Richtige Satzstellung und Formulierung bei den englischen Sätzen?

Ich habe folgenden Sätze in eigene Worte übersetzt:

Wie sie meinem Lebenslauf entnehmen können, habe ich in der Zwischenzeit erste praktische Erfahrungen auf diesem Gebiet im professionellen Umfeld sammeln können.

As you can gather from my CV, I have gained practical work experience in this field within a professional environment in the meantime.

Ich hatte während meines Praktikums bei der xyz GmbH erste Berührungspunkte mit diesem Thema/dieser Materie.

I first got in touch with this topic during my internship at xyz GmbH.

Ist des so wie es der Engländer im Business Englisch ausdrücken würde?

1 Antwort

earnest

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch, Sprache

17.09.2021, 18:24

Nr. 1: Des ist astrein formuliert, finde ich.

;-)

Bei Nr. 2 würde ich "familiarize" nehmen; das klingt nicht so oberflächlich we "get in touch" (was man zumeist mit Menschen tut).

Viel Erfolg!

Gruß, earnest

hier ist der Aufsatz:

Every pupil in class 9 had to do an internship in January. Because of this I will comment the statement "Internship in class 9-important?" in the following text.

Doing an internship in class 9 has positive such as negative aspects.

Firstly the pupils get work experience. For example they learn how to apply for a job or to work in a company. These are very important qualifications you need in the world of work. Besides the pupils get a good overview about the different jobs and companies.

Secondly the teenagers become more independent. They had to do many things like going to the company or buying food in the break by their own. These are qualifications you do not learn in school.

Thirdly the pupil can try out their "dream-job". Maybe after their internship they notice that this job is not a good future job.

On the other hand there are negative aspects, too.

In my view many pupil cannot do an interesting job in their internship. Some companies only choose older pupil. So they often do jobs like cleaning a room and do not learn anything, which is important.

Another negative aspects is that, the pupils lose two school weeks. In this week's they could learn some usefully things, they need in the Abitur. Besides the in E1 there is a second internship.

All in all I think an internship is very important, but the pupil need only one in E1.

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englische bewerbung für klassenarbeit klasse 9?

Hallo miteinander İch schreibe am Donnerstag eine Klassenarbeit und wir sollen auf englisch eine Bewerbung schreiben. Ist das den korrekt so weit? Gramatikalisch und ob die zeit stimmt.

Dear mr/ mrs

I'm writting to apply for a work experience placement at your firm next summer. I read your advertisment in the newspaper last week.

I am 16 years old and I have a good level of English but would like to improve my spraking kills. Currently I attend the 9th grade of a secondary school and when I leave school I plan to study ...

I'm a hard-working friendly and a fast learner. I have also worked in a sports shop so I have experience in serving people and working in a team. Please find my CV with this letter. Yours sincerely

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Bewerbungsschreiben Pflegepraktikum auf Englisch- HELFT MIR BITTE!

Also, ich bewerbe mich per Internetbewerbung um einen Praktikumsplatz in der Pflege in Großbritannien. Könnt ihr bitte mein Anschreiben durchlesen und mir Fehler oder Verbesserungsvorschläge sagen? Wenn jemand Vorschläge zur Kommasetzung hat, immer her damit ;) !!! Das wäre ganz lieb und würde mir sehr weiterhelfen!! Ich habe folgendes geschrieben:

Dear …, After having studied Medicine at the XXX University of XXX for one semester, I am planning to supplement my studies and gain more experience in the nursing sector. Via Internet I found out about the XXX hospital and its patient-friendly atmosphere which seems very appealing to me. Thus, I am writing in order to apply for a 30-day nursing internship in your hospital from XXX to XXX . I have already gained practical experience in my subject, not only during several first-aid-courses I lately attended, but also during university classes: I study in a reformed degree course, which means that we work directly with patients from the first week on and therefore gain more practical experience than students who study Medicine in a classic program of study. I am a very open-minded and friendly person who likes to help and support other people. Therefore, I would like to get an insight in the daily work of nurses. Of course I am prepared to work hard and constantly give my best. I am very interested in exploring different countries. Thus, I apply for an internship abroad as I know that tolerance and openness are necessary for every prospective doctor. The English language will be no problem for me as I have learned it for more than nine years and even took the English advanced-course in high-school which I completed with constant straight As. Furthermore, I worked on my language skills during a language study travel to London in 2009. Of course I would pay for the internship in case of an acceptance. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, XXX

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Anfrage für Praktikum auf Englisch/Tipps?

