postkarte englisch korregieren?
also ich muss über die ferien eine postkarte schreiben die benotet wird könnt ihr mir sagen ob ich etwas anders formulieren sollte oder ob da fehler drinne sind (grammatik, rechtschreibfehler)
Dear Mrs. Weinbrecht, its very fantastic here in London. I love the city, because there are many interestings sights to see. Here it is always sunny and very hot. My Family and I stayed in a little, but pretty hotel for one week. Today its the last day... Im very sad, I want stay here :( In this week we visited a lot of sights. First my Family and I were in the London Eye. Its very big and high. We waited for the ride for 40 minutes. Than we were at the Buckingham Palace. The Palace is very nice, but we couldnt see the queen. After that, we went to the Science Museum. There we could learn a lot. Wen you are at London, you must go to Madame Tussaunds. It was very funny, because I took many pictures with the stars. Today we will go to St. Pauls Cathedral. This was a exciting week. I hope you are good. See you soon, Lena.
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it's always sunny here würde ich schreiben anstatt here it's always sunny and hot
Ich würde versuchen anstatt immer "were" auch mal was anderes verwenden zB we went ... saw... visited... explored oä Ansonsten gefällt es mir gut! :D Ach ja und das komma vor because musst du weg machen im englischen setzt man da kein komma :) Ich hoffe ich konnte dir weiterhelfen!
.... many interesting sights to see and visit passt besser finde ich
this week we visited a lot of sights (nicht in this week)
I hope you are well nicht good :) das wars :D