Englisch Text richtig?

Hallo

ich hätte da eine bitte könnte sich das jemand durchlesen und mir sagen was ich verbessern könnte. Ich brauche diese texte für ein Handout. Ich weiß bloß nicht was ich da noch mit reinschreiben könnte somit frage ich hier um Rat. Und es wäre nett wenn sich jemand die Englische Sprache angucken könnte ob alles richtig ist :D (ich entschuldige mich jetzt schon mal für mein schlechtes Englisch :(......)

The Big Three

The Big Three are big car companies in the 1924. They were the biggest in America. Between the companies there was a constant competition, because the one company want to be better than the others, they want better revenues than the others. The biggest company was the Motor Coporation they earn 1,07 Mrd Dollar. Ford Motors earn only 1,125 Mrd Dollar. The smallest company was the Chrysler Coporation they earn 441 Mio. Dollar. Thus won Ford Motors this competition. This competiton between this comanies was really good for the econmy of America. This is the reason why it is called The Big Three. Detroit was also called Automobile industry city because there were the biggest car companies.

Black Thursday

In the past there was a big stock market crash. The reason in this time was the Daw-James-Index. This stock price go really high in a short time so many people bought this stock. But many investors became nervous so they sell this stock really fast. The result of this sales was that many ionvestors were in debt. This is the reason why the day is called Black Thursday because it happend on this day. This was the beginnig of the gret depression.

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