Dear Sir/Madam

My name is xxx, I am 17 years old and I live in the south of xxx. I am writing to inquire about possible opportunities for an internship in summer 2017 in your catering sector.

As you can see from the enclosed CV, I already worked in a hotel in Ireland for 3 months. I broadened my horizon and my character and could improve my skills in all areas. Now I would like to gain further experiences abroad.

Currently I am attending 4th year of the xxx school with the key course element international management in xxx.

I believe I possess the appropriate characteristics and qualifications to work in your hotel. Sense of responsibility, the ability to work in a team and open-mindedness are my strengths.

Please do not hesitate in contacting me if you have any questions.

I am looking forward to your reply with great interest, hoping that I will be given the chance to work within your team next summer.

Very sincerely yours xxx

Ist dieses Anschreiben zu standardmäßig? Könnt ihr Fehler finden oder habt ihr Tipps für mich. Soll an ein Hotel in Lissabon gehen. Vielen Dank schon mal :)

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bitte hilfe bei bewerbung auf englisch!

ich schreibe bald ne englischarbeit über praktikum, bewerbung schrieben usw.. hab mal ne bewerbung geschrieben, wäre echt nett wenn ihr mir sagen könntet ob ich was falsch geamcht habe..danke schonmal :)))

Application for a work experience placement in summer 2012

Dear Mr ....

I am writing to apply for a work experience placement with your firm next summer. I read your advertisement in the newspaper last week.

Currently I attend the 9th grade of a Gymnasium and when i leave school i plan to study social pedagogy. As you will see from the enclosed CV, i already hab a placement for a work experiece in a kindergarden last summer, so i have some knowlede of educating and helping at problems yet. Besides my side job is babysitting, which goes in this direction, too. This placement would give me the opportunity to extend my knowledge of working with kids. Should you require further information about my qualifications i wouls be pleased to quote references.

I hope very much that you are able to offer me a placement. I would be very motivated to help you and i would do my best to help you. Thank you for reading this application. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely .....

Encl. CV

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Englisch Bewerbungsschreiben?

Hey Leute, ich schreibe morgen eine Arbeit in Englisch und wollte mal wissen was ihr von der Bewerbung haltet, was ich verbessern sollte,usw.

Das ist frei erfunden was die Adressen usw angeht.

                                                       March 5, 2014

Max Muster Musterstraße 44 12345 Musterhausen Tel.: 01234/56789 Email: musterMax@abc.co.uk

Jennifer O`Rourke Automotive Services Ltd 103 Selsdown Drive London E14 9LA UK(United Kingdom)

Dear Ms Jennifer O´Rourke,

Application for a bilingual assistant

I saw your advertisement for a bilingual assistant on the website of www.unitedKINGdom.co.uk and I should like to apply for this position.

From 2004 to 2009 I attended Mustergesamtschule in Musterhausen comparable to comprehensive school, where I obtained my A-Levels. I successfully did a traineeship for a secretary with the company MusterBoat GmbH, which is a small and modern company that produce boats and export them.

Since 2009 I have been working with MusterBoat GmbH as the secretary. During my traineeship with MusterBoat GmbH I gained experience in talking English or German with customers and running a busy office. This traineeship gave me considerable skills which I want to use and improve for the position advertised.

I have a good command of English. I had nearly 8 years of English at school and I have also done a special examination for commercial professions. After completing my traineeship I was able to improve my command of English by speaking directly to the customers. I also have had French for 5 years in school, that gives me the opportunity that I´m able to speak the three languages, needed for the bilingual assistant.

I enclose my CV and certified translations of my certificates. I should be pleased to provide names of the referees if required.

I should be grateful if you would consider my application. I would very much enjoy the challenge of working for a company in London.

Yours sincerely

Max Muster

Enclosures

Ich hoffe ihr könnt mir ein paar konstruktive Antworten liefern.

MfG Cataracs

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Ist meine Vorstellung auf Englisch so in Ordnung?

Ich hab meine mündliche Prüfung im Fach Englisch und wir sollen uns am Anfang vorstellen. Doch ich weiß nicht irgendwie klingt es bei mir ziemlich schlecht und passt auch gar nicht vom Zusammenhang her ich wäre euch für eure Hilfe sehr dankbar.

