsdorf wanted help from the kids was to bring a special tea. In the next day they brought the tea and the shop the dealer said that Hanna Jenks was the last one who bought the tea, too. She was one of the missing kids. On the way home, Marin and Jack were afraid of a dark figure. They couldn’t explain what it was. When Marin and Jack came again to Mrs. Unsdorf to give her the special tea, they met the dark figure again. It explained everything about Mrs. Unsdorf. She was a dangerous and wicked person, who had tried to turn him into a doll. He could escape before she finished her work. Marin and Jack were afraid of Bobby, because he had no eyes. They ran to Mrs. Unsdorf´s house to be in safety. They thought they were in safety. But it was a trap, because Mrs. Unsdorf closed the front door. She threatened to turn them into dolls, because they knew her secret. They both began to escape. But every door was closed. Marin noticed a few moments later that Jack was stunned. Mrs Unsdorf wanted to put a needle to Jacks eye to turn him into a doll. Marin wanted to save jack. She tricked Mrs. Unsdorf out and put Mrs. Unsdorfs own needle in her eye. The wind has blown the candles over. They house began to burn. On the next day Marin was at home. Jack explained, that Mrs. Unsdorfs burnt to the ground. They just found a doll, which looked like Mrs. Unsdorf. It even had a walking stick. -

Liebe Grüße, das brauche ich für meine Englisch Arbeit

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