Good Morning. First of all I'd like to introduce myself. My name is <Vorname, Nachname> and i am 19 years old. I was born on the 6th of May 1992 in . I live in in a house with my parents and two sisters. I attends the Berufskolleg II and my favourite subjects at school are Büromanagement, Bildende Kunst and Englisch. One of my sisters is seventeen years old and attends this school, too. The other one is fourteen and attends the Realschule in . My father works as a joiner and my mother is a housewife. In my freetime I like going to the fitness centre, reading books or going out with my friends. After finishing school I have to do a half year practical training, because I want to study next year Kommunikationsdesign in .

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Morgen mündliche Englisch Realschulprüfung, Text Korrektur

Hallo, ich habe morgen meine mündliche Realschulprüfung. Wir haben heute die Aufgabe für die Kurzpresentation(2-3min.) bekommen und wollte eure Meinung wissen. Es geht um ,,My Dream Job,, Hier ist der Text: My dream job Now I will tell you something about my dream job. My dream is to be a police officer because the uniform gives me strength. When I was a child I always wanted to arrest criminals to secure the city. I had three weeks internship at the police station and it was very interesting. So I can imagine to work as a cop. There are many departments in this job. Once the police protection, second the criminal police and finally the district police. The police protection has many interesting activities. They are called to inserts, to traffic accidents but anyway it is very dangerous because they arrest criminals. The criminal police is also an interesting department. They consult witnesses, they consult victims of crime, write reports and they are civil. That’s very important so they are not recognized by the criminals. The district police is something for older cops because they don’t have much action. They attend schools and speak with the pupils. That is not a thing for me. I want to work more at the police protection because it is very interesting. In this job you can earn about 2000 € a month. But it also can increase. That was my presentation about my dream job.

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Ist meine Bewerbung gut oder soll ich sie nochmal überarbeiten?

Application for the position as an ice cream seller:

Dear Mrs Müller,

Across their company I came with great interest. I came up with the idea of doing an internship myself to increase my pocket money. I particularly like your orientation and image in this industry, so I see you as a very interesting employer. I have been following your development in the media for a long time and therefore believe that I can fit well into the company.

I am a very determind and friendly person. I am very enthusiastic on the subject area of gastronomy. I think I fit perfectly into your company, because I have a bit of foreboding, because I often help out in my aunt’s kiosk.

Could I convince you with my Application? I am available to get startet at the earliest as possible time. I will be very happy to give you an in-depth impression in a personal conversation.

I look forward to your inviation.

Yours sincerely

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Kann das Bitte jemand korrigieren?

Hello Alex,

How are you? I am fine.

You asked me about online learning at my school and you get an answer.

Our online learning is divided into 2 groups, one group has online lessons and the other group has lessons at school. Every morning we have Klassenrat ( In this lesson we gather and disco how the day will go ). Online learning is very difficult and unmotivated for the students, on the other hand, learning at school is much better. The classes start at 8 a.m. and end at 3 p.m. My opinion on online learning is a bad idea because students learn very little when if there is no online learning, the number of infections ( Covid-19 ) increases that is also a not good thing.

I hope I could help you and that you will like my email.

yours,

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Bewerbungsschreiben Englisch Schule

hier ist mein covering letter könnten sie mal einen blick drauf werfen und Verbesserungsvorschläge und Fehler korrigieren

                                meine Adresse

Adresse Bewebung

Application for a position as au pair Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply for a position as au pair, as advertised on your website.Please find attached a copy of my CV. Why am I applying for an job as au pair in England? I am currently in year 9.Next autumn there is an oppurtunity from my school of going abroad for 1 year and I dont want to miss that chance so i want to improve my language further and gaining during that time practical experience.My 5-years-old brother has given me experience of dealing with childrens(childcare).I consider myself a suitable candidate for this position because I am an enthusiastic worker and I am able to manage organizational tasks independently.I expect that u want me to do tasks like washing the dishes, cleaning the house, cooking for the childrens,get the children ready for school and bring them to bed which also includes my responsibilities. There is one downside in your advert ,the driving licence.I dont have a driving licence because I am allowed to drive independently as recently I am 18 years-old.But to get along with that i can take the public transportation

I would welcome the opportunity to discuss the job vacancy with you at an interview. I can be contacted by E-mail (see details at the top of the letter).

Yours sincerely

Enclosed: CV

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Englisch Mündliche Prüfung Text?

Servus;),

Ich bräuchte mal die Hilfe von den Englisch-Experten hier!;)
Leider bin ich eine echt Null in Englisch!
Unzwar habe ich bald eine mündliche Prüfung und ich muss im ersten Teil etwas über meine Zukunft bzw. insbesondere meinem Berufsweg erzählen. Ich habe schon einen Text geschrieben und würde mich freuen wenn ihr mal drüber lesen könnt und meine Grammatik verbessern könntet bzw. etwas helfen;) Oder mir irgendwie Tipps geben, damit das nicht so langweilig klingt (Ich habe z.B oft "I would like" stehen...kann man das durch ein anderes Wort ersetzten?) ! Danke:)

Hello, my name is ... and I am ... years old.
I want to tell you how my future will look. After the tenth grade, I would like to go...-> (Übersetzungshilfe: in die Oberstufe und anschließend ein gutes Abitur machen. :D?).
Then I would like to study chemistry on the University of ...
I want to study ..., because ...
After graduation I would like to write a doctoral thesis.
Then I would like to work as a chemist at (or by/with???) ... or ...
This summer I also had an internship/work experience there.
Besides, I still want to travel, but I do not know exactly where.
It would be important for me not to give up my hobby because I have been playing football in the club since 2012.
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Was kann ich sonst noch sagen? Der Vortrag darf nicht länger als 3 Minuten sein! :D
Danke euch;)

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Bewerbung auf Englisch- könnt ihr die korrigieren, verbessern und tipps geben? :)

Application for a work place in summer 2013

Dear Mr Miller

I am writing to apply for the holiday job that was advertised in the 'Daily News' yesterday for helpers at your holiday camp in Spain thid summer.

When I leave school I would like to find a career working with children I would be available to work for you for the whole german summer holidays (xx.xx. - xx.xx.xxxx). Last year, I was employed in a summer camp in Italy and I really enjoyed it, so I have already some knowledge of the job. Also I have always helped my parents with my two younger sisters having much fun. I learnt from thid about children's behaviour and how to handle then. Having learnt English at school for seven years, I would have no language problems.

I hope very much that you are able to offet mr a holiday job. I would make myself as useful as possible. Thank you for reading this application. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

Unterschrift (xxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx)

Encl. CV

Danke! :) Die Absätze müsst ihr euch dazu denken, bin mit handy on... Klappt dann nicht... ;(

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Englisch, Argumentation, Verbessern?

Hallo, ich schreibe morgen eine Arbeit und habe schon ein paar Argumentationen geschrieben. Heute hat meine Lehrerin einen Hinweis auf das Thema gegeben: Volunteer work. Ich habe dann einfach mal eine Argumentation dazu geschrieben. Wahrscheinlich kommt nicht nur Volunteer work dran, aber es wäre toll, wenn ich schon eine gute Grundlage habe. Ich weiß das ich bestimmt ein paar Grammatische Fehler habe.

Volunteer work is a important for the poor, disadvantaged groups or teenagers (youth centre) or generel the society, but also people don't like this kind of work, why? Is volunteer work useful? Mostly volunteer work deal with people, for example you ask for donation, like money, eat or clothes. Subsequently people don't like this question, because they think its annoying or maybe the organisation is not serious. In the past some organisations has use the money for his own and now people aren't sure, if the organisation approved or serious. Thats why you can feel depressed, because you do this at your free time and you are not paid for your work. On the one hand, people don't like your work, but on the other hand you can help the society, also when some people don't honor your work, but it gives also people, who think thats a good job and honourable. Furthermore you can feel good by your own and you can say, you help people who needs help and don't see away (nicht weg sehen?). Additionally you can gain experience for a job or the life. In a CV it looks very good. So also your character can be better, for example you know the real problems, like no food or money to live. Then you see, thats your problems are nothing in comparison with this problems. Finally in my opinion volunteer work is important and I do this also and when somebody say something bad about your work. Ignor this! There more people who like it and especially the people who need your work.

Ich würde mich auf eine Antwort freuen und ich weiß eure Mühe zu schätzen, wenn ihr es korrigiert und mir vielleicht ein paar Tipps geben könnt. Ich hoffe es antwortet noch jemand heute. Aber trotzdem danke!